XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Merry Christmas!]

Nice

I think you have a great ability to make text into art. You should be creating fonts for sites as I do love the way your font looks in all of your art. You can tell you didnt just type it out but gave it real character. I love the textures inside everything and even the textures and patterns inside each background piece is nice to look at. I would add a border tho that fits the text and fix a small black error I see in the top left corner. Other then those bits of critique I do think you have a good talent and I hope to see more like this in the future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just add a border and fix a small black error

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

I have been considering that actually. :) Found myself a service to make your own through a scanned set of letters. Just gotta start testing it out. Solid advice, and glad you liked this one too, thank you!

[Costume]

Very nice

Very nice "WORK" some added color or detail on these older classics would be nice, A very nice entry once again I could drop in on any one of your entries and always find some exciting adventure like this particular one it has "KEPT-ME-EXCITED" and wanting even more so "NICE-JOB-HERE" on this one and keep making some fun and adventure filled comics.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some added color or detail on these older classics would be nice

~X~

[Stamp]

Another adventure

An "EXPLOSION" of a lifetime even in "1sr CLASS" lol Well here we have another adventure with these crazy and wild characters this comic strip is pretty nifty with some unique and even dynamic outcomes, "SOME-GREAT-HUMOR" such as this particular one I got "A-GOOD-CHUCKLE" from the ending here, you have some nice humor in these.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color on thse old ones would be pretty cool,

~X~

[Because we are "TEAM FORTRESS"]

Brilliant group

And here was a"BRILLIANT" put together group of characters here I am loving the "GLOW" in the backround, so in my opinion you dont need to change anything on this piece as you have trully outdone yourself on this art piece and its fine as is, Let this Bloom and shine thats what I saw here today, While some parts could be better on this you seem to be dedicated to other areas which made this to be a refreshing piece of art. This was a Satisfying and even somewhat Mythical piece I hope this Feedback helps to improve on future stuff, So as my eyes lay out the visual here, It reminds me that its a pleasure to see stuff like this, especially this particular piece it brings something different and unique to the end product.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
so in my opinion you dont need to change anything on this piece as you have trully outdone yourself on this art piece and its fine as is

~X~

ThatOneMotherfucker responds:

Not gonna lie, I woke up this morning and saw this. This has made my morning. Thank you!

[Happy Birthday Nick]

Interesting

I do find this one to be not bad and interesting. I do think your use of white space here is a bit bad, but nothing terrible. I would add more background features or textures and maybe even some designs to draw it all together. I understand with portraits that you need a focus on the main character but I feel based on your other work you could add so much more to the background here. I love the parot thing on the shoulder the most, it does have a top hat afterall, and the general teeth expression this man has as a character. I think that your cartoon art style is very unique and I hope more comes from this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would add some more details to the background and limit the white space being unused.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hmmm that white background's really not the main focus you know. XD But you're right there is a bit much of it. Character could've been closer instead. And better centered. Might actually crop this one a bit... good noticing.

[I hate cockroach!!]

Simple

So this was a nice and "SIMPLE" piece here I like the "SIMPLISTIC" element here and you created a story along with it, and it was a plus for me, the art is simple the idea is amazing maybe you could add some subtle backround details a wall a design something back there, anyways great stuff here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe you could add some subtle backround details a wall a design something back there

~X~

[Even More Cold Dangers]

This was cool

And when I say "COOL" i mean ice cool like the submission details lol, these top ten entries are pretty good and some good funny moments and sometimes truthfull, so nice work here, great addition here to the portal, the blue text seemed kind of small, but was still readble.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the blue text seemed kind of small, but was still readble

~X~

[The 700th Comic Special Spectacular Pt.2]

Great element

This was a great "700TH" entry here you sure have come a long way with the series so congrats, And here we are with more great element from another fine entry here, you have for sure braught "MANY-CHUCKLES" and entertainment with your series here as this was just a "FANTASTIC-SUBMISSION" I especially love how this one plays out the humor is always great.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Cant change whats already great

~X~

[Ash + Fire = Logic]

Beautiful

So this was pretty beautiful, I think at the very "TOP-CORNER" it could use some "SPARKLE" to show off all the shine it already has, you have a really nice design here and all the lighting effects are pretty good, you do some really nice work here hope to see more soon.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I think at the very top corner it could use some sparkle to show off all the shine it already has

~X~