XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Let´s Go Mint]

Amazing work here

So this was cute and even adorble just a nice and pleasent character and her cuddely little friend here the backround was pleasent aswell, this is one of those pieces that I have no imput in the suggested section because you have done an outstanding job here, so keep it up.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
this is one of those pieces that I have no imput in the suggested section because you have done an outstanding job

~X~

[Disciple of the Storms]

Impressive

Wow this is very impressive you do some "AMAZING" work on these "CHARACTERS" the design and structure is just very beautiful, the wings the claws the weapons just amazing work now ofcourse I do think you need some shine and sparkle on different points like weapon metal and gems and chains and ofcourse sparkly jewlrey, Just some ideas that would put some nice polish on these beautiful designs and creations.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you need some shine and sparkle on different points like weapon metal and gems and chains and ofcourse sparkly jewlrey

~X~

[Fortune Cookie]

Nice entry

Nice ending here, these old ones are good the humor was always great, You never know what these guys are gonna be upto but I will say is that they are pretty good stories even if they are a tad short but thats ok because you always make a nice ending and climax of the comic and always leaving more for the next one, great talent by you here on this one and the whole series.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more jokes like this on the new ones would be great.

~X~

[Mr Badass]

Nice Texture

This was cool I like the "TEXTURE" the face was kind of funny But I thaught the "MUSCLES" came off very well with some nice tones and good detail, The only changes I would make on this piece would be adding some backround detail maybe even a back scene of some sort that represents this characters world, just an idea to think about overall this was pretty cool and a nice character here so nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The only changes I would make on this piece would be adding some backround detail maybe even a back scene of some sort that represents this characters world, just an idea to think about

~X~

[queen chalie]

Very nice

A really nice "CHARACTER" I enjoy art like there where you use black and white and ad some subtle color its really amazing and you have pushed some nice small details here the red points are cool, seems like a red border or frame would be nice, anyways nice work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
a red border or frame would be nice to accent those other pieces.

~X~

[Mech Chick]

Good work

Very nice work here first of all I "LOVE" how you have some finoshed "PIECES" and the drawn layout on this its a really nice piece and a nice drawing the lines on the character is pretty smooth and amazing, so my advice here is only two things one being this canvus size should be larger allow for more detail and maybe even have a full colored version on this one, but with all that said this was some amazing work and detail here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
my advice here is only two things one being this canvus size should be larger allow for more detail and maybe even have a full colored version on this one

~X~

[Quest for the Christmas Tree Pt.3]

Love it

Haha now its time for the "CHAINSAW" lol funny stuff, Make more colorful and vibrant humor like this one, I love this particular entry because you bring that story out and make it your own the characters really come alive with whatever story you have going on, and overall for wahtever this is you make some nice comics, Now I have not seen anything new in awhile but I still enjoy what you do have especially this submission, nice humor.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more colorful and vibrant humor like this one

~X~

[Potatoman Begins Poster]

Very nice

This was a nice "POSTER" like theme going and a great way to start off the potatoman series, I have to admit that the potatoman has for sure added some depth to the series of dave and carl, but also miss the old funny jokes too, anywyas great art poster here lots of vibrant color here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes its a nice submission.

~X~

[Exam]

Brilliant

I like the "ADDED-COLOR" this was a nifty entry here, Another fine entry into the world of this comic series, Itell you I should get bored but I dont because you bring action, you bring humor, and the characters are just great, but most of all this is always amusing with jokes and humor so nice job indeed. anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You should ad more color like this one.

~X~

[The Hawk And The Fairy]

Nice secne

So here we have a nice "SCENE" of two flying creatures the "DRAGONFLY" one is very nice and love that "GLOW" the bird behind It I thaught seems like it could use more depth of the 3d effect some added wind lines and wishes that make it seem like they are flying and not as flatt, but regardless I found this whole piece to be pleasent and a nice art piece here so really nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the bird behind It I thaught seems like it could use more depth of the 3d effect some added wind lines and wishes that make it seem like they are flying and not as flatt

~X~