XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dragon Over Earth]

Nice design

This was pretty cool I love the whole black and white design here this one seems like it would be so much better with some added color to it its very nice work though and a good design indeed, so just think about adding some color to this, anyways nice detail you added in here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some much needed color ofcourse.

~X~

[Gabi's Alice]

Nice character

Well this was a nice character kind of jumping out at you so that was a nice pose, and I really like the backround you added it was not too complicated but was subtle and fits just right, as for improving on things, I honestly think its great as is, so nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some frames on edges of canvus if even that.

~X~

[Old Buddies]

This was pretty interesting

Two heads here or characters one very orange one and a paper backround so that alone was some random stuff but what you do with the design of it all is pretty nifty nice shades nice form of these very large heads, onlything I can see you changing about this whole piece is make the "CANVUS" much larger

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Much larger canvus needed for more visuals of details.

~X~

[Marceline (Update)]

Sexy

This is one sexy looking vampire. I love vampires. The "BLOOD" in here eyes was a great addition to this as it bring out that dark side with her sexy red lips smile. That apple gives off the sexy seductive feeling like she is trying to lure you in with innocence and you want a bit but she really is the one doing the biting. The long hair with its details and textures really fits in with that seductive and dark look. The texture and patterns in her lace outfit are really the star here as it looks almost real and similar to clothing designs. I love each part of this piece and I seem to be enjoying all the new things you bring to the table the last few days. Now before I get to the helpfull changes part of the review I will say that you have done well here, I wanted to comment on how this Radiates all sorts of creativty and that was something I really liked about this piece you have a good Expression of creativity, and I was impressed with a number of areas.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe blood from her mouth dripping out, and putting a more shine on that apple would be a plus

~X~

[Garden of Eden]

You make this look easy

Its not everyday that you come across something like this you have some great characters some decent visuals and just some good ol humor and you give them a good vive and I think thats why this has grown on me because of the vibe the characters have so I am pleased with this. these guys are always hungry lol.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Another funny one thats why making these longer would be awsome.

~X~

[What is it?]

In a nutshell

Cool and here we are with another fun episode of the comic and this one may very well be one of my faves, I love these characters and I love how this story plays out, some very nice stuff here and good story for this particular episde so nice work here. and there was some bit of color in this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like the small added color but some more of that color would be awsome.

~X~

[Fear Gut]

Amusing in its own way

Cool stuff once again well you have amazed me once again, you always bring out some new adventure and they are as fun as ever, Anyways I look forward to see more of this comic series its always interesting even if at times the story is average the excitement is always there. backrounds seemed bland though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So the backrounds seemed bland a prop here or there would be nice.

~X~

[Marathon]

Awsome style here

Well another fun piece here but as always you bring in some nice art some nice humor and some cool visuals to enjoy so it was a pleasure to review this one, Infact I have enjoyed all these comics maybe not at first but they are really exciting now. But also keep the depth of it all going aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well what Can I say that has not been said already this was good and good humor I like it and dont feel any need for any changes at this time.

~X~

[Condiments]

A beautiful submission

So you have really grown on me with these comics of yours at first I was like what is this but now I really do look forward to them, and glad you are having some success with them, they are pretty entertaining and I like the stories and characters you bring. So keep doing what you do.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice and good humor you should bring more of that humor maybe extend the frames boxes one more row.

~X~

[Plant]

Artistic in its own way

Amd here we are with another piece to the puzle of the ever growing comic you have a good series here and always look forward to seeing whats next, the charaxters are funny and alwasy find themself in interesting situations. so nice work sofar. cant wait for even more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like the added color wouldnt mind more of that

~X~