XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[80s Shoujo Tomoko]

Very nice

So this was some nice work and a nice looking charchter you have here the detail is pretty impressive the style is nice however I do think you need some added shine in her hair maybe like a streak of shine I would go one step even further and ad some sparkle in her eye there but overall you have done some nice art design on this charracter with some nice structure to go along so really nice job indeed here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Well as mentioned a few above suggested ideas only

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[Creepy Susie And Fire]

I really like this

So you have some really nice animation behind the character and it really came out well. Even like the reflection of the flames on her but seems you could have added the reflection on the rock and the skull at the same time too but you do have some nice take on this whole piece here so really nice work and nice animation too I like your style on this one and do hope you make more just like this one here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Ad some flame reflection to the rock and skull

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #10.03]

Amazing

And in this one you bring some nice action scenes and the art has some really nice detail as well love the texture too so nice job here with some deep detail so keep up the brilliant work that you always do

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Can't change anything as you have pushed out some nice detail

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #10-2.02]

Haha nice

So this was a good idea and I guess glow effects can really go a long way and covering up nude pasta is part of that haha anyways I had a blast with this so keep up the fun and exciting work as you have done here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Can't believe I'm saying this but less glow lol

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #13.01]

Cool

So here we are once again with some nifty design and these are just so good from frame work to the artwork too your art detail is pretty good and they can be amusing aswell so I was pretty impressed with this whole piece here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I was impressed with the whole piece so no changes here

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[Daisy]

Wow nice

I can't but get a nice chuckle out of this one the Daisy flower popping out like that is very funny and amusing some nice little detail here and some nice little charchter the design of the character was good I think you can even ad into this with some daisies growing our of the ground but anyways nice work here it was amusing and hope you make more like this piece here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Ad some dasies growing out. Of the ground

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[The Care Taker and Knight Drag.]

Nice drawing

So very nice drawing here I do think you could ad onto this piece like some added shine and sparkle on the sword and also some small extra details in the background maybe some props but overall this was a decent little piece of artwork here and I look forward to much more from you but anyways keep up the awesome work as you have done here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
A few changes like shine and sparkle and some background detail

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[For the Children!]

Amazing

So this one was beautiful I love the subtle color in this even the borders was pretty good and I am looking but don't see any need for any changes on this one you have outdone yourself here with an absolute beautiful piece of artwork here and some amazing detail very good structure here and I was pretty amazed with this from top to bottom so a masterpiece is what I see here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
As mentioned no changes what so ever

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #10.01]

Wow nice

So this was a really nice scene here I did think on the blast of Ray you could have had more brighter and vibrant colors but this was still a good piece of work here and some nice visual here too so keep up that amazing work

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More vibrant colors and lighting on the blast of Ray

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #10.02]

Haha nice

This was especially nice because it did have Ghostbusters in it and they are pretty well designed too very talented work on your charchter designs so keep that part of things going strong no changes needed for this beautiful piece here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Didn't find anything that this one really needed attention on

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