XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Park 2016]

Very nice

So there is some nice "ELEMENTS" here on this one, love the glowing effects too and its another halloween very nice work here on this one love all the use of color, and another art piece that I will not suggest any changes because frankly it doesnt need any kinds of changes its brilliant as is, otherwise all that keep up the amazing work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I will not suggest any changes because frankly it doesnt need any kinds of changes its brilliant as is

~X~

[Cursed Toast]

Nice comic

Haha I love this one and may be my newest "FAVE" great view shots in each scene here, a good topic too, no changes in this particyular submission as you have presented some really nice artwork here, so keep making great art, A nice comic you have here This was the perfect dose of an interesting style and you made it work, you made it jump out at you So I do like whats going on in this particular one especially with what you did with the ending and made it just fun, this is not a boring comic by any means but would love to see more stuff going on here and there, but besides all that props to you on a nice entry great comic here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
no changes in this particyular submission as you have presented some really nice artwork here, so keep making great art

~X~

[Pixel Cake]

Teh cake is a lie

Ok so this one here is ok here and not bad but a bit small. I know pixel art can be small due to the theme and size of it all, but I feel you could have added more to this in terms of size and maybe a setting. Maybe have people around the cake have their hands in the air or just animating the candles of the cake would have been a nice addition to this piece. I do like it tho and it is good for something new in your pixel artwork. I think keep it up, but maybe try the suggestions for the next one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe add more characters to this or animate it next time you do a pixel piece

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

XD Was wondering when someone would say that! This is true cake though. The cake is the truth.

I agree, would've liked to make something bigger too, but in lack of time I uploaded a game resource I had already made, and so... this was it this time. Do hope to do more next year!

[Rejection]

Love the reds

The "RED" color tone on this is pretty amazing here, the black backing works well with the red so really nice work here on this one, I think its subtle but all the space has been used and thats a plus, For sure with this art piece no changes needed on this one you have a swell piece here, keep up the amazing work.

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For sure with this art piece no changes needed on this one you have a swell piece here

~X~

[Merry Christmas!]

Nice

I think you have a great ability to make text into art. You should be creating fonts for sites as I do love the way your font looks in all of your art. You can tell you didnt just type it out but gave it real character. I love the textures inside everything and even the textures and patterns inside each background piece is nice to look at. I would add a border tho that fits the text and fix a small black error I see in the top left corner. Other then those bits of critique I do think you have a good talent and I hope to see more like this in the future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just add a border and fix a small black error

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

I have been considering that actually. :) Found myself a service to make your own through a scanned set of letters. Just gotta start testing it out. Solid advice, and glad you liked this one too, thank you!

[Costume]

Very nice

Very nice "WORK" some added color or detail on these older classics would be nice, A very nice entry once again I could drop in on any one of your entries and always find some exciting adventure like this particular one it has "KEPT-ME-EXCITED" and wanting even more so "NICE-JOB-HERE" on this one and keep making some fun and adventure filled comics.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some added color or detail on these older classics would be nice

~X~

[Stamp]

Another adventure

An "EXPLOSION" of a lifetime even in "1sr CLASS" lol Well here we have another adventure with these crazy and wild characters this comic strip is pretty nifty with some unique and even dynamic outcomes, "SOME-GREAT-HUMOR" such as this particular one I got "A-GOOD-CHUCKLE" from the ending here, you have some nice humor in these.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color on thse old ones would be pretty cool,

~X~

[Because we are "TEAM FORTRESS"]

Brilliant group

And here was a"BRILLIANT" put together group of characters here I am loving the "GLOW" in the backround, so in my opinion you dont need to change anything on this piece as you have trully outdone yourself on this art piece and its fine as is, Let this Bloom and shine thats what I saw here today, While some parts could be better on this you seem to be dedicated to other areas which made this to be a refreshing piece of art. This was a Satisfying and even somewhat Mythical piece I hope this Feedback helps to improve on future stuff, So as my eyes lay out the visual here, It reminds me that its a pleasure to see stuff like this, especially this particular piece it brings something different and unique to the end product.

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so in my opinion you dont need to change anything on this piece as you have trully outdone yourself on this art piece and its fine as is

~X~

ThatOneMotherfucker responds:

Not gonna lie, I woke up this morning and saw this. This has made my morning. Thank you!

[Happy Birthday Nick]

Interesting

I do find this one to be not bad and interesting. I do think your use of white space here is a bit bad, but nothing terrible. I would add more background features or textures and maybe even some designs to draw it all together. I understand with portraits that you need a focus on the main character but I feel based on your other work you could add so much more to the background here. I love the parot thing on the shoulder the most, it does have a top hat afterall, and the general teeth expression this man has as a character. I think that your cartoon art style is very unique and I hope more comes from this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would add some more details to the background and limit the white space being unused.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hmmm that white background's really not the main focus you know. XD But you're right there is a bit much of it. Character could've been closer instead. And better centered. Might actually crop this one a bit... good noticing.