XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Dino & the bovine]

Very cute

This one was pretty cute, I like what you did here and its just a refreshing visual and doesnt really need anything at all, maybe adding more hearts and a sunshine glow from pacman like if he is the sun, just an idea though, but anyways very nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
adding more hearts and a sunshine glow from pacman like if he is the sun

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[Sushi Flower]

Nice idea

I think this was a nice idea, it almost reminds me of a tulup of sushi, but as some slight improvement on this piece I would say ad some shine to the top of that sushi part that would be nice, maybe as some backround work there could be more sushis in the backround growning.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine effects would be nice.

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[Character Design]

Nice character

So I like what you did here very nice detail you added into this character, love the "BIG" eyes I would ad more strands of purple on her though, and also think about adding some backround just some scene or something but not black, but besides that this was really good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would ad more strands of purple on her though, and also think about adding some backround just some scene or something but not black

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[Kayleigh Package]

Ok cool

So this was pretty nifty I like all the elements here you could use some shine on the helmet and some glow on the sabre, those are just a few things I would ad as a form of improvement here but nice work overall. Yes I have to say this was somenice work and some nice efforts, you for sure know what youare doing and it shows, some areas could be better, but you have it down for the most part. So my Insight on this whole piece is that you have Captured something differant and unique. Ok so this is where I call it an end for the review, but may I mention that it was a nice and fun experience reviewing this piece as its a fave of mine. good Polish on this will make it an Extended masterpiece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you could use some shine on the helmet and some glow on the sabre.

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[KK Sketch'd]

Cute

So I found this one to be cute love the fresh look about it, it was actually very fresh looking and a nice element here, love the "BIG" eyes and such and really came out well, I personally would ad some more "DHINE" to the eyes or something, but thats just me.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine to the eyes.

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[Bad Landing]

Very nice

Wow I must say this one was a pleasure of art you have here, Love how theres a battle here somehow, I do think theres a small area of improvement that could be done here like the engines of the ship or the lights in the towers could be light up more and with more glow ofcourse just something to think on with lighting effects.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think theres a small area of improvement that could be done here like the engines of the ship or the lights in the towers could be light up more and with more glow

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[We See It Our Own Way]

artistic

Very artistic style you have here I like the style, I love all the different color you have here and love all the "VARIATION" of elements here its a really nice job here and comes off well on the eyes, I wouldnt mind more texture in the details of things but overall this was nice.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt mind more texture in the details of things

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[Walteh Woite]

Very good portrait

This was a good portrait of Walter white and I like the paint style on this it has a strong likeness of him so that was a plus of things and I really like your paint style I do think you could have put something in the background maybe Jessie Pinkman or the rv itself like in the far distant but adding some small props like that would be really cool

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small props in the distance

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MeGummyBall responds:

those are some good ideas. haven't been on newgrounds recently but it's good to be back and finding out i got feedback, thanks.

[Shadow Hawk]

Nice artistic style here very beautiful

A very beautiful piece here love all the different color here love all the different styles but I do think this could use more shine to it it just needs a tad more to it some sparkle on the silver parts of it all all the colored parts are very nice and make it jump out at you with artistic color but anyways nice work here really loved this so nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sparkle and shine

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[Marie Antoinette (Vigée le Brun)]

Very nice

So you do so well on these characters the structure just so well done and so nice in detail color and textuture just seems to come together very well and your back round is fantastic only thing I would suggest changing is putting some glow on the flower but that's really about it anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some hlow on the flower

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Drawwithyuna responds:

Thank you! Your comment is very much appreciated! :-)
I am very happy with your feedback and with your help on how I can improve!