XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spam]

ohmy

Spam can never be good, this was a nice submission here on "SPAM" lots of adventure and tons of humor, so nice work indeed on this piece here, thats what you bring to the table especially in this one here lots of great entertainment and really love how this one ended so nice effort and love the energy you put into this web comic.

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A crazy entry here great art and outcome no changes needed.

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[Tan]

So very entertaining

Ouch once again and someone got the end of the stick here lol, the text bubbles seemed a bit hard to read nothing major but maybe it could be bigger somehow, So much entertainment and fun elements of joy the stories start off slow but end with a bang, These are very entertaining and you for sure bring on a new "ELEMENT-OF-SUPRISE" the endings always have a "BIG-BANG" ending and thats another element that I love about your writing and jokes you put into these.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the text bubbles seemed a bit hard to read nothing major but maybe it could be bigger somehow

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[Darwin Potential]

Nice Ocean scene

Excellent job done in creating the look of the sun reflecting on them through the surface of the "WATER" Attentiveness to the "BACKROUND-DETAILS" also adds to the image, the visible pieces of a shipwreck in the back and the treasure chest between them makes way for a story that viewers can follow easily, "THE-SOFT-EDGES" of the background in contrast with the thin albeit sharp line work of the girl and the sea creature, keep them as the center of focus. Her warm brown color scheme amongst the cooler shades of the sea also further encourages the tone of invasion, and her belonging to land.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small details like some backround sea life maybe some scared fish running off, and the treasure and jewls could have more sparkle and shine to them.

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[Zero Suit Samus]

Nice pose

Firm, bold line work produces a "CLEAR", exact presentation of every curve and dip of her body. A "HORIZONTAL-LAYOUT" of the drawing aids in the completeness of her body, allowing the artist to draw it all out beautifully, Her pose, in consideration with the presence of a gun in her hand, makes for a "FEMME-FATALE" character The strong blue shade of her suit works well with blond hair and a white, blank background Though the facial features aren’t exactly realistic, the anatomy is correct.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure you should change anything but a shine on the gun and maybe some simple props in the backround.

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[Handy hands]

An amazing Idea

So great idea here with the "LIGHT-BULB" you really made this one work well love the lighting effect here and Im sure the hands have meaning as they have light now, as for any changes or ideas I thaught this was actually pretty good with a nice element so there for needs no changes, anyways keep up the amazing work.

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as for any changes or ideas I thaught this was actually pretty good with a nice element so there for needs no changes

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[Crossing The Road]

Entertaining

Nice work here I love the "CLOSE-UP" you should really do something like that more often makes the comic like those comics with all that kind of stuff, So nice job on yet another great entry of an amazing web-comic that you have created here, the characters always amazing and like in this entry you bring out some good story topics, If ever I decide to do a comic it will be because you influenced me on it, anyways nice work here.

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I love the close-Up you should really do something like that more often makes the comic like those comics with all that kind of stuff

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[Vending Machine]

Good web comic

Haha this one was pretty funny here, Reminded me of a memory I had with a vending machine as a kid, so this will be one of my faves, I think this one could have gone a tad longer to see some more end results maybe a jail cell moment lol, you always amaze me with all that you do in these web comic types, A nice web comic here and all that happens in this adventure, its entertaining and amusing because you do bring on some amusing jokes, and thats what really makes me enjoy these entries more and more each day.

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this one could have gone a tad longer to see some more end results maybe a jail cell moment lol

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[Age Of Trolltron]

Nice

Wow this "5ooTH" special was a really long one and had some nice adventure all through out, no changes here you are too good at this stuff, So first of all keep making these, because as much of these that you do push forward you bring some good entertaining value to the art portal, the comic itself is always a good quality and always bring good quality jokes aswell it all is worth the time put in on these.

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no changes here you are too good at this stuff

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[Forever]

Beautifull view

An extreme "BRILLANCE" to the artwork in terms of color the many shades with their accompanying "UNDERTONES" compose a bright image, complete with a unsaturated pastel delivery, Despite the lack of evident line work each character and object present has precise additives of detailing and sturdiness, "COLOR-MANIPULATION" makes up for line work as well providing presentation of varying textures (e.g. the apparent softness of the girl’s hair), Exaggeration of features and anatomy make for an unrealistic look however the depth of details stray from animation, The many seemingly random objects people and animals in the background make this an interesting visually appealing piece.

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This is one of those pieces that may not need any changes as its beautifuly done with some nice detail and a beautiful visual of work here.

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[Boxxy]

Nice

The "SHARP-EDGES" of the character’s physical features present the work of a "CARTOONIST", An unproportionate exaggerated look to these features also fits that style, The white, thin border of the bodily outline "NICELY-PROTECTS" a loss of the character against the dark background considering her darker color palette, Proper shading along the face and hair, and beneath the neck indicates an indirect invisible light source, giving the drawing a front lit appearance.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The heart and text could be more vibrant but thats all this really needs changes in if even that.

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