XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[portrait]

Nice drawing

So this was a nice drawing here I really like the hair as for some advice the shoulders seem like they could be more spread out and the facial features. Need more emotion in it's face like a smile a smirk etc those are just a few ideas to really improve on but nice overall job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More emotion in the face and spread out shoulders more

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Drawwithyuna responds:

Ahh I really don't love this one! ^^ I worked a lot on my portrait since this one, hopefully I improved a little! Thank for the feedback!

[Leopard]

Nice

This was a beautiful I really love how you match up the skin tone or in this case the furr with the lighting I could really see uou make that light shine like a beam his fur is very luminating so works well with a beam anyways really nice work here subtle and just pleasent on the eyes

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more light like a light beam off the animal

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Drawwithyuna responds:

Thank you for your help and advice! ^^ It's very cool you took the time to help me so much with this drawing and with the other drawings!

[Rouquine]

Smooth

So this was a smooth piece it's like a portrait so with that style I really could see you adding a border frame on this one maybe a deep border with some wood like textuture but nice charchter here very smooth colors and lines made it very beautiful

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some wood like border or frames

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Drawwithyuna responds:

You're right, I also think it would have been nice to add border or frames because right now this portrait seems unfinished... Thank you for the feedback (and once again thank you for all the other feedback)
:-)

[Onsen]

Smooth

The art on this is pretty good you really showed off that smooth and Myst feel of things the rocks could have more edges on it though maybe even some shine but I get the Myst is a factor but anyways nice work here and nice scene here I liked it alot hope to see more from you soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more edges and gashes in the rocks maybe some shine

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Drawwithyuna responds:

All your feedback is really very much appreciated!

[All Legends grow pale]

Love it

I love this it has so much texture in it and so much of a story to be told the gold parts of this axe need shine as well as other little details here and there some lighting and shadowing effects could really push some of those effects including some sparkle on the gold parts but anyways this was a nice job indeed you did here very well done and very well detailed so props to you on such a beautiful creation and story here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle on the gold points and other nifty details

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[Usagi]

Really nice

So this one was really nice I like the sugar cane or bamboo sticks in the background very nicely done and we'll detailed the smoke could look better more like smoke clouds maybe but that's what came off as me just feels like it needs more smoke or something

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More smoke

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[The diver and the jellyfish]

Very nice

This was a very nice piece I love the glow maybe more shine shining on the helmet that would be nice maybe even a blue reflection be of some type that's just an idea that could make this look even more realistic but it's just an idea anyways keep up the good art style

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Put a reflection on the helmet

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Drawwithyuna responds:

One day maybe I'll redraw this and I will definitively add the reflection!

[The Captive Mermaid]

Very beautiful

This was a very beautiful piece I love the bottle with the ship I think that's an area of focus and I think a nice effect change would be to have the bottle glow more with more light up around it as well an idea that will let it shine all on it's own maybe even some sparkle on the chains

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sparkle on the chains and some glow on the bottle

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[Lanterns in the night]

Well this was nice

I really like the lanterns that was a really nice touch and a nice charchter you have here good structure so the thing about the lanterns they should be light up even more like with some sort of glow effect but that's just an idea this does look good as is

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More light up glow on the lanterns

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[Rain]

Really deep

So this one was a nice and deep piece I love the rain dropping down I think some drops of rain should be on her hair falling off somehow but also more water all over but those eyes you did amazing wouldn't mind if you made them sparkle a bit more also I like this piece very realistic and very stylish anyways great work keep at it and make more for us

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More water dripping and a more sparkle in her eyes

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