XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Machine II]

The Detail

Now this was some massive "DETAIL" and it shows off really nice, I think some more shine and sparkle off the metal and other parts of this would be pretty cool, So I like to Extended this review with a bit more here, These kinds of art pieces always seem to bring something a little extra, but these do take a little more time to take in with the interesting visuals, I love your Desire on this and the deep passion when pushing forward the efforts and bring some good energy, You have some nice work here, and while theres so much you can do with this, you didnt need too because what you have is already in great detail.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I think some more shine and sparkle off the metal and other parts of this would be pretty cool

~X~

[One Rat's Quest]

Cool

So this was a "SIMPLE" yet nifty little art piece I like that it was black and white and it is a sketch afterall, I think if you added some spots of color it would be kind of unique, but anyways nice work here a good sketch if you ask me it has some nice style here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I think if you added some spots of color it would be kind of unique

~X~

[Carlie's Text]

Notbad

So this was notbad it was a great "VIEW-SHOT" and the "LIGHTING-EFFECT" was even better too because it came upwards too or seemed that way, I think you could have added more domminant lighting effect here more onto the character, anyways great work here looking good.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I think you could have added more domminant lighting effect here more onto the character

~X~

[Belly]

Decent

So this was pretty good, the "HAIR" was really shiny, the backround was odd but seems like it didnt fit well with the main character maybe some more added stuff in the backround, but you have some nice work here and most of all you have an amazing character here that shows off your talent here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the backround was odd but seems like it didnt fit well with the main character maybe some more added stuff in the backround

~X~

[Machi scribble 01]

Cute art

So this was some "CUTE-ART" here it almost reminds me of some "PIXEL-ART" it was a bit bland though especially in the backround and I could see you adding a little more depth in the backround even as some subtle props and such, But anyways thi was pretty good work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
it was a bit bland though especially in the backround and I could see you adding a little more depth in the backround even as some subtle props and such.

~X~

MachiToons responds:

hmm... yea i get what you're saying, but a scribble is a scribble afterall haha
I meant this mostly just as a warm-up, since I hadn't drawn it quite some time, personally those simple backgrounds are just a way for me to add strong contrast, a color study so to say.

Thanks for the tip regardless, I agree there's just a tad too much negative space in this

[Beyond the Pale - Kur]

Fantastic

And this was fantastic work here I love the different frames of different view shots here you have some really nice detail in this one I do think the gold could shine and sparkle a tad more anyways I look forward to much more

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some more sparkle on the gold

~X~

[Tiny Team JNPR Jobs]

Awsome

Well once again you have done some amazing work here with some massive amounts of detail here you really have some cool art and your charchter detail is pretty awsome maybe ad some thicker or fancier borders

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some fancier borders as an idea

~X~

[Shigaraki Tomura - BnHA Action Shot]

Very nice

So what I love about this piece is the up close hand and giving that 3-d element your texture and detail on the character is pretty amazing you really know how to make some great charchters and I'm glad I have the opportunity to review this one

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Maybe a thicker background

~X~

[Hagakure Tooru - BnHA Action Shot]

This was cool

So this was pretty cool I like the hands and you are going strong with the hands and you have some nice details and effects that make this a super awesome piece here so nice job here anyways keep up the amazing work

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes in this piece it was fantastic as is

~X~

[Nude girl sketch]

Well done here

Wow this was some more great work from you, never seen your work before so its nice to see some new art in the "PORTAL" nice drawing here and nice sketch, would love some added detail like some backround scene maybe a backdrop maybe some props in the distance, but anyways nice work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
would love some added detail like some backround scene maybe a backdrop maybe some props in the distance

~X~