XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ojiro Mashirao - BnHA Action Shot]

Nice charchter

So some nice charchter here this one was awsome kind of reminds me of Luke from starwars but anyways no changes needed here on this one as it was some solid work you really outdid yourself with this one here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes here

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[Kaminari Denki - BnHA Action Shot]

Nice

Now this one comes with lighting so an idea as soon as I saw this one would be that you could use that yellow lighting to be surrounding the border to form it's own lighting border but your charchter is amazing and you have a fantastic charchter here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
A lightning border to relate to the character would be cool

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[Hatsume Mei - BnHA Action Shot]

Nice

Another great charchter love that she is rocketing or propelling forward that flames or light beam could be more stronger you have great charchter detail and it shows here but anyways keep up the good work

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes on this one

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[Bear On A Unicycle]

Bear On A Unicycle Nice

So a Bear On A Unicycle, haha now I have seen it all because this was some pretty nice work here, maybe as an idea you could do a series of these maybe one is this bear maybe another time a clown and so on might make for a good series for some unique characters, your art here was amazing.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe as an idea you could do a series of these maybe one is this bear maybe another time a clown

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[More Doodles]

Nice

So this was cool, and you have some nice black and white "DETAIL" this is one of those pieces you could ad some color or maybe just parts of it has some color, but overall this was pretty good and a good black and white drawing and sketch, so keep making some fancy sketches.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
his is one of those pieces you could ad some color or maybe just parts of it has some color

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SquizofrenicCat responds:

Hehe, thanks for the very nice criticism! This is very old so I'm honestly surprised.
I'll be posting some of my tumblr stuff in the future, your feedback on color is actually very useful. I haven't worked on many colored pieces as of late.

[Peach x Zelda]

Nice Bounce

So here was a nice bounce you have on the "CHARACTERS" rump lol the boince was good, I think as there rumps hit there should be some sort of effect that would relate to a bounce but not sure this was pretty good as is, you have some nice art and the animation is actually notbad at all.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I think as there rumps hit there should be some sort of effect that would relate to a bounce but not sure this was pretty good as is

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[Best Jeanist - BnHA Action Shot]

Another great one

So once again you have created another great charchter here with this one it has some really nice detail and all those light string beans seem like they could be brighter maybe even ad a glow to them anyways nice job

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
As mentioned above

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[Tiny Wizards & Witches Jobs]

Another group

And here you have created another fine group this time some witches this group does seem to need much more shine and sparkle about it some really great charchters here though and I was pleased with it

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some added sparkles and shines on the nifty shine points

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[Cementoss - BnHA Action Shot]

Nice border

So here I like that the border was more closer to the edge of the canvus piece you really have pushed a nice charchter to come up very well even looks 3-d so this was a nice piece here with this one great work indeed no changes needed on this piece

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes needed on this one

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[Super Sonico Winter]

Cute

So here was a very "CUTE" character not sure how to review this one as its pretty solid work, maybe some added elements in the backround to show she may have been doing other things maybe a snowman in the backround, anyways you have some nice detail here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe some added elements in the backround to show she may have been doing other things maybe a snowman in the backround

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HBeats responds:

Thanks for the input, glad you like her :)
Yeah the background doesnt do much for telling a story. I was supposed to have some snowmen around her, but decided they didn't match the background (more because of how the lineart looked)
I'll take it into consideration for future works tho!