XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober #8]

Decent

Ok this one needs work. You have great drawings and snow, and even a character from snow, but it is just too damn light in color. I had to really squint and look at this to see the details and all that. Maybe you were going for that snow-storm, white-out, effect, but it was just too much for me. I would make the vibrance of the blues more aparent and then darken the blue balls and character a bit. Maybe you could even add a glow to them to give the snow effect still and not lose the color to all this white? I think it is white-washed and I see great work behind that.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The blue balls and character are lost in the white, so make them darker so you see them better, but good job non-the-less

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

I'm noticing that these drawings really look a bit different with different monitors, and with the one I'm currently viewing it through: can definitely see what you're getting at! At home it was so much clearer. Whiteout effect yes, but not this much... I'll keep this in mind.

[Cleaning]

I like this one

A "SMUDGE" lol nice joke there, some added color on this would be a nice idea, Well that was a nice submittion of the comic, I can really see you building onto it aswell maybe a new character or two, or some side character, also more action and cliffhangar scenes would be a big plus too, but overall This was a good entry for the comic so nice job. I love how well these progress and cant wait for even more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some added color on this would be a nice idea

~X~

[Racing With Gilda Gryphon]

Cool

This was cool I think ad in some wind streaks to show they are like racing, the characters are cute and adorble though and pretty good art piece here very nice use of color aswell, but adding some wind streaks would be a plus here if you ask me, anyways nice work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I think ad in some wind streaks to show they are like racing

~X~

[Inktober #6]

Best yet

Ok so this one is about your best inktober yet because you've really grown and expended on these with a nice fresh outlook and more background features. I love the eyes on this guy and the overall expression with just the eyes works and lets you wonder what he is up to. The bits of color coming off of him is nice and keep a unique and consistent aspect that you use with your art that ive noticed. I think it is like a splatter thing you do for textures and highlighting. I do enjoy that and this was a good job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing to really change here, maybe a border to match the guy but it is nice as is

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hmmm we have a bit different tastes regarding bestness, but I am glad you liked it! :) Background maybe something to do with it? Was just going for something quick and comical with this but I guess it turned out alright. Thanks again!

[Blue and Red Baby!]

Very cute

So this one here was very "CUTE" and I especially love the "RED-AND-BLUE" really nice work with the colors my onlything about this whole piece is that you could have added some backround color or detail aswell, besides all that this was pretty amazing work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
my onlything about this whole piece is that you could have added some backround color or detail aswell

~X~

[Ultraman VS Godzilla]

Very nice

So this was "COOL" you have some nice "VIEW" here with this one it is a great action scene, I think if you added more splash in the water it would be just right, seems to need more spalsh and waves from the action, you have some really nice work here though and I am pretty impressed with what you got going on here, keep at it.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
if you added more splash in the water it would be just right, seems to need more spalsh and waves from the action

~X~

[The Park 2016]

Very nice

So there is some nice "ELEMENTS" here on this one, love the glowing effects too and its another halloween very nice work here on this one love all the use of color, and another art piece that I will not suggest any changes because frankly it doesnt need any kinds of changes its brilliant as is, otherwise all that keep up the amazing work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I will not suggest any changes because frankly it doesnt need any kinds of changes its brilliant as is

~X~

[Cursed Toast]

Nice comic

Haha I love this one and may be my newest "FAVE" great view shots in each scene here, a good topic too, no changes in this particyular submission as you have presented some really nice artwork here, so keep making great art, A nice comic you have here This was the perfect dose of an interesting style and you made it work, you made it jump out at you So I do like whats going on in this particular one especially with what you did with the ending and made it just fun, this is not a boring comic by any means but would love to see more stuff going on here and there, but besides all that props to you on a nice entry great comic here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
no changes in this particyular submission as you have presented some really nice artwork here, so keep making great art

~X~

[Pixel Cake]

Teh cake is a lie

Ok so this one here is ok here and not bad but a bit small. I know pixel art can be small due to the theme and size of it all, but I feel you could have added more to this in terms of size and maybe a setting. Maybe have people around the cake have their hands in the air or just animating the candles of the cake would have been a nice addition to this piece. I do like it tho and it is good for something new in your pixel artwork. I think keep it up, but maybe try the suggestions for the next one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe add more characters to this or animate it next time you do a pixel piece

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

XD Was wondering when someone would say that! This is true cake though. The cake is the truth.

I agree, would've liked to make something bigger too, but in lack of time I uploaded a game resource I had already made, and so... this was it this time. Do hope to do more next year!

[Rejection]

Love the reds

The "RED" color tone on this is pretty amazing here, the black backing works well with the red so really nice work here on this one, I think its subtle but all the space has been used and thats a plus, For sure with this art piece no changes needed on this one you have a swell piece here, keep up the amazing work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
For sure with this art piece no changes needed on this one you have a swell piece here

~X~