XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober #1]

Nice try

I know working with a new tablet can be hard and I see you've got the Wacom Bamboo one going on here, but you do need a bit of practice with it. Your style isn't lost using this, but your text is a bit smooched and it can be hard to read like that, but I attribute that to your new device. I think that your use of textures and flare around the text is always nice. It isn't a big art piece but it does have style and I love the use of colors. The fireworks, well they seem like fireworks, are very nice and have that sparkle flare to them. I think overall you have a good new device but you need practice a bit.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated above, practice with the new tablet. Overall a good piece.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

First try working with a tablet at ALL too. ;) I'm still more used to the mouse for specific shapes/styles. Feels more precision-based, whereas the tablet's better for faster work and sketches. And just regular writing. This one captured the chaos, I hope. :) Thanks.

[Sloth]

Strange one

So this was a strange and odd "CREATURE" and I understand its just practice with the fur but you did pretty good here, I still think some added backround or props would still improve on this piece, but anyways this was pretty nice work hope to see much much more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I still think some added backround or props would still improve on this piece

~X~

[Daddy's Home]

Nice detail

Wow this is something very nice here, I love the black and white style here, tobad its not in "COLOR" would have been really nice, also seems like you could have filled in the surrounding areas and backround with more detail and or line work but overall this was really a nice piece of work here and I was really pleased with the amaount of "DETAIL" but regardless this was really impressive.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
seems like you could have filled in the surrounding areas and backround with more detail and or line work

~X~

[Inktober #13]

Great

I think this one is pretty great in terms of your artistic ability and style. The demon like creature is just spot-on good and has eyes that draw you in. The background of small lines going into each other really helps you focus on the creature. It allows you to have full space and matches with the style of the creature. I love the horns and the way you did that a bit differently. The background color of grey is also fitting because it allows for some depth to this piece. I do think this one has potential for an animated short. I hope you'll do something like that. Good work overall, hope to see you start animating things similar to this soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do like it as is but maybe animate this one next time

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

I'm pretty proud of this one too. :) Thank you!

[Phase Shift Assassin]

Nice

Some really nice "ELEMENT" with this one, the deep texture in the backround is really impressive I do think some added lighting and glow could be added to this piece but for what it is its still pretty impressive as it is, so nice work here and hope you keep up the good work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think some added lighting and glow could be added to this piece but for what it is its still pretty impressive as it is

~X~

[Nude #2]

Nice

A nice drawing and sketch the "SHADING" is really nice its subtle but still pretty good, the pose of the persons backside was nice too this is one of those pieces they teach you in class and you have done well on this beautifull drawing I really like it, I would suggest some backround detail but honestly dont feel like this one needs any, but anyways nice work indeed and hope you make more of these drawings.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest some backround detail but honestly dont feel like this one needs any

~X~

[Inktober #16]

Best yet

You have done something really good and detailed here. I do like the One Piece tribute you've got going on here. You didn't draw it like the anime either, which is always nice to see other peoples interpretations of things they love. I do love the water splashes on the beach, the air, the way he is excited with his arm extending. I do think this one is a well though out piece. You've made a full scene and you made a smile come to my face seeing the joy he has. You expressed that feeling in a positive and fun way and all using your inktober skills. I loved it overall and there isn't much to change on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like this one as is and good job

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Glad you like it, thanks!

[Game Character]

Really nice design

So this was a really nice "DESIGN" and good progression of the work you have here, I love the black and white drawing most because its the "RAW" drawing the other colored ones are pretty good too, I think all this needs is some backround props to accent the main focus here, but anyways really nice work here and love this little robot you here would love to see much more designs like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think all this needs is some backround props to accent the main focus here

~X~

[Inktober #18]

Theme

Ok well this is okay and seems you've got a bit of a theme going on here. I see you've decided to make another Luffy piece, which is fine. You've certainly captured that flow up effect like the pain is being sucked or he is falling losing parts of himself. I think that the white space here is your only bad part. I would add more in the background, and if not, then a border or a bit of texture lines like you did in the past. Lineart usually has a lot of lines going on and INKtober is pretty much the same deal to me. Overall it was nice to see another interpretation of this character you seem to love.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the amount of white space and add up some textures to help this flow more and seem more like an INK piece

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hmm well I'm not sure I agree this would actually be better with a background, the white's like a part of his fading away, in a way... but does get me curious how it'd look with a simple color; maybe something darker... might try that too! Thanks.