XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Game Character]

Really nice design

So this was a really nice "DESIGN" and good progression of the work you have here, I love the black and white drawing most because its the "RAW" drawing the other colored ones are pretty good too, I think all this needs is some backround props to accent the main focus here, but anyways really nice work here and love this little robot you here would love to see much more designs like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think all this needs is some backround props to accent the main focus here

~X~

[Inktober #18]

Theme

Ok well this is okay and seems you've got a bit of a theme going on here. I see you've decided to make another Luffy piece, which is fine. You've certainly captured that flow up effect like the pain is being sucked or he is falling losing parts of himself. I think that the white space here is your only bad part. I would add more in the background, and if not, then a border or a bit of texture lines like you did in the past. Lineart usually has a lot of lines going on and INKtober is pretty much the same deal to me. Overall it was nice to see another interpretation of this character you seem to love.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the amount of white space and add up some textures to help this flow more and seem more like an INK piece

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hmm well I'm not sure I agree this would actually be better with a background, the white's like a part of his fading away, in a way... but does get me curious how it'd look with a simple color; maybe something darker... might try that too! Thanks.

[Torso]

Wow very good

Wow this was very intense and I have "REVIEWED-YOUR-STUFF" before and love your work this particular "PIECE" is some of your best stuff the sweat dripping is very realistic and the body and bone structure is very deep in realistic mannor so really nice job on this one and really good work, some type of backround would have been nice but since this was more of a showcase of the torso its pretty good as is, so anyways keep up the amazing work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some type of backround would have been nice but since this was more of a showcase of the torso its pretty good as is

~X~

[Inktober #30]

Simple

Ok so this was one was decent and simple and it had a lot of things I do like going on in it. I think the clouds are very nice and create the mood you are going for, but they are really really fair and bright to the point I almost can't really see them. I would darken those ones up a bit just to make it easier on the eyes. The surfer dude is pretty nice and you can tell what you were going for with your line work, so I did like that. The water and wave splashes were well done and details that are very much needed in the kind of ink you were portraying here. I think overall this one was very simple but good one at the end.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Darken your clouds as they are a bit too bright and hard to see.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Solid advice here! Thanks.

[Come here and beat me up!]

Amazing drawing here

Really fantastic detail here like the cliff she lays on, seems like something is missing from the backround and I think you could ad something back there maybe a lighting effect or some glowing eyes, Amazing drawings here, I really love the stylish detail and the elegance of the characters or character, it can be subtle or intense but you bring out the best in the lines, So thats one thing I have come to enjoy about your work here, so keep it up and keep it going strong.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
something is missing from the backround and I think you could ad something back there maybe a lighting effect or some glowing eyes

~X~

[Welcome to Heaven]

Very nice work here

A nice group of "GIRLS" here some extra shine on the leggings might be a plus, but even as is its pretty good, So for me this was a blast to see these nice art pieces very good character work, you have lots of detail in all your character work and its the little details that really make them come out alive and very well, so nice job on that element, and hope to see more character work from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some extra shine on the leggings might be a plus, but even as is its pretty good

~X~

[Rena-X-Mas]

Different

Alright so I have seen some of your other designs on this kind of "CHARACTER-BASE" and I have to say this one was different atleast the "COLORING" and all its a holiday piece so its understandble, Seems like this one could use a frame maybe more hanging stuff like bells and chimes and stuff like that, I enjoyed this art piece and its a nice holiday submission so really nice work on this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
this one could use a frame maybe more hanging stuff like bells and chimes and stuff like that

~X~

[Inktober #29]

Neat

I like this one here, because this one has a cute element to it. Nothing too fancy but simple and clean and straight to the point. The eyes are the best part and draw in that "CAT" like facial features to this character. The orange seems to be your go-to color in terms of the spectrum here. I do like the small wall the character is leaning on, almost like it is stuck there and wants to be free. I do think you could add another border to this one, so it has a more completed look and less white space around the character itself. Other than my words of help, this was a good one and glad to see another character.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just add up a border to this one and I think it'd really complete it.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hmm I was going for more of a peering-over-a-ledge than being stuck, but I can see how it can be seen that way too. :) A full frame would be cool too. Might try that with another one. Thanks again, and glad you liked it!

[Fantasy Bird Concept]

Love these types

I would suggest some subtle backround detail and or props to go with your beutiful design here, These B/W versions are kind of nifty with all sorts of visual apeal to them even with no color they are pretty amazing, they bring a sense of detail before the color is added, but color should be added even if just a little so keep making these drawing designs I enjoy them.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest some subtle backround detail and or props to go with your beutiful design here

~X~

[CoLORWoRLD]

I love it

So I love this piece you have here and I love the "COLOR" im an instant fan of this the color really brings things out and make for a nice delightful piece, You should make more colored pieces like this, they are pretty good, anyways keep up the artistic work of arts such as this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You should make more colored pieces like this, they are pretty good

~X~