XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lalafell on a Stick]

Beautiful bird

So this was nice a beautiful "BIRD" here, I am also enjoying the shine on the bird and you have a really deep backround aswell made this a whole lot of quality to this piece, the green element specs could have more of a glow to them, besides all that this was some nice detail and nice bird and character.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the green element specs could have more of a glow to them

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[Thanks 1K followers! v1]

Oh nice

So first of all congrats on the one thousand followed that a nice achievement for this site glad you push lots of great art here I would love to see more from you very soon I like the detail you push forward

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
None as it's an achievement piece

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[Tigger]

Another great piece

So this was another great piece of art here, I really like the art style here, the texture is nice on the fur, I do think you could ad a simular frame here that has a fur like visual then it would accent the character even, just a small idea to think on, besides that this was a cool piece.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I do think you could ad a simular frame here that has a fur like visual then it would accent the character even, just a small idea to think on

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[fish]

Fresh

So this was pretty "FRESH" art here now ofcourse you could ad some subtle detail in the backround just some small ones that will accent the main focus, but you have created a nice art piece here very pleasent piece here so nice job on this and hope you create even more fresh art styles.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
you could ad some subtle detail in the backround just some small ones that will accent the main focus

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[HighwayCity]

Wow so beautiful

I love myself some SciFi "CITY" senes just like you have presented here, I would suggest adding some cars with lights driving like its an active city or something along them lines, You have the Ambition for unique stuff like, This was neat and strange and very impressive, it has a certain artistic feel to the art style and it was just strange but that was a good thing, I really liked it, And I really like the Rapid Presentation But Finally I will come to an end here with this review in a bit, Well I do hope to see more work of yours, But with all that said, one thing I will say is that this was a fun piece of artwork, and a pleasure to review.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I would suggest adding some cars with lights driving like its an active city or something along them lines

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Kamikaye responds:

THanks !
I admit, I forgot about cars and stuff while doing the color overpass. I experimented with some holo ads etc. but deleted them again.

[me, myself and I]

Really nice work here

So this was some nifty "WORK" I think you could have done a lot more here "ESPECIALLY" with that pencil like maybe show that he or you have drawn all in the backround some design then come to the signature, might make it a more nifty piece of art here, you have a great character here though,

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I think you could have done a lot more here especially with that pencil like maybe show that he or you have drawn all in the backround some design then come to the signature

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[Inktober #20]

Simple and good

Oh good I am glad you are trying something else out here, I do like the use of lego and not another Luffy piece (no offense because as they are good, they get a bit boring). I like the red you picked out and the line shine detailing inside the lego block is pretty accurate. I think the font under it is great and you have a nice steady hand for fonts but you know I enjoy those already. I do think the white space here is okay but a border wouldnt hurt, maybe smaller legos as a border? I do think this one was good and nice to look at.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A border could be added, maybe small legos all around in a square? Just an idea but nice job

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Cyberdevil responds:

No offense taken, though if you're going through my older work... best prepare yourself. ;) Smaller legos hmm, that could be something! Thanks for the review!

[Temptation]

Adorble

This piece here was pretty "ADORBLE" here maybe its the view shot but the legs seems a tad short from that view not sure exactly, just a little thing I noticed on this one, you have some amazing work great character detail and beautiful girl here, make more like this soon.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe its the view shot but the legs seems a tad short from that view not sure exactly, just a little thing I noticed on this one

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[Mobile]

Wow very nice

I guess it really was a "VOODOO" mobile lol great humor this one just needs some added color and detail in the backround, This one was like a speeding train meaning you pushed the limits on this one as fast as can go, the ideas stood out very well and it all came together in a nice fasshion I was pretty impressed, so nice work here on this one, I like what you have presented.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
just needs some added color and detail in the backround

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[Inktober #12]

Excellent

I think this one here, well this one was nice and had a fun element to it. I think the light red with yellow is the proper demonic colors to use and really worked well as an entire piece. I do think you could have added more of a border to this one and then gave it a more completed look. I also find the lines a bit too fuzzy, like the image is getting lost in a bit of a mess, but it is still good non the less. I think that you have a good talent with inktober submissions, but this one feels like it could have had more to it and I know you can do more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail, add a border but nice overall

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Cyberdevil responds:

I'd say sketchy more than fuzzy, which I was going for a bit here, but thanks for the feedback! With the background in particular do feel it could've been clearer.