XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tatsumaki (Tornado) By Vincent]

This was notbad

So this was notbad and the character is good I like the background detail and like your detail her legs look Abit off seems like it could use more muscle tone almost but anyways that's all I have for this one keep up the good charchter work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More muscle tone

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[Taurus]

Magnificently done

So this was magnificent a piece all on it's own with it's own style of beautiful line work and smoother curves and what I love the most about this is the deep details like the texture of the horns and you could have some shine on her horns and some sparkle on her jewelry that sparkle off in. A glare but besides that this is magnificently done with perfection in mind

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle here and there

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[Will Some Pie Notice Me]

I like it

So this was a nice paint style and like the skin tone on this one I noticed two things on this one and that would be ad some shine on her legs and back side and more emotion in her face expression maybe eyes open those few things could improve on this fine piece really nice paint style of artwork hope to see more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few I ideas and improvments as suggested above

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[Ajna Test]

Very nice

Well first of all very nice animation the flowbof the kick is very real and the body emotion is just right that of a real kick so nice job on that aspect now the things that could be improved on this one would be some wind lines showing she is kicking hard thru the wind and of course her being colored would be cool too some ideas there to try out

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some wind marks and such and some color of course

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[the demons face]

Notbad

So the colors are good and the abstract style is notbad but seems like it's lacking a focus point and needs something say like this was fire in the sky from a volcano or something but does need a focus point it's good for abstract though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some focus point would be pretty cool

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[A fine light]

Interesring

Well this one was interesting I like the sky like feel this has it's a good piece I think you need some sunlight in there and more texture in the clouds but other then that this was pretty good if you ask me a nice job on a skyline

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sunlight and more texture in the clouds

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[Snail or whale]

Different

Well this was different I like it though I like the colors I do think you could use some shades in the outfit and such and a little bit more detail in the background but besides that this was pretty good and a nice start to something even better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shading and some detail in the background

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[ME]

Notbad

Well this is not a bad portrait I think more texture in the skin tone would be good and a lighter background hell even ad a border or frame just something that would improve on this I like it though it's pretty decent

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some borders and frames some more texture in skin

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[Devil Rabbits]

Very intense

Now this one was very intense with the depths of hell even so I liked this for the deep meaning you have here it's hard to tell what's really going on but I do like the style and love the use of color I would suggest some glowing eyes on the heads as that extra effect but that's just an idea what you have here is really good and artistic

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the eyes glow a little

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[The Last 24]

Amazing

Wow I have to say this one is magnificent and amazing on top of that first of all. All the detail all the colors worked so well and you created an action scene I do think the gun fire could have more of a glow on it or radiant surrounding but besides that this was pretty amazing work and really hope you keep making more just like this one but anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra gun fire and more flash and glow around it

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