XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[trinity]

Artistic

Wow this was pretty "ARTISTIC" you have some really nice color theme going here too, I do think some outter type of border would have been nice with this it might accent the main piece here you can have in the same reflection as the focus point of art, anyways great stuff here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
some outter type of border would have been nice with this it might accent the main piece here you can have in the same reflection as the focus point of art

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[Lottery]

LOL

Just "19,999" to go lol very funny one here, I would only suggest adding some color, Another great one that you have presented us with, very nice work here, I want to see more characters and more crazyness from these characters, but then again the subtle adventures also work too your story lines are just great and make for some nice stuff here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would only suggest adding some color

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[Stalking huntress]

Love your characters

So these "DRAGON" like characters you make are very nice ideed, you ad so much "DETAIL" love the skin tones and the structure designs on these nifty characters and love what you do with the backrounds, the feathers and the top of the spear needs more shine and sparkl to it, but maybe its not the intent you have some very nice work here love the characrter work you do and hope to see more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the top of the spear needs more shine and sparkl to it

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[The Savior]

Really nice stuff

I like the "GRUNGY" style of the visual here the character itself is pretty welldone and bring out this dark element so very nice work here and I really liked the elements here so no changes here this was a fantastic piece here, I like your work here and this was creative.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I really liked the elements here so no changes here this was a fantastic piece here

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[Fart]

Cool

This was notbad I thaught it could have some better humor or better longer joke, a fun piece here though it was pretty good though, These are always cool, I love the way that you build up the story and give a good ending just like this one it was entertaining, regardless if its your two wild characters or the potato man guy it always seems to be filled with some adventure.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added humor ofcourse.

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[The overseer]

Very well done

Another amazing piece of work here love the "GREYS-PURPLES" on this one another great pose and another great "CHARACTER" the backround on this one was not that apealing so I could see you improving onto this one a tad more, so my advice here is the green lazer could have more of a glow and some of the armor plating on the character could have more shine to it, other then that this was cool.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
so my advice here is the green lazer could have more of a glow and some of the armor plating on the character could have more shine to it

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[The Protagonist]

Really intense

Wow this was really something "INTENSE" I like all the "BLOOD" he is almost like some mad Scientest, the details in this art piece are amazing the backround was just perfect, the blood and the character design very nice indeed, No changes here this was a beautiful piece of work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes here this was a beautiful piec

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[Man Eater]

Nice

This was a nice "VIEW-POINT" seems like theres a scene going on here, I love all the "GLASS" in the backround and the lighting effect for all that matter, so you did ad some nice glare comming off the characters shoulders. I still think there is some room for improvment with more glare shine and sparkle especially with all the glass and lighting from the backround points, anyways really nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I still think there is some room for improvment with more glare shine and sparkle especially with all the glass and lighting from the backround points

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[Leg Pain]

Entertaining

the last "TEXT-BUBBLE" was a classic line that made this pretty good, This is pretty entertaining but then again all of your work is entertaining, These comics are great and just love how each one is pretty different from each one, but I do enjoy them and enjoy how wild times these characters always seem to have, and some nice stories to go with aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well I could see you extending that ending joke there a bit longer

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[Toucanman]

Nice

So this was pretty good, Cant say that I am too familuar with this "CHARACTER" here but I do have to say that this was an interesting piece here love the "SIDE-VIEW" here that beak seems like it could do with some more shine and the backrounds seemed like some added detail would be cool too, you do some nice work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
that beak seems like it could do with some more shine and the backrounds seemed like some added detail would be cool too

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