XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Scrab remake]

Notbad

I think this is pretty good, but something seems off about it....Not the design or concept but the image itself seems blurred and overworked in certain areas. I think it needs bit of a sharpen and some shading needs to be done. I do like this piece. I like the flow of the scrab into the background very smooth there throwing in some neveda type sceneary was a nice touch. Good effort all around but why does it have abs?

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just sharpen this one up a bit.

~X~

Zelgeist responds:

Thank you for a insightful feedback. I appreciate it very much.

It has abs because its torso is supposed to be very human-like. Not utterly like human, but pretty close.

[Quest to somewhere]

This was interesting

I like what you have done here, this was actually a "BEAUTIFULL" piece the scene was a nice sight and seems to have a "STORY" as for improvments I dont think you need any changes its a beautifull piece and a nice element here so props to you on this submission.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
for improvments I dont think you need any changes its a beautifull piece and a nice element

~X~

[Venana]

Bananna

lol I thaught this was actually pretty adorble, I do wish you had some eyes and facial features on this would have been a nice touch up if it did, the artwork on this is very good, the black backround could also use some design or patteren or color base besides the black, but anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the black backround could also use some design or patteren or color base besides the black, I do wish you had some eyes and facial features on this would have been a nice touch up if it did

~X~

[Jinx now in 2.5D]

Very nice

So this was a nice art piece here the animation was notbad but I thaught you could have done more with the animation maybe have it turn more instead of the short moment it has, This is something different and you dont see this type of art and style everyday so its nice to see something good here today that is different. And now we come to the closing of this review or almost, but you do have a good peice of art here I like the efforti like this creation and I like your attention for detail, so keep up the good work and i look forward to even more stuff from you. Maybe a little Polish here or there would be an idea.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I thaught you could have done more with the animation maybe have it turn more instead of the short moment it has

~X~

Anioco responds:

Oh thanks!
Actually, i'm gonna print this on a lenticular card, so it doesn't has to move too much.

:)

[Pico Day 2018]

Very nice work

So you have some very nice work here love the character design here and love the backround even more, that gun could have a bit of sparkle to it, maybe some added shine and sparkle to it just different points here or there something that could make it jump out at you just a little more, Anyways nice character.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle on the gun.

~X~

[Skate Chick]

Very nice

So this was pretty good the effects of this and the "ANIMATION" was really good, Now the art is great the animation is awsome I think you should have some movment in her body as she is on a board or something like that, besides all that this was a really nice art piece you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should have some movment in her body as she is on a board or something like that

~X~

[PicoDayBrawl 2k18]

Nice piece

So this was a nice piece of artwork you have here, love all the different "CHARACTERS" you really do bring out some of the best there was some slight lighting effect on the back end but maybe adding more lighting effect on this with different focus points would be a huge plus. Anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe adding more lighting effect on this with different focus points would be a huge plus

~X~

[death witch]

Love the style

The outter border piece could be a bit darker or even in some color shade or something, So I have always loved this black and white style but you bring a certain flavor to it making it more then just black and white drawing its talent with ink and pen or paint lol anyways great sketch design here its filled with ideas and imagination, I have really enjoyed this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The outter border piece could be a bit darker or even in some color shade or something

~X~

[Streetfighter pixel boys]

This was nifty

So I have to say that this was pretty nifty, love the streetfighter theme you have going on here, I do think that you could actually ad a bit of "SPARKLE" on some points but thats just an idea and suggestion, anyways good art piece here, keep making great stuff like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt mind some sparkle here or there just off some edge or corner points of focus points I think it would be a nice little effect that would work well for this piece.

~X~

[bird]

Cute

This was a cute piece the "EYES" are really popping out here I think you should have gone with a darker backround so that the character dont just mesh with it, but anyways really good character here and its a cute and adorble one, you have some nice linework here on this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you should have gone with a darker backround so that the character dont just mesh with it

~X~