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[Inktober #29 Heavy Metal Rocks Hard]

The Rock

I choose the "ROCK" as the winner here. This one here well this one is an interesting little idea you have about size and weight being an obstacle and how they can verse each other and see who wins in the end. The lightning bold seperating them is a nice idea too, just like in a video game right before a battle you get this vs battle look. I like the yellow and oragen coloring you've gone with in this as well. I think this one could be a bit bigger in terms of size and needs some glow effects for the middle ligtning but otherwise a good one and a nice ROCK

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Bigger and more effects inside it

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Cyberdevil responds:

Quick decisions between the two elemental genres too. :D Thank you!

[Zombie Snail]

Wow

Now this was something "DEEP" the texture is uncanny so deep with the colortone and you made it look very realistic and this was a beautiful piece here you really have outdone yourself here with this one and I was super impressed, I might suggest some added lighting effects maybe it would reflect off the shell, but anyways nice stuff here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I might suggest some added lighting effects maybe it would reflect off the shell

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[Alien Hominid Zombie]

Wow Nice

Wow this was really nice I just love the look and "EXPRESSION" you gave him with the frontal pose, love this deep backround but most of all you gave him this look of he "ACOMPLISHED-HIS-GOAL", the detail is really intense, I think this could be bigger canvus wise and maybe even ad some frames and fancy borders on this like a gallery piece, but other then that this was a well drawn and very nice detailed piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
this could be bigger canvus wise and maybe even ad some frames and fancy borders on this like a gallery piece

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[Inktober #28 Dalmations]

Different

I actually really like this one, it is like an abstract piece of art and looks great. The way the lines cut out the main dalmation and the images of other dogs interlacing within the main one is pretty neat. I think this is the same dalmation used before in other pieces, but it works here as you changed it up and made it something new and interesting. I love the way you have a nice red as the background and it holds it all together to make it very complete. I would have liked to see a border and something more inside the outlines tho, to match up with the lines and textures you have created.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A border would be a nice addition here

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Borders as in shading? There is a lot of shading here too, though maybe a little too light to be noticed fully. Speaking of borders: guess you might appreciate #27. ;) Thanks for another good review!

[StreetArt2011]

Nice

Now that was some impressive stuff, I have actually seen other people do this on the streets of vegas and california and its some amazing work you are very talented, there is nothing I would change on this you are too talented for me to offer any changes so keep doing what you do best.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
there is nothing I would change on this you are too talented for me to offer any changes

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[Dragon]

Nice drawing here

Nice dragon here, some nice detail maybe some blank paper or maybe you could color the backround, You have a really nice drawing here, its a good detailed design, it may even look better as a black and white design as you have it now, so maybe in the future some added color would be a nice touch but other then that this was a really cool drawing you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some nice detail maybe some blank paper or maybe you could color the backround

~X~

[Sunshine]

Very nice

Wow im pretty impressed with this "PIECE" the work is so "REALISTIC" you have some really nice design and the backround is decent I like the blur effects too, as for changes on this I would only suggest more sunlight or a sun beam a ray of lighting beating down on her, anyways nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would only suggest more sunlight or a sun beam a ray of lighting beating down on her

~X~

[Inktober #27 Dalmation 2]

Better

So this one here, this one is like a different version of your last dalmation picture and it is much more in-depth and detailed and has the suggestions I had given in the last review. I like the way the border cuts off the background with a solid white but that the background itself is a green color that makes it a more complete piece and gives it some pop. I am sad the X is gone, but the X wasn't really needed when recreating this work and piece. I do think you have something good here and the improvements are a plus so keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing to really change here.

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Cyberdevil responds:

It's like I read your mind even before you wrote the previous one huh. ;) Glad you liked it! Pretty happy with how it turned out too.

[Pixel Pico Sprites]

Wow

Okay these right here well they are pretty neat and interesting. I do think they need a bit more details in a background, but as they are sprites you are showcasing to use, I understand why you stuck with the black background as that will make it easier to transfer over if any users wish to use them in their game. I think the detail and expressions in each character of PICO is nice and I would hope you'd still finish your game. There is always time, even if a short version where you toss him and see how far he goes, you know, something basic, it would always be a good addition and interesting to view. Don't give up on things you start, because I am liking what I see so far.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You should make this into that game you wanted to make

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Cyberdevil responds:

Right about the background, and a bit more aesthetic than say pink or green... which seemed to be the goto colors for sprite sheets back in the day! Hmm yeah, Toss The Pico... that could be something! Nice idea. I still hope to finish the real game some day but that could be a cool spin-off thing...

[Suennette relax]

Nice art

So this was pretty cool, you are talented for sure your style shows that and every little detail shows that, I cant think of anything I would change on this piece as this was a solid piece of art here, Well here is a piece that sparks some interest well with me atleast, some things could be better but you have shown some decent effort here. Now I must say before I do head out, that this piece is the reason why I love to review, and hope to review and view great talent stuff like this in the future, but untill then keep making some brilliant stuff because you have some fatastic styles of work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I cant think of anything I would change on this piece as this was a solid piece of art here

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