XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pinch Punch]

Great Humor in this one

Ohmy that was something else, I love the last "FRAMES" that really made the story here, you should make more adventure with that style of character there at the end maybe someone to face off vs potato man, the humor and ideas here, keeps me chuckling away and wanting more the adventure that your characters take, those are just the little things that keep me interested in these entertaining and full of adventure webcomic, and I cant wait for even more from you, so keep it up.

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you should make more adventure with that style of character there at the end maybe someone to face off vs potato man

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[Happy]

Another Cool entry

So with this one the "JOKE" was funny the text in the text bubbles got really small at the end was hard to read, but no major thing here, Nice little web comic and some very amusing endings like this particular one did, I have been reviewing this little gem of yours for awhile now and I still find everyone still as amazing as the first so really nice job on this one, and hope you always grace us with some really amazing web comic submissions.

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the text in the text bubbles got really small at the end was hard to read, but no major thing here

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[Manhole]

An entertaining element

Ohmy I was not "EXPECTING" that outcome you really have outdone yourself on this one and it was funny, I love how colorfull this one is, This was a full fun comic entry no changes this time, These are very entertaining and you for sure bring on a new element of suprise from start to finish you make this entry and all of the entries a "BIG-BLAST" of fun the jokes always "WELL-EXECTUTED" and make for some good entertainment so props to you on an amazing series of web comic.

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This was a full fun comic entry no changes this time

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[LOZ:OOT 20th anniversary]

Wow amazing

I love your work and this is a "PRIME" example of it you really know how to make sprites and pixel you are the king of "PIXEL" Now here was a great find you really dont see many people making stuff like this anymore but I am glad I can find stuff like this. Alright so before I go keep up the good efforts and unique ideas, and I am glad I had the chance to review this piece and hope to review more in the comming future, Because this was something to admire and the imagination was pretty good on this one so bring more of that imagination onto the next piece.

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No changes unless its more shine lol anyways nice work.

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[Chamber of Solitude]

Very nice

Immediately the "GLOW-OF-THE-SETTING" is noticeable. The predominant presence of a white color is fitting with additional cool colors such as beige and teal, In all of the brightness the "FEMALE-CHARACTER" is still apparent in all her detailed glory with the sharp line work, The intricate design behind her as well as the glowing sphere she’s sitting on "PRODUCES" an impression of divine omniscience for her, That idea if correct is compatible with a bright presentation, A lack of clearness to her surroundings also brings in mysteriousness for her character and what it could represent which provokes the viewer’s thoughts.

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Another amazing piece and design seems like you could have more domminant lighting come from behind her.

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VortexVisionz responds:

Thank you for the detailed review! It’s nice to know that my work can be looked with the vibes I try to put into a piece. Also nice to know from another’s perspective the things I could improve upon! Thank you

[Eternal Voyage III - Fire Edition]

Nice and nifty design

The inclusion of warm fiery colors against a dark background makes for a beautiful radiance to the entire image, Despite the "VISIBLE-SHARPNESS" to the line work an optical illusion is made, For the intricateness of the design it "CREATES-AN-APPEARANCE" of overlapping, The exactness of the interior designs also contribute to the wondrous look, without acting as a sensory overload to the eyes Very interesting piece overall.

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So just like the purple on this was very nice, some orange border on this would be cool.

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[Swords to Plowshares]

Very nice

So this was pretty good I love the "KNIGHT" here and his shattering of "WORDS" the lighting effect was nice, But I did think there was too much lighting comming in but it was still pretty good, maybe add some shine on the armor too, anyways some nice work here I really enjoyed this.

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I did think there was too much lighting comming in but it was still pretty good, maybe add some shine on the armor too

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[You don't want to mess with me]

Nice Character

Definite line work pertains to a cartoon-esque character, Added shading along certain areas of the body amplifies the depth of the muscles and thus brings it into the "CENTER-OF-FOCUS" within the drawing, Detailing of the weapons and ammunition also gives the viewer something new to see in all corners of the drawing, The choice of a cracked "GREY-BACKROUND" also aids in the tone of the photo the rough concrete texture depicted favors the dangerous appearance of this character maintaining the impression portrayed.

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Very nice character, I could see some added shine like the sid or points on the gun his sunglasses and other little shine points here and there.

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[Maximilian the magician]

Unique

A very dark image in terms of "COLOR-TONES" though the brightness of the intricate background designs provides some sort of brilliance, The addition of a soft white along the borders of the character’s cape further validates the "APPEARANCE" of illumination, Hard line work is also used nicely, in terms of "FORMING-A-BOLD" enough outline of the character’s figure against the darkness, The blue galaxy scenery beneath the cape is a nice contrast to the dominating color of the background, eyes and power orb between the character’s hands.

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Very nifty design here especially with that backround, the orb the character is holding seems like it could have more of a glow and sparkle come off of it.

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[Ink Wash Girl]

Nice and dark

Very "DARK" here with this one but thats what makes this one artistic in its own dark element you even have a nice backround but the detail on the character is really nice too you have some amazing work indeed, onlything here is that seems like something is missing on right side maybe a simple prop will do the trick, anyways nice work.

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onlything here is that seems like something is missing on right side maybe a simple prop will do the trick

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