XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Final Fantasy Lesson #10.02]

Haha nice

This was especially nice because it did have Ghostbusters in it and they are pretty well designed too very talented work on your charchter designs so keep that part of things going strong no changes needed for this beautiful piece here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Didn't find anything that this one really needed attention on

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #10-2.01]

Another great one

So here was another great one you had you have some amazing charchter designs some nifty background details and it was entertaining like a comic just wish these we're longer these have some decent potential about them

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Make these longer

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[CRAZYLOVE]

Very detailed

So here was some very detailed scene right here I love all the details from the chess board to the giant mallot I do think some lighting sources and some added color that is vibrant could make a small difference in this beautiful art piece here you do some nice work here and it's a beautiful sight so keep that up your art and design is very nice and artistic so keep doing what you do best

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
A few ideas suggested

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[Maeday]

Nice scene

And here was a nice scene you have here I am enjoying this yellow lighting I thaught you could have added more yellow beam comming down on that hallway or corridor the scene is an action scene Wich tells a sort of story but the added lighting effects could be a nice touch up on this piece here so nice efforts all the way around but untill your next project submitted keep making more like this one

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More yellow beam from the lights

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[Know Who You Are]

Intense

So this was a pretty intense art piece you have here I love all the different detail in this the lighting effects are pretty good too I think on that green element you could have had more of a glow on things there it's a nice little detail that could have more glow about it but regardless you have done some nice work here and hope you make even more for us to enjoy so keep the good work

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some effects detail like some added glow

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #4.02]

Haha nice work

And another great element of the comic like series you have created here the character work is amazing onlything I would change in this is make them longer maybe a few more frames overall this was pretty amazing stuff here anyways untill next time

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
These comic style pieces could be longer

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #6.01]

Very nice

So this was another cool comic piece and some nice action scene here too I like that you put a lot of emotion in your charchter faces a nice detailed comic piece here don't think this one needs any changes here just make more soon

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Another fine art piece that does not need any changes at this time

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #6.03]

Cool

So this was cool you have some nice scenes in these comic style art pieces and the text bubbles are pretty nifty here the art is pretty amazing too and you have prepared a nice comic style piece here make more

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
None with this entry it's solid

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[Red Elf]

Nice

So this was pretty good, the white "EYES" are something interesting You should have had the eyes glow the orb she is holding could have had more of a glow too, but the character straucture was amazing a very unique character you have created here with some amazing details here and there.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
You should have had the eyes glow the orb she is holding could have had more of a glow too

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[Gladius]

Very nice

So this "SWORD" is pretty good very realistic, the blade I feel could have more shine maybe even some scratches like its been through some battle or something I would even suggest some backround details too, you do some nice work here very nice detail you have created here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I feel could have more shine maybe even some scratches like its been through some battle or something I would even suggest some backround details too

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