XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober #30 Heavy Metal Hard Rock Color]

Better

This one here is very much like your last "ROCK VS" drawing but this one is much better, the elimination of all those black lines and giving more details into the effects and things in the middle was a good thing you did to improve this piece. I do think you could still make this bigger in quality and size as it is a nice concept. The effects are still not here but you used details with your lines to create some nice textures and detailing. Overall a nice piece of art and more improved upon your last one, so always good when you come back to things and tweak them.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better than the last similar one but still needs to be bigger and have more effects inside it

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Cyberdevil responds:

Well that easily decided. :) Still not sure which one I like best here. Good notes!

[Welcome to Hell]

Interesting character

Very nice skulls I would suggest having one or two of the skulls have glowing eyes as a nice effect, As always you bring on some interesting character work here like the lines are very smooth and create a beautiful design and structure of the "CHARACTER-OR-CHARACTERS", so on that alone you have impressed me and I am always "LOOKING-THROUGH" your profile for much more work of your characters.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest having one or two of the skulls have glowing eyes as a nice effect

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[Starved Vampires]

Amazing

Its amazing what you can do to make these things truly formulate all with just black and white line work, there the small details here and there it makes it all come together with some shades and detail, very nice black and white style you have here, hope you keep making these black and white types.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
My suggestion would be slap a colored border on this it might accent the black and white better.

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[Game Character 2 Colour]

Cool colors

Wow so this was cool with the "TWO-COLORS" the "EYE" was looking pretty wicked if you ask me though the shadow underneeth the character was pretty cool too Some added backround on this would be cool But I understand this is to showcase the character, it does seem like theres alot of space from his eye to thee top of his head but maybe thats the intent also, regardless you have some nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Really no changes since this is for showcasing a character design but some backround detail would have been nice.

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[Inktober #29 Heavy Metal Rocks Hard]

The Rock

I choose the "ROCK" as the winner here. This one here well this one is an interesting little idea you have about size and weight being an obstacle and how they can verse each other and see who wins in the end. The lightning bold seperating them is a nice idea too, just like in a video game right before a battle you get this vs battle look. I like the yellow and oragen coloring you've gone with in this as well. I think this one could be a bit bigger in terms of size and needs some glow effects for the middle ligtning but otherwise a good one and a nice ROCK

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Bigger and more effects inside it

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Cyberdevil responds:

Quick decisions between the two elemental genres too. :D Thank you!

[Zombie Snail]

Wow

Now this was something "DEEP" the texture is uncanny so deep with the colortone and you made it look very realistic and this was a beautiful piece here you really have outdone yourself here with this one and I was super impressed, I might suggest some added lighting effects maybe it would reflect off the shell, but anyways nice stuff here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I might suggest some added lighting effects maybe it would reflect off the shell

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[Alien Hominid Zombie]

Wow Nice

Wow this was really nice I just love the look and "EXPRESSION" you gave him with the frontal pose, love this deep backround but most of all you gave him this look of he "ACOMPLISHED-HIS-GOAL", the detail is really intense, I think this could be bigger canvus wise and maybe even ad some frames and fancy borders on this like a gallery piece, but other then that this was a well drawn and very nice detailed piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
this could be bigger canvus wise and maybe even ad some frames and fancy borders on this like a gallery piece

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[Inktober #28 Dalmations]

Different

I actually really like this one, it is like an abstract piece of art and looks great. The way the lines cut out the main dalmation and the images of other dogs interlacing within the main one is pretty neat. I think this is the same dalmation used before in other pieces, but it works here as you changed it up and made it something new and interesting. I love the way you have a nice red as the background and it holds it all together to make it very complete. I would have liked to see a border and something more inside the outlines tho, to match up with the lines and textures you have created.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A border would be a nice addition here

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Cyberdevil responds:

Borders as in shading? There is a lot of shading here too, though maybe a little too light to be noticed fully. Speaking of borders: guess you might appreciate #27. ;) Thanks for another good review!

[StreetArt2011]

Nice

Now that was some impressive stuff, I have actually seen other people do this on the streets of vegas and california and its some amazing work you are very talented, there is nothing I would change on this you are too talented for me to offer any changes so keep doing what you do best.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
there is nothing I would change on this you are too talented for me to offer any changes

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[Dragon]

Nice drawing here

Nice dragon here, some nice detail maybe some blank paper or maybe you could color the backround, You have a really nice drawing here, its a good detailed design, it may even look better as a black and white design as you have it now, so maybe in the future some added color would be a nice touch but other then that this was a really cool drawing you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some nice detail maybe some blank paper or maybe you could color the backround

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