XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Eraserhead - BnHA Action Shot]

Intense

Now here was another one of your intense charchters the dark outfit reflected well off the borders I still think the borders should have a more thicker hue but it was all good stuff here but anyways keep up the good work

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Thicker borders

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[Potatoman Begins: Page 10]

This one has a wacky element

Haha nice I love how you put all this "VIBRANT" color into these, This entry was confusing a bit but still funny, And no changes onec again here on this fine entry, This comic keeps on going with new stories of adventures for these wild and crazy guys, I love the wacky theme of the characters and it takes them with the story and you cant forget the "HUMOR" that you bring into this aswell, so it was a pleasure to review this fine comic of yours.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
no changes onec again here on this fine entry

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[The Choice]

Another Cool entry

Haha I got a good "LAUGH" with this one the two piles was pretty good, wish you had made this one longer seems like it could have gone a few more frames, This is a long running web-comic and has some really nifty outcomes such as what you have presented here today, You have these stories that ad depth to the characters, the characters have lots of life to theme it all comes together in a nice little web comic and some very amusing endings like this particular one did.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
wish you had made this one longer seems like it could have gone a few more frame

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[Pengting]

Nice work

So a great character here, I love the white hair here Maybe adding some shine on his head reflecting off of the moonlight, this was a nice scene here you have some nice detail here and made nice element of darkness and lighting effects, So really nice work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Maybe adding some shine on his head reflecting off of the moonlight

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[Bring Your Kids To Work Day]

This was interesting

So this was an interesting piece would also make for a good comic piece for "DAVE-AND-CARL", but thats for another time, the art was great all the little details was nice on this and I was pretty impressed with this one, No need for any changes on this one you have made a great madness day entry.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No need for any changes on this one you have made a great madness day entry

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[Thirsty]

Once again entertaining

Is that "BLOOD" not sure but seemed so lol, I really liked how this one turned out the comic is always full of entertainment and crazy antics, Once again you bring us some fun entertainment with some good excitement from start to finish, the characters are always a blast to see what adventure or well "EXECUTED-JOKE" the comic takes them on.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes on this fine entry

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[Lisa Loud]

Simple and fresh

This was some simple and "FRESH" art it also reminded me of the old classic cartoons of the past, the "COLORS" are fresh and this has a nice sleek look about it with some really nice visual point here, maybe as some added effects you could make all the liquid and solutions have a glow to represent some energy to them, a good art piece you have here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe as some added effects you could make all the liquid and solutions have a glow to represent some energy to them

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LuchoVolke responds:

Thank you very much! I'm very glad you liked it. It's kinda oldie, but since then I've been polishing this UPA-ish style, adding some texture (in this piece the brushes carry all the texture) and contrast and such.
Again, thankies! :D

[Once in a dream...]

Beautiful

A very beautiful here the girl is adorble the character work is fantastic and the hanging stars are a nifty idea now as an add on to the stars make some sparkle make some glow brighter and some that are just dimmer, Well thats just a suggestion anyways you do some good work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the hanging stars are a nifty idea now as an add on to the stars make some sparkle make some glow brighter and some that are just dimmer

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Ryouhiko-Ankuu responds:

Thanks for your review! Definitely too late to edit this exact work since it's way too old, but your suggestion will come in handy in some future works.)

[Ojiro Mashirao - BnHA Action Shot]

Nice charchter

So some nice charchter here this one was awsome kind of reminds me of Luke from starwars but anyways no changes needed here on this one as it was some solid work you really outdid yourself with this one here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes here

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[Kaminari Denki - BnHA Action Shot]

Nice

Now this one comes with lighting so an idea as soon as I saw this one would be that you could use that yellow lighting to be surrounding the border to form it's own lighting border but your charchter is amazing and you have a fantastic charchter here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
A lightning border to relate to the character would be cool

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