Brilliant entry
Haha I got a good "CHUCKLE" out of this one, the idea of a "COMIC-BOOK" was a brilliant idea so props to you on that one, Really fantastic entry you have here, so for me the comic style has really come out well so keep making these, and keep making great stories as you have with this one I love the adventure you take your characters on, there is somany things I enjoy about these pieces but the story really excites me.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
once again this needs no changes its brilliant.
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