XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[I hate cockroach!!]

Simple

So this was a nice and "SIMPLE" piece here I like the "SIMPLISTIC" element here and you created a story along with it, and it was a plus for me, the art is simple the idea is amazing maybe you could add some subtle backround details a wall a design something back there, anyways great stuff here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe you could add some subtle backround details a wall a design something back there

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[Even More Cold Dangers]

This was cool

And when I say "COOL" i mean ice cool like the submission details lol, these top ten entries are pretty good and some good funny moments and sometimes truthfull, so nice work here, great addition here to the portal, the blue text seemed kind of small, but was still readble.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the blue text seemed kind of small, but was still readble

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[The 700th Comic Special Spectacular Pt.2]

Great element

This was a great "700TH" entry here you sure have come a long way with the series so congrats, And here we are with more great element from another fine entry here, you have for sure braught "MANY-CHUCKLES" and entertainment with your series here as this was just a "FANTASTIC-SUBMISSION" I especially love how this one plays out the humor is always great.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Cant change whats already great

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[Ash + Fire = Logic]

Beautiful

So this was pretty beautiful, I think at the very "TOP-CORNER" it could use some "SPARKLE" to show off all the shine it already has, you have a really nice design here and all the lighting effects are pretty good, you do some really nice work here hope to see more soon.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I think at the very top corner it could use some sparkle to show off all the shine it already has

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[Yuno]

Strange one

So this was cool, this piece was sort of a "STRANGE" one there was a good "MIX" of different elements intertwined on your character, this piece does need some added backround detail it was a bit bland in the backround I could really see you spicing it up a tad more maybe some scene or props or some patern of design back there,

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
this piece does need some added backround detail it was a bit bland in the backround I could really see you spicing it up a tad more maybe some scene or props or some patern of design back there

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[Digitalart]

Beautiful

wow I love this especially the "FLAME" red like hair it throws a viusal idea maybe making a border on the edges here with the red flame like hair, A fantastic piece you have here, there are some points i may get to later that you could improve on but for the mostpart it was pretty nifty I thought, I did find this to be Delightful and just an overall piece, allthough some areascould be improved and I will get into that. Alright so I will throw some props at you as this was a pleasure of an art piece and these types of piece is what really gets me inspired to review things like this, so nice job.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
a viusal idea maybe making a border on the edges here with the red flame like hair

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DidiEsmeralda responds:

Thanks XwaynecoltX for your suggestions I will keep you in mind.

[Dead Astronaut]

Really cool

This was deep and some really nice blend and meshing here of the character, lots of "ENERGY" in this one, would have liked a larger view sceen here maybe more stuff or alien like elements in the backround, You are a Dedicated artist with some Grand ideas and nifty Polish but you are probably Accustomed to that style of blend and Finally I can call this a Symbolic piece of Freshness, And the art detail and effort shows also bringing some good energy and thats what you did here. Well before I go, Gotta say that this one really stands out and shows off your talent and I do hope to see more of your owrk soon, untill then keep up the great work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
would have liked a larger view sceen here maybe more stuff or alien like elements in the backround

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[MS Paint Spacebear!!]

Very nice

Seems like theres a lot of open space you could fill in with more line work, A nice drawing that just came off well and had lots of nice visuals. I dont mind that theres not much or any color on this and thats something you could always ad later, but the drawing itself is pretty intense, so as thats said keep up the good work its nice and solid.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
theres a lot of open space you could fill in with more line work

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[Masks]

Decent drawing

A nice art piece you should think about making the center of the eyes "GLOW-A-LITTLE", So this was a cool drawing now some color added would be nice, and I would love to see some added color here or there. while the black and white was the intent, this is still a pretty good piece of art even without some color but wouldnt hurt to ad some here and there.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
A tad bit of color would be nice on this fine piece of yours. A nice art piece you should think about making the center of the eyes glow a little

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