XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Over the Garden Wall]

Nice

So this was pretty good stuff here it was "CUTE" I like the dark and "SCARY" element here Those eyes of the scary character seem like they could have more of a glow about them an idea ofcourse, overall you have some nice work here nice color and a nice scary element.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Those eyes of the scary character seem like they could have more of a glow about them an idea ofcourse

~X~

theaaronschmit responds:

Yeah, that's a good critique. His eyes don't have enough glow to them, and I guess I was trying to mute out the Beast in the background so it wouldn't contrast with Wirt and Greg in the foreground. But I'll keep that in mind and potentially correct that in the future.

Thanks for the criticism :>

[Chick Poacher]

Notbad

WEll this was notbad at all. O like the combo of "CHARACTERS" here as it was pretty good of a view shot, that brown backround seems lacking and could have more detail in that general area but overall here you have done an amazing job and a beautiful art design.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
that brown backround seems lacking and could have more detail in that general area

~X~

[Angsty Bath]

Amazing

So here with this "PIECE" you have done everything pretty amazing the amounts of detail just "JUMPS" out, there is a great visual moment here and its all explained on the very detailed expression on her face, so really nice work here this was amazing detail make more soon.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Onlything I could think of would be maybe some frames or fancy borders.

~X~

[Leila Plume]

Awsome

And I really "ENJOY" some of your work here because you bring on a nice element and show so much "DETAIL" onlything I would ad here would be adding some backround detail maybe something subtle or something like that, but you have done some amazing work here keep up that energy.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I would ad here would be adding some backround detail maybe something subtle or something like that

~X~

[Ammy]

Nice tree

So this was a nice looking "TREE" you have here seems "CUT-OFF" on the sides the flowers are beautiful the tree design itself is pretty amazing aswell, so really nice work here, some backround feild or grass would have been cool too, but overall this was a nice design here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Just maybe some backround stuff

~X~

[Mousette]

Nice

Yeah it would be nice to have "OTHERS" and you have done a nice job here, a big "CONGRATS" on winning a frontpage award thats always a nifty reward so congrats there, you have done pretty well with this piece and was just a wonderful piece of work here so I encourage you to make even more.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
None with this it was brilliant.

~X~

[Evil tree]

Very detailed

So first off "CONGRATS" on the award here this was a nice and very "DETAILED" tree here the shading is awsome and just a great piece of art here some added backround or distance pieces would have improved on this but your intent was more about the main tree, this was a cool and dark looking tree.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
backround or distance pieces would have improved on this but your intent was more about the main tree

~X~

[Faces]

Simple

So this was something "SIMPLE" here I like the work as practice even but seems like you could have gone a little further on this one and added more to it maybe osme backround detail even, but anyways this review will end here in a bit, I like your efforts here though.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
seems like you could have gone a little further on this one and added more to it maybe osme backround detail even

~X~

[The Reactor]

Wow

This was an interesting element you have some nice "STRUCTURE" here with this piece it really has a dark element about it I would suggest adding some more light up sources of some kind, but the design of it all was pretty interesting with your art style here so nice job.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I would suggest adding some more light up sources of some kind

~X~

[OC-Castle Crasher version(unmasked)]

Decent

So this was pretty cool here the "UN-MASKED" version here is pretty nifty I like your efforts here on the character design, other then the gem on the other version this was still pretty nifty work, so no changes needed for this one it was some nice work keep it up.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
so no changes needed for this one it was some nice work

~X~