XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[HighwayCity]

Wow so beautiful

I love myself some SciFi "CITY" senes just like you have presented here, I would suggest adding some cars with lights driving like its an active city or something along them lines, You have the Ambition for unique stuff like, This was neat and strange and very impressive, it has a certain artistic feel to the art style and it was just strange but that was a good thing, I really liked it, And I really like the Rapid Presentation But Finally I will come to an end here with this review in a bit, Well I do hope to see more work of yours, But with all that said, one thing I will say is that this was a fun piece of artwork, and a pleasure to review.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I would suggest adding some cars with lights driving like its an active city or something along them lines

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Kamikaye responds:

THanks !
I admit, I forgot about cars and stuff while doing the color overpass. I experimented with some holo ads etc. but deleted them again.

[me, myself and I]

Really nice work here

So this was some nifty "WORK" I think you could have done a lot more here "ESPECIALLY" with that pencil like maybe show that he or you have drawn all in the backround some design then come to the signature, might make it a more nifty piece of art here, you have a great character here though,

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I think you could have done a lot more here especially with that pencil like maybe show that he or you have drawn all in the backround some design then come to the signature

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[Inktober #20]

Simple and good

Oh good I am glad you are trying something else out here, I do like the use of lego and not another Luffy piece (no offense because as they are good, they get a bit boring). I like the red you picked out and the line shine detailing inside the lego block is pretty accurate. I think the font under it is great and you have a nice steady hand for fonts but you know I enjoy those already. I do think the white space here is okay but a border wouldnt hurt, maybe smaller legos as a border? I do think this one was good and nice to look at.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A border could be added, maybe small legos all around in a square? Just an idea but nice job

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Cyberdevil responds:

No offense taken, though if you're going through my older work... best prepare yourself. ;) Smaller legos hmm, that could be something! Thanks for the review!

[Temptation]

Adorble

This piece here was pretty "ADORBLE" here maybe its the view shot but the legs seems a tad short from that view not sure exactly, just a little thing I noticed on this one, you have some amazing work great character detail and beautiful girl here, make more like this soon.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe its the view shot but the legs seems a tad short from that view not sure exactly, just a little thing I noticed on this one

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[Mobile]

Wow very nice

I guess it really was a "VOODOO" mobile lol great humor this one just needs some added color and detail in the backround, This one was like a speeding train meaning you pushed the limits on this one as fast as can go, the ideas stood out very well and it all came together in a nice fasshion I was pretty impressed, so nice work here on this one, I like what you have presented.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
just needs some added color and detail in the backround

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[Inktober #12]

Excellent

I think this one here, well this one was nice and had a fun element to it. I think the light red with yellow is the proper demonic colors to use and really worked well as an entire piece. I do think you could have added more of a border to this one and then gave it a more completed look. I also find the lines a bit too fuzzy, like the image is getting lost in a bit of a mess, but it is still good non the less. I think that you have a good talent with inktober submissions, but this one feels like it could have had more to it and I know you can do more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail, add a border but nice overall

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Cyberdevil responds:

I'd say sketchy more than fuzzy, which I was going for a bit here, but thanks for the feedback! With the background in particular do feel it could've been clearer.

[Inktober #11]

Nice change

Good job on doing something a bit different. I do like the change here and adding a hiaku. What an odd one tho, where did the dragon come from why is he sipping? So many questions, but good use of characters to match your hiaku. I think the line art is good for solid black inking and I do love your font as always, but I feel this one could have done with some color. I mean it is a dragon and those stand out much more with color and pizzaz. I think just next time add color and you'll be good. This did remind me of an old newspaper cartoon and really looks professional.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try adding some color nice time, more so to the dragon

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Cyberdevil responds:

So many questions, and alas, no answers! XD If I recall correctly I was going for the most random thing I could think here. Mission accomplished? Good advice with the color, do think that would've looked better here. TY for the reviews!

[Potatoman Begins: Page 9]

Somany entries

That little "GREEN" guy was cute he just stole it from potatoman lol, Wow Im just amazed at howmany of these entries you have, you must have had a lot of free time back in the day, anyways onto this particular submission, these characters they just crack me up and made me chcukle almost out of my chair so nice job on that, good stuff here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
no changees here it was a great entry.

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[Inktober #8]

Decent

Ok this one needs work. You have great drawings and snow, and even a character from snow, but it is just too damn light in color. I had to really squint and look at this to see the details and all that. Maybe you were going for that snow-storm, white-out, effect, but it was just too much for me. I would make the vibrance of the blues more aparent and then darken the blue balls and character a bit. Maybe you could even add a glow to them to give the snow effect still and not lose the color to all this white? I think it is white-washed and I see great work behind that.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The blue balls and character are lost in the white, so make them darker so you see them better, but good job non-the-less

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Cyberdevil responds:

I'm noticing that these drawings really look a bit different with different monitors, and with the one I'm currently viewing it through: can definitely see what you're getting at! At home it was so much clearer. Whiteout effect yes, but not this much... I'll keep this in mind.