XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Out of Mana - kit]

Really cool

So there is some action in this it being some kind of robot I would love to see more shine and sparkle on this one, And now for the Extended portion of the review, You have some nice Polished elements in this piece, These kinds of entries reall move leaps and bounds with me because it brings out a lot of creativity especially with this pice that speaks volumes. I like the Blend of style and uniqueness you bring, And so with this piece The fires of creativity burning within another inspiring piece, Some real work of art piecing everything together like you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
this it being some kind of robot I would love to see more shine and sparkle on this one

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[bb design redux]

This was cute

A cute and "ADORBLE" piece you have created here I like the character and the board I do think some added shine on the board maybe even some sparkle too, and you should ad something to the backround maybe an ocean with waves to kind of show off the world she is headed to or comes from, this was a nice art piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some added shine on the board maybe even some sparkle too, and you should ad something to the backround maybe an ocean with waves to kind of show off the world she is headed to or comes from

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[Shantae and the Space Pirate's Curse]

Nice

So this was cool I love the dragon here this was a very nice "PIECE" I do think some added effects like glowing eyes maybe a more textured border and such would be a nice touch up, This one has Flair and sofar this is a good start and you made it stand out and some areas didnt so much. but for sure you added Stylization and you have Captured that Flair in this piece. So I am honored in this style of work here and I will admitt, I found your artwork by accident but I must say I became an instant fan of your work and your style, but anyways keep up this style its top notch stuff, And I will continue to look for your future stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think some added effects like glowing eyes maybe a more textured border and such would be a nice touch up

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[Birdblob Pile]

This was cute

I like all the little birds here made for a nice and "VISUAL" point nice expressions on them all, the white outter border piece was also a nice touch, I would suggest as an opinion from my point of view to see some texture in the white outter border or maybe some small birds in there or nothing at all as it is a nice piece as is, anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest as an opinion from my point of view to see some texture in the white outter border or maybe some small birds in there or nothing at all as it is a nice piece as is

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[Trico from the Last Guardian]

Really nice

So this was a nice "CHARACTER" sitting up and looking down on everyone a nice "POSE" the hanging guy was nice too the backround was pretty decent but maybe some added lighting effect back there it would bring on a nice effect, but this was some really nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the backround was pretty decent but maybe some added lighting effect back there it would bring on a nice effect

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[Adoptable #8]

Wow amazing

And wow some amazing work you have here the detail of the dress alone is just so amazing it's detail like that that just jumps out at me and you presented it well with some nice visual points here now I'm always saying ad something more to your background and you have done just that it's a subtle background but still very impressive and I enjoyed it very much keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I don't think this piece needs changes it's solid and artistic

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holikrep responds:

Oh gosh I feel so bad i've been away I only just now saw all ( or most, still reading!) of your kind comments/critiques/suggestions ; u ; I can't tell ya how much I appreciate you going through and taking the time to do that <3 it means a lot to read them all so thank you very much! You're too kind~

[Summoner/Witch Adopt]

Adorable

So here you are with some more cute and adorable work here the pink stocking fit well with the dress design here and made her even more cute you have some nice detail in the clothing and a good fashion sense so that was a plus and a good charchter overall I still think some added texture and colored design would be a plus on things for the background just to reflect the main character more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned just above

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[Polymorph Witch Adopt]

This was nice

Kind of a nifty design here you have some nice art detail here and some good visual points here I really like the work though seems like the background color could be somewhat different then just the white maybe even some texture with some color to balance off the main focus of things but overall you have impressed me here and these are some nice details you have here and I was pretty impressed with your detailed work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some textured background

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[Ych - Taorusama]

Nice

So this was a cute one and the water she's popping out of is pretty nice and makes for a good background now that water comming out of her mouth looks odd but is good still

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing really this was solid work

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[Adoptable #4 - Open 25$]

Cute

So this was cute and you presented the prices just right and nothing wrong with making some money on the side but as for the art it was pretty good love the subtle design the linework was amazing as always you have great talent and it shows well so keep that aspect of things going strong but I do enjoy the work you present here with such a nice style and element so nice as always

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more background

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