XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[uwt]

Different

So this was different as you can feel something coming off those shading details with your shadows. It feels almost like you have this women inside a rain storm or some kind of natural occurrence but you have a nice idea here and it shows some great shading work and represented very well here a use of black and white. I do find a border with this type of black and white work would do you well, and perhaps next time adding some color to just one element on the face (lips or eyes) to bring a pop of interest with color.

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Just a border and maybe a splash of color

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[Final Fantasy 7: Cloud Strife]

Awsome

Well this was "AWSOME" your detail on the character alone is uncanny, you really have some nice "TALENT" and you showcase it well here, I would love more shine like on the sholder armour piece and maybe the stword piece, but besides that this was a nice art piece great character.

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would love more shine like on the sholder armour piece and maybe the stword piece.

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[Steampunk Dragoncity]

Amazing

Wow this is some "AMAZING" work you have here, I love dragons and love the city style like you have here the dragon sets the tone here for the city I do feel that if you had more lighting beaming down more on the dragon with more shine and sparkle it would really be cool, anyways nice work.

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I do feel that if you had more lighting beaming down more on the dragon with more shine and sparkle it would really be cool

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Kamikaye responds:

Thnks a lot for the feedback ! :)

[October]

Cool

So this was kind of cool, I am enjoying the "ANIMATION" allthough I think you could have added more in the backround like a tree from where the leaves might be falling from and thats just a small idea, but as for the character its really fantastic nice linework nice moment of enjoying the wind and leaves.

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you could have added more in the backround like a tree from where the leaves might be falling from and thats just a small idea

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MeghanLuna responds:

Thank you and thanks for the feedback! :D
I agree, a background would have made this piece a lot stronger.
I'm glad you're digging the animation and the linework ;)

[inktober day 13 MASK]

Haha Nice

So this was pretty "CUTE" Its like a short comic but you made it work in the two frames, so nice work there and I am loving the black and white some colored frames might sufice on this piece and make it stand out more, but I do like the imktober black and white style here.

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I am loving the black and white some colored frames might sufice on this piece and make it stand out more

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[Kb town]

Decent

So this was something decent I like the abstract feel here, theres a strong "ABSTRACT" feel about this whole piece, the colors mix and match but its a decent piece indeed, as for improving I think you could add some lighting effects to this and make some of the colors more vibrant and such.

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as for improving I think you could add some lighting effects to this

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[Black Magic Witch]

Really nice

So this was some really nice work here a "UNIQUE" character I love the halloween vibe I did think if you added some glowing and lighting effects like on the pumnkin and maybe more shine on the character would be one opinion of an idea, but I like what you have done here.

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I did think if you added some glowing and lighting effects like on the pumnkin and maybe more shine on the character would be one opinion of an idea

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[KAIJU MARATHON: N°24]

Love it

So this one was really nifty I love the deep sea life here in this one I think you should have used some head light on the sub and allow for some lighting effects to take place, but the drawing it self was really nice work love the detail you have put in this.

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I think you should have used some head light on the sub and allow for some lighting effects to take place

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[Gastly]

Strange

So this was a strange one but I found this one to be pretty entertaining I like the "BIG" mouth and sharp teeth it was some crazy character you have here I do think some improvements could be done such as maybe some texture in the skintone if you can see it, and some blood from the teeth those are just a few ideas here.

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I do think some improvements could be done such as maybe some texture in the skintone if you can see it, and some blood from the teeth

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[Nightmare Cops]

Really nice

I love the "DARK" feel on this one, the red eyes seem like they could have had more of a glow, and something seems missing in the backround maybe something more added back there would sufice, A beautiful piece of art here and you dont see much styles like this so I wanted to take the time to write a review for this great fantastic piece. And so My ending experience on this decent art piece was that it brings a good element of visual, there was some nifty design all around and I was generally pleased with all of this, a good art piece indeed, I do hope to see more work from you and from this theme style.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the red eyes seem like they could have had more of a glow, and something seems missing in the backround maybe something more added back there would sufice

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