XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Raffle Winner]

Notbad

Ok this is one of those piece that the legs is so hard to view because the background is pretty much matching same color this why I have suggested manytimes about a different base color backround but again you still have done some nice work here

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Different color backround

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[Blair]

Cool piece

So this was a really great piece here a nice "HALLOWEEN" themed piece too, I think some extra glow from the pumnkin or pumnkins eyes would have been a nice touch up, also maybe a darker backround so the lighting could take effect more but thats just my perspective on things, you do some nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think some extra glow from the pumnkin or pumnkins eyes would have been a nice touch up, also maybe a darker backround so the lighting could take effect more

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[Shinobi Warriors]

A cute comic

So this was a cute "COMIC" the art could be smoother and the characracters could be refined more you should have text bubbles instead of squares, but overall this was a nice idea for a comic, and think you should keep it going on more entries would be great for this.

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the art could be smoother and the characracters could be refined more you should have text bubbles instead of squares

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[Nightmare at P.S. 112]

Haha nice

So this was pretty good I think you have a good idea here and I think you could make a series out of all the scary villians in class or something, But the art was great the backround you made funny like a classroom, and the freddy character has lots of great detail.

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I think you could make a series out of all the scary villians in class or something

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DirtGoblin responds:

This actually started as a joke about a series where Slasher villains go to school to learn how to become slashers. Glad you like it.

[Zero]

Nice character

So this was a nice "CHARACTER" I love the sabre I think you should have some more glow on it, and also I would suggest some more backround detail some props some scene or even a colored pateren design, Anyways nice character here very good form and pose, so nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest some more backround detail some props some scene or even a colored pateren design

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[Izzy]

Really nice

Love the amount of "DETAIL" you have going on in this one, Love the back end design too almost creates a frame and border aswell, I would even suggest ad a small frame long the edges to accent that back end design, So Im glad I had a chance to see this aswell as review it, this was started from a simple idea but you turned it into something unique, so nice effort there. Very nice work here I like this style and the talent really does come full frontal here with the detail and style you push forward. There are things that can make this better but I like what you bring out in this style and piece, and we need more artists and pieces like this. My final Overview is this was pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Love the back end design too almost creates a frame and border aswell, I would even suggest ad a small frame long the edges to accent that back end design

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mogy64 responds:

thanks a lot for the nice words xway! i did want to give tha back some sort of border especially due to how its tilted, but i thought it took away a bit from the white border of the character, since i wanted her to pop out more than anything.
ill definitely have that in mind for the next pieces tho, thank you again!

[drone]

Interesting

So this was pretty interesting here, I love the dark "ELEMENT" of this piece I think a few things you could improve on this piece might be maybe ad some glowing eyes to ad to the darkness and maybe a darker backround or some dark scene of some sort, but regardless this was pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think a few things you could improve on this piece might be maybe ad some glowing eyes to ad to the darkness and maybe a darker backround or some dark scene of some sort

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[Sega Mega Drive and Dreamcast]

Creative

You really bunched it all together in this one, I would love some more sparkle and shine but again I always suggest that on your work, So this was pretty good I like the creative idea on this one you added some really nice shine and detail here with some really nice view point, "THE-FIRST-VIEW-POINT" of this is very nice and you bring some "NIFTY-DETAIL" to the front lines with this one so nice sprite work here.

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I would love some more sparkle and shine but again I always suggest that on your work

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[Holiday Trickster appears (Halloween)]

Awsome Pixel art

And so here was some amazing Pixel art style you have here one would think you cant do art from pixels but you have shown us that you can and you can make some amazing stuff here, the pixel is simular to sprite stuff but then its not, so nice pixel stylish art here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Would love more shine and sparkle maybe some more added animation.

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[elijah]

Very nice

Very nice "CHARACTER" the expression was not too much but maybe that was the "INTENT" I thaught the backround could have some added color or detail, but you have some nice work here some nice portrait here maybe ad some frames on this it would be a nice feature of the art piece.

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I thaught the backround could have some added color or detail, maybe ad some frames on this it would be a nice feature

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uwubu responds:

Thank you very much for the suggestions and help! The expression is very deliberate, and the reason I did nothing to the background or add a frame was because the expression/face is very intense and anything else would have been *too* much for the eye. (The expression itself is a bit *much* which is the whole point in this piece). <3