XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cartoon Network!]

Cool

So this was cool I use to watch the cartoon network for a bit and its notbad at all, you presented the cartoon network well on this one so nice job indeed here I really like it but I do wish you added more in the backround or maybe a frame or border like a poster pin up.

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wish you added more in the backround or maybe a frame or border like a poster

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[Nuclear Power Plant [Game Asset]]

Nice

This one here is okay, It does need a bit of textures and overall shading. You have the ability to make something 3D, but now you need to add your elements of textures, shading, and even some light. You have gradiants going on here, and that can work for shading, but you do need a lot more. Mostly you need more details and textures will help you with that the most. I do find this to be good work tho. I know most 3D images don't render backgrounds, but if you do use this for a game, do not forget your background, or it will feel incomplete. As far as shaping for the structures goes, you did excellent, nice symmetrical shapes and frames.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs some details and do not forget to add a background for your game.

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jsabbott responds:

Thanks for the response. I am really a modeller and I just haven't gotten the hang of lighting or texturing yet. This model was made for a tutorial so I'm not going to be using it in real life. :)

[Like if you miss the new Cartoon Network :'(]

Notbad

So the artwork itself was notbad I would have to say my childhood was somewhat different as it had such greats as smurfs, spiderman the simpsons stuff like that but I know what you mean, your artwork here is pretty good and I like the meaning of it so keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this one.

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[(Gift Art) Cap'n! (Star Trek Fanart)]

Good effort

ok so as a fan myself of star trek I found this to be fun, I like how you have it set up the face in contrast to the background. The background is a great space one, but maybe next time add in a ship or symbol to give it a bit more of a completed look, as his head just now seems to be floating in space haha, but anyways great piece I really liked this. I do think your line work needs to be a bit polished, I think if you have an art program just try to smooth out the lines and giving it a bit more of a depth, but your background is spot on in terms of star trek and his clothing matches up that as well, but good job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So just work on your line art and add a bit more to the background behind the image, nice work

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[OOOOHHHH!!!!! (regular show)]

Very nice

So clay works is always something nice and you have presented some nice clay characters here I love that you added a bit of backround here, I think all this needs is some shine on some parts of the characters, but you have created and presented something really unique here.

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all this needs is some shine on some parts of the characters

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[Falling man]

Brilliant

So this was pretty brilliant here some nice "SCENE" here I like the lighting even I think the lighting should come down more like a beam of light and maybe even deeper within the element to show off certain details here and there just for extra measures and such, anyways really good and "SOLID" work you have here.

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I think the lighting should come down more like a beam of light and maybe even deeper within the element to show off certain details here and there just for extra measures and such

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[Pastel Girl]

This was nifty

So this was a nifty "IDEA" you had here I like the pastel idea I think you could have some more colored pastels in there, but the idea is really good you should make a series of characters in pastel style, but besides that this was pretty good and I enjoyed it so nice effort here.

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I think you could have some more colored pastels in there, you should make a series of characters in pastel style.

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[Azuberry (2016)]

Cute and funny

This was cute and made me giggle. I dont think I would eat her, but her hair does look yummy. And you gave it an entertaining value by making me chuckle so I was happy with it very well designed and drawn out. The colors are good and the coloring from line to line is good too. I wish you didn't have so much white space tho, because a lot of white is in your character and that can get lost in the art to the background washing it out. I would add a bit more of the vinagrette style background or a full background here to get rid of as much white space as you can to really make her white details pop and not get lost in translation.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A background to lower the amount of white space

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lukisart responds:

Yeah I am quite afraid of designing backgrounds XD

[Succubus Meloetta]

Cute

Really cute character here love what you did with the "HAIR" here its very flowing and vibrant I think you could ad some more shine to the hair would really have a nice look, I would suggest some backround detail also, but regardless this was a nice character work here.

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I think you could ad some more shine to the hair would really have a nice look

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ZedrinBot responds:

That doesn't seem like an improvement, just an idea suggestion (I don't think it'd fit with my intentions or would have a solid impact on the piece personally, especially considering this was a commission where the commissioner paid for a set level of detail).

Thanks for the review, though.

[Shadowrun - Suwi]

Wow nice

Now here was something really nice I "LOVE" the this character design and you gave her some nice expression too, wish there was more in the backround but overall this was good, you have presented something really nice here and it was a pleasent piece of art here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
wish there was more in the backround but overall this was good

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MLeth responds:

Thank you! Although I would argue that the lack of a background is a choice (it was not part of the commission) rather than a flaw to improve on.