XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hunting A Hydra page 1]

Nice Details

So this was pretty good, I really like the details on this like the "SHINE" on the spear and the design on the character itself and this was sort of like a "COMIC" and was kind of cool a nifrty comic full of color and some really nice view points, I would suggest some frames and or borders on this though something to relate to the comic itself, so nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest some frames and or borders on this though something to relate to the comic itself

~X~

[Inktober #2]

Not bad

I see you've not submitted this one for voting, but I think it is pretty neat as it is. I do like your orange color use and the eyes on these characters are very cute and unique. I like the fact you have an orange under them going with your theme here of oranges. I think the white space is a bit unneeded but you can always add more background later to your work. I know you've done vector backgrounds before so it is nice to see when you do those. I think next time add a bit more and it will be a fully completed piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More additions to this and less white space

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Yeah there's quite a few of these I didn't really feel qualify as portal quality. :) But thank you. These are all Inktober doodles after all so I haven't spent a tremendous amount of time on each one, but will keep getting better I hope; make better things even without tremendous amounts of time required! :) Appreciate all these reviews!

[Who's next?]

Very Nice Character

Wow this was a really nice character you have created here, I am loving the "PURPLES" and loving the overall design of the character, theres lots of great "DETAIL" in this piece and really just appreceate the detail and effort here, I wouldnt mind more blood maybe even some blood on back wall setting and even some structure as the backround, I would also suggest some sparkle on the shiny points like the spikes and whatnot, but regardless this was a cool piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more blood maybe even some blood on back wall setting and even some structure as the backround, I would also suggest some sparkle on the shiny points like the spikes

~X~

[MCD]

Decent

I do love a good logo for companies. I think this was not bad and was done well for what it is. I do think your lighting is off in places, it just seems all over the place with those dots, but I see this making a good logo or something for a banner. I do like the use of color and your vector designs seem to flow well with polished line work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work on the lighting for your designs a bit more but good overall

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hmm yeah, not sure what I was going for with those dots, seems like an unfinished pattern when you start looking at it... good eye. And glad you liked the logo overall!

[Honor Roll Breakfast Album]

Nice

So this was some sort of "LOGO" or "BANNER" I am enjoying all the red flames and I have to say the "WORDING-OR-FONTS" are nice but I think you could have gone with something more vibrant and some font that jumps out at you more and I would put more flames on the outter edges of this as well as those areas seemed to be lacking more flames and whatnot, other then that this was a pretty nice view point of the art entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the wording or fonts are nice but I think you could have gone with something more vibrant and some font that jumps out at you more and I would put more flames on the outter edges of this as well as those areas seemed to be lacking

~X~

[Dark, acidic & venomenous]

Cool

So here was another "COOL" character hre the "FORM" and structure of these characters that you do do, are pretty nice nice shades nice small little "DETAILS" here and there seem to all come together very well indeed so nice job here, I even love what you do on the backrounds with some type of texture and design the metal part of the axe could use a sparkle and or shine to it but overall this was a nice piece of work you have created here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the metal part of the axe could use a sparkle and or shine to it but overall this was a nice piece of work

~X~

[Naga/Protoss hybrid]

Interesting character

So this was an "INTERESTING" character you have here there is lots of "DETAIL" I like the design within the texture and skin plates, the head was cool, a small advice on this piece might be to have the eyes glow out a tad more and also some backround work is needed with maybe some scene in the backround and even some added props here or there, But besides those small details this was pretty decent work you have created here for us.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a small advice on this piece might be to have the eyes glow out a tad more and also some backround work is needed with maybe some scene in the backround and even some added props here or there

~X~

[Inktober #26]

Riddle

Ok so this one here is like a riddle, or it reminds me of the riddler. I do like the overall space used and the fact you never left too much out in terms of the question marks. I do find just plain black for all the question marks to be a bit boring and I do not see why you didn't try to add color here and there to spice it all up. I do like this tho and I hope next time you'll do it in different colors.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try doing this with more different colors next time, as stated above.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Ah The Riddler too, could've been a reference! Well sometimes... less is more? XD Thanks for the review again!

[Sammy Davis Jr. in MS Paint]

Intense sketch

A great legend done in black and white cant get any better then that, no changes needed this was a masterpiece, So this was a nice and solid black and white drawing I am sure down the road you can ad some color even just a little bit of color, But with this sketch and only being black and white its pretty impressive with the design you have on this one, the drawing is pretty awsome.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
no changes needed this was a masterpiece

~X~

[Shiny Catapult]

Nice work

This was some nice "3-D" I like the style of this you "SHOW" all the different "VIEW-POINTS" and such and you can see all the "GLOSSY" views I think if you showd more of a wood element it would be more realistic but it is what it is, its a nice 3d style of project with more of a plastic feel about it but anyways a more wood style would be a big improvment other then that this was cool and I enjoyed reviewing this.

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a more wood style would be a big improvment other then that this was cool and I enjoyed reviewing this

~X~