XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Onward, Ponty!]

Very cinematic

So yes this was very cinematic you really made it feel like it was I think when the car is turning you should have the wheels kick up some dirt or something that would be a nice effect and cool to see the animation on this flows very well anyways hope to see more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some flying dirt and rocks on the turn

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[Some practice]

Good practice

So your practice is really good it's very cartoon like and love those background elements of shapes and colors are nice I would say ad more design like that it really gives it an art style and very artistic so nice work here nice job and good effort on this classy piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more design on the background

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WooleyWorld responds:

No I want a simple background.

[A Frosty Boi]

Very cute

This one was really cute I like this one it was really cute love the extra big head and the crooked carrot I honestly can't think of anything to change about this if anything it would be to have a sunset or sunlight comming down but nice work here and good snowman

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sun beam or sunlight

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WooleyWorld responds:

No this is past the point of sunset so there would be no beams.

[Bruh.]

Nice

This was nice I like this a really good structure of charchter and it's like a nice card almost the background was not bad I like the squares in the background I think you should have another layer of squares but anyways really good work here I like your art style and look forward to more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra layered square in background

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WooleyWorld responds:

Nah. I want a very simple background. These drawings do not warrant detailed backgrounds.

[Twerk Team Abbi]

This was cute

Well this was cute I like the little animation too it was cute and the fresh colors were pretty good too I think you could ad a window like if it was a bedroom and there could be some on Lookers would be a nice little prop and extra effect anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A small window

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WooleyWorld responds:

That's incredibly subjective.

[Mutt and Chopps]

Awesome

This is awesome I love the background too but seems like the background could have had a sunset with a beam of light hitting there backs but the characters are really nice and we'll structure on them but anyways nice job here I like your work keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A sunlight would be nice

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WooleyWorld responds:

I prefer midday, and there are no sunbeams in this scenario.

[Drawing of a Friend]

Very nice indeed

So I saw the sketch or drawing for this one and here you have the black and white version very nice indeed I think if the hair was red this would almost be perfect you really did a nice job of shading and the black and white style here the color was still very good though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some colored hair or some part of her colored

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[Sketch of a friend of mine.]

Really good drawing

And here was a really good drawing love how the light changes the color on this the drawing itself was really good and a nice style this would be really cool with some nice color and even a backdrop scene of some type but anyways you should push this one forward and ad that full color and background but besides that this was pretty solid

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color and background

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[Vodka]

Nice shine

So this one here was a nice shine and had lots of shiny all over you should have her glasses shine or glare a bit those would be the only changes I would do but other then that this was a good piece of artwork and nice charchter she looks like a teacher anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on her glasses

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[dead gril]

Glow

Well for a dead girl she can have some glow stuff I actually think you can make the stuff glow even more but have to say that was a huge effect that made it work even better the character work was great and very well structured very nice art piece here I liked it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more glow and shine from what she's holding

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