XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober #17]

Ok decent

This was a nice idea to take your last inktober work and add something to it. It is like you took the shell of the art and placed it as a focal point with a nice artistic style. I think the way you kept it more as a sketch was an interesting choice and the fact that each version of him isn't exactly the same was also a nice touch. I think overall this is a good job but I would add up a border to this one as this one could use more lines to go with the nice textured lines within Luffy.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a border to match those nice lines within each Luffy.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Well it's three different experiments with the outlines, but the middle one does stand out yes. Thanks for the feedback!

[A Research Trip]

Adorble and Cute

An adorble and cute piece here because the character was "SIMPLE" and the art on this was refreshing and love the colors used on this, very good "VIEW-SIZE" aswell so nice job indeed on this fine art piece, I cant really think of anything to change on this I love the subtle and simplistic style you pushed in this, anyways nice work once again.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I cant really think of anything to change on this I love the subtle and simplistic style you pushed in this

~X~

[Inktober #14]

Decent

OK so this one is a bit tricky, you see, I know what you are capable of doing and to make something so simple is good but not great. I do think in terms of artistic ability you can make something as small as a smile a good thing, but I wish there was more. I mean, the lines are sharp, the color is popping, but nothing more to this one. I know you probably were not going for something big here, but I expect more detail from you with these, but that is a personal opinion.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice but needs more detail and not as simplistic

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

I don't think art quality should be measured in terms of effort so much as the end result. ;) But that seems to be what you're contemplating too! Appreciate the thoughts. Though I do like simplicity too. Sometimes less is more IMO.

[Inktober #27]

Love

This one is like a good one about love and the different aspects that love can have. The purples you used here are nice because they have a vibrancy to them. I think you picked a good selection of colors that compliment each other and give off that sense of love and kind of gives me that feeling of peace too. I just wish you cropped this one a bit as a lot of unused space can look nice, but this seems a bit much to me. I'd make this more of a decal design.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Too much unused space, just try to crop it next time and make it more of a decal

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hmm yeah, could've had less background here. Thanks for the review!

[Landscape in Corel Painter X]

Nice Setting

This was a nice "PAINTING" love the view point you have on this its really nice this one almost seems like it needs a sun or more beam of light on this one maybe even reflecting more shine and gistering off the river and such, thats just an idea but what you have created here is one beautiful painting indeed, and at the end of the day it is also fine as it is now so nice creative work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
almost seems like it needs a sun or more beam of light on this one maybe even reflecting more shine and gistering off the river and such

~X~

[Cleansing rain]

Very cool

So this was very "COOL" I really like these drakon like "CHARACTERS" the pose of the character is great I think some lightning comming down onto the sword in this pose is needed to complete the visual look of it, your textures and colors are spot on with some very deep tomns here so nice job indeed on this beautifull and well designed characters anyways keep up the good work as always.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think some lightning comming down onto the sword in this pose is needed to complete the visual look of it

~X~

[Worms!]

Really unique

So this here was really "UNIQUE" not just because of all the "BLOOD" but because of the design and expression on the characters face now I would suggest more blood and have some dripping from end of chainsaw and I would even go as far as adding some splatter on backround, but this was a pretty unique and artistic piece of artwork that you do have here and I was pretty impressed with this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest more blood and have some dripping from end of chainsaw and I would even go as far as adding some splatter on backround

~X~

[Adopt Batch - Detectives?]

Another combo

And here you have another good combo of charchters you have some nice charchter work all throughout your profile and I have enjoyed your all and have enjoyed reviewing your work as it's amazing stuff this is another great piece with no changes needed some nice detail indeed and I encourage you to keep making more great charchters they are a lovely design of detail and beautiful clothing

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above no changes needed here this was some amazing work

~X~