XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lambdio]

Amazing work

This drawing here was some amazing work, you really designed something pretty interesting and I "ESPECIALLY-LOVE" the lines and detail this is one reason "I-REALLY-ENJOY" these black and white styles more then anything as they do bring on some of that raw detail and element.

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I wouldnt touch a thing this was nice line work.

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[Halloween girl]

Fantastic art

Excellent addition of shading the "SHADOWS" correlate with the visible light source within "THE-PAINTING", The faded yellow and orange color scheme are also compatible with her black dress, and the otherwise darker color tone of the image, Still the trees in the background are also colored with the appropriate shades to match "THE-THEME" Halloween, Facial features appeal to an anime style, which add a cutesy undertone to the mentioned Halloween theme.

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Some added shine in the witchs hat would be nice and the flames in the backround seem like they could be more vibrant.

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[Rupert]

Nice Detail

So this was some nice "DETAIL" here and a good character love the "BACKROUND" even as this was really nifty love these eyes even you put a lot of energy and time into this one and it really shows off well, I did think you could light up the backround a little more, but other then that this was amazing work.

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I did think you could light up the backround a little more

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[Sad Face]

Intense

Wow amazing job here on the "FACE" you really braught the "EMOTION" forward on this one, the eyes are deep the facial texture is spot on and overall this was just a beautifull piece, I would make a suggested opinion and suggest maybe more lighting come off the side and hit him on the face more, anyways nice work here.

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I would make a suggested opinion and suggest maybe more lighting come off the side and hit him on the face more

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[Eternal Voyage III - Ultraviolet]

Cool

The cool pastel shades of blue and purple are "COMPLEMENTARY" to one another, The pitch black background does not disturb this "WORKING-RELATIONSHIP" between the colors, but rather intensifies it, A horizontal layout of the image also benefits the chosen design, for it spreads it out entirely, Having a transparent purple hue on the top, and a transparent blue hue on the bottom, creates a contrasting look between the two shades, This as well, does not take away from the quality of the image.

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This was an amazing design here the purple is amazing I think some added flow on spots would give it a nice luminating effect.

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[Muffet]

Very nice

So this was pretty nice work I am "LOVING" the colors like the floor, and the lighting effects, I did think some other items could shine from the lighting a tad more, Here is the Extended part of my review, But I love your Desire to make great stuff here, Now its something like this that really stands out at you with its element of detail and effects that come alive in one swoop, and thats what you have here. You seem Accustomed to some good detail and Finally it really shows off well, So with this entry you bring a different style to the table, and thats what I enjoy about the art portal always something amusing and unique roaming around.

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I did think some other items could shine from the lighting a tad more

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[Pinch Punch]

Great Humor in this one

Ohmy that was something else, I love the last "FRAMES" that really made the story here, you should make more adventure with that style of character there at the end maybe someone to face off vs potato man, the humor and ideas here, keeps me chuckling away and wanting more the adventure that your characters take, those are just the little things that keep me interested in these entertaining and full of adventure webcomic, and I cant wait for even more from you, so keep it up.

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you should make more adventure with that style of character there at the end maybe someone to face off vs potato man

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[Happy]

Another Cool entry

So with this one the "JOKE" was funny the text in the text bubbles got really small at the end was hard to read, but no major thing here, Nice little web comic and some very amusing endings like this particular one did, I have been reviewing this little gem of yours for awhile now and I still find everyone still as amazing as the first so really nice job on this one, and hope you always grace us with some really amazing web comic submissions.

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the text in the text bubbles got really small at the end was hard to read, but no major thing here

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[Manhole]

An entertaining element

Ohmy I was not "EXPECTING" that outcome you really have outdone yourself on this one and it was funny, I love how colorfull this one is, This was a full fun comic entry no changes this time, These are very entertaining and you for sure bring on a new element of suprise from start to finish you make this entry and all of the entries a "BIG-BLAST" of fun the jokes always "WELL-EXECTUTED" and make for some good entertainment so props to you on an amazing series of web comic.

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This was a full fun comic entry no changes this time

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