XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Final Fantasy Lesson 1.02]

Good little comic

So this was a funny one and reminds me of all those moments of gaming and no maps lol but you should make a nice comic from this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make a comic strip from this

~X~

[Heaven&Hell]

Nice

Well here is a nice piece of "ARTWORK" the whole heaven and hell theme is pretty good, I do think this could have been much larger then you could have used more of the canvus or paper to show lots more of the heaven and hell world and conflicts, thats just an idea but what you do have here is a nice art piece of two angels anyways nice detail in this piece it was a vibrant piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think this could have been much larger then you could have used more of the canvus or paper to show lots more of the heaven and hell world and conflicts

~X~

[Inktober #5]

Nice doodle

Ok so this here is pretty nice and good for a doodle and the space is fully covered so you didnt just draw one thing and move on which is always nice to see in art. I am glad you used one full color for this, except for the text, because it really flows well this way. I know some color variations are always good, but this works but it is ink art and that type can all be consistent. I like the text but the color of the text is light, very light, and I almost can't read the text here, so maybe next time just darken up the color and give it more to read off of. The hints of blacks within the blue was a nice touch and shows a highlight to more important aspects of the art here. Overall very good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Darken the color of the text and you have something perfect

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Good advice, thanks! Glad you liked it too!

[Inktober #4]

Decent

I think this one is much better than the last one you've created. I love the use of the greens and the splatter you've got going on to create an almost texture like feeling in the background of the art. I do think inktober is your thing and you've always got a good set of skills when it comes to creating your own text. I probably have said it before that you should be making your own fonts for submissions and showcasing that skills. The only thing I would think you should change is how close the text is to the art of the light, because the colors are so similar you are losing the text and the image in sort of a mesh way, so maybe next time add a color in there or space out your text more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Space out text from the art and just keep them from getting too close

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Spaced out text, check. :) Honestly wasn't that happy with how this one turned out, it does feel crammed together... and blended together too. Thanks for the review!

[Sonic]

Sonic

Haha nice work here on "SONIC" I like the "SPEED-MOTION" he seems to be in, I like how the backround represents speed moment maybe if they were more left to right but regardless they were still a pretty good element, nice detail on sonic to show him in an action moment some good art here and some good character detail so I was pretty pleased with this whole piece of great character art here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like how the backround represents speed moment maybe if they were more left to right but regardless they were still a pretty good element

~X~

[Inktober #1]

Nice try

I know working with a new tablet can be hard and I see you've got the Wacom Bamboo one going on here, but you do need a bit of practice with it. Your style isn't lost using this, but your text is a bit smooched and it can be hard to read like that, but I attribute that to your new device. I think that your use of textures and flare around the text is always nice. It isn't a big art piece but it does have style and I love the use of colors. The fireworks, well they seem like fireworks, are very nice and have that sparkle flare to them. I think overall you have a good new device but you need practice a bit.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above, practice with the new tablet. Overall a good piece.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

First try working with a tablet at ALL too. ;) I'm still more used to the mouse for specific shapes/styles. Feels more precision-based, whereas the tablet's better for faster work and sketches. And just regular writing. This one captured the chaos, I hope. :) Thanks.

[Sloth]

Strange one

So this was a strange and odd "CREATURE" and I understand its just practice with the fur but you did pretty good here, I still think some added backround or props would still improve on this piece, but anyways this was pretty nice work hope to see much much more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I still think some added backround or props would still improve on this piece

~X~

[Daddy's Home]

Nice detail

Wow this is something very nice here, I love the black and white style here, tobad its not in "COLOR" would have been really nice, also seems like you could have filled in the surrounding areas and backround with more detail and or line work but overall this was really a nice piece of work here and I was really pleased with the amaount of "DETAIL" but regardless this was really impressive.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
seems like you could have filled in the surrounding areas and backround with more detail and or line work

~X~