XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Who love doughnut as much as i do?]

Doughnuts

So this was a nice random one now for some improvment on this one I think you can have the doughnuts glow on the bottom would be a nice little effect that can enhace the quality of this art piece just an idea to think on

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the doughnuts glow

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[Don't judge me!]

As always cute

And here was another cute one these characters say the darkest things and I have to say that the don't used is basic I could see you using a more fancy font for more quality but that's just an opinion and idea to try

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some better don't in this one

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[Ass Cheeks & Pantsuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu]

Now this was cute

This was really cute the character is really nice great form and love that color tone and you used alot of it Wich made for some nice visuals and some very nice details in the background I honestly don't think you need any changes on this at all I like it very much so no improvement needed on this one but as that's said keep up the fine work that you do

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes this is already a fantastic piece of art

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JaviJavi responds:

DUDE haha thanks for all the love man god damn X^D i just read everyone of you critiques, thanks for even taking the time out to do that. Theres always things that i could improve on thats no doubt, so thanks for pointing those issues out for me ! again thanks so much for doing that, its always good to get an objective view about my art !

[Beth]

Very nice

I actually love this it is very red and pinkish but I'm sure that's your intent on things I do think you could use some type of border or frame on the edges to give it that portrait feel even a nice wood frame would be very fitting with this piece your art style is pretty fantastic and I love this whole art piece so I will say is that this was a nice piece of work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frames or borders

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[idontknow2]

This was cute

So it's nice to see you draw about your boyfriend I like the two versions here and I would love to see you do more your line work could be polished and some added color would be a plus but I like it very much just needs some polish

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More polish needed more smoother line work and some color would be nice

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Rgessimai responds:

Thanks for ur comments

[dawn chorus (2017)]

This was cute

This was a cute charchter and I like the color added I do think you could do some shading in the character that would really improve on this as a whole and ad some background work as well maybe a scenery of some type

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad a backdrop in the background

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[REALM4]

Interesting

Well first of all this sketch is interesting and is also entertaining I do think you should refined and polish your drawings more take more time with them and ad some color as well as some background work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color more time on your drawings more polish and some background detail

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[my moms art]

Well notbad

Well I have to say that is notbad at all you I mean your mom has some skill and it's notbad of a drawing wouldn't mind some color though but it's still pretty good if you ask me just add a tad bit of color and maybe fill in bland spots

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color and some bland fill ins

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[NG Phone]

Very nice

So I like this and like the idea of it all but seems to be missing a camera hole or something there not sure if that was intentional but as for the phone itself it's pretty slick looking love the colors on it nuce work and looks like a real case and phone you show off some nice detail here and I was pleased with it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad a camera spot

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[Cloud FFVII]

Some really nice work

Now this was really good the hair is nice and love the fine details in the hair his emotion on the face I could see him having more but it was still ok and I wouldn't mind some type of design or pattern in the background but have to say this was pretty solid work very talented and love you art style here maybe even adding some borders or frames like a picture but anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frames or borders for edges

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