Notbad
Well ok this was a bit different and I don't really understand this one but I do think your skills for comics is down-pat. You have the panels well thought out and the signatures are in places that don't impede on the art itself. I like the shine on the Reese cup and the variations in the cups and how you did different perspectives of positions for each of the cups. I love the little effects you used here and there and the overall look is good. The text is even very comic like and fits in with that comic theme. Now, I just don't like the writing too much here, maybe it needs a bit more, but I am not sure I enjoyed the subject matter. To each their own, but otherwise a good art work.
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Just more dialog and more context with the dialog, just found it a bit confusing.
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