XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[jack]

Very nice

So this was some really nice work here the character is pretty awsome all though I think some silky shine could be added to some of it's outter shell and gun and sword the background was very intense and we'll designed some added sparkle on the background would also be a plus but overall this was pretty good stuff with some nice visual elements so props to you on this one and all you really need is a tad bit of shine and sparkle

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Well as suggested some added shine some added sparkle here and there

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #CC-7.03]

Oh interesting

Wow this one was more of an interesting one with some nice darker detail on this particular one the lighting effects was a nice touch too great story line on this I do wish these were somewhat longer though keep up the cool style

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Make these longer

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #CC-7.02]

Man crushes lol

I guess you do have to be careful with man crushes lol but I do like the art style you been pushing here I really like the comic style and you do so well with this as it's pretty nifty and some nice charchter detail and you make theme funny so really nice job

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Make more of these styles

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[Follow the Leader: RemnantComic (GIF)]

Love the flow

I love the flow of animation here everything flowed so fluidly and just looked realistic like the flow of the sandles and the skirt bounced as the lift of the pull ups worked it's way through so very nice animation on this as for any improvements maybe more animation from the standing two charchters but you have some nice work here and some nice skills here so keep up the good work on this one

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some small added animation

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PaddleTone responds:

I didn't want the two girls overshadowing the girl doing pull ups, but I'll remember this for next time!

[Cyberdarklord Comission, Starfire and Raven]

Well this was different

So this was pretty different but I like it and I like the scene here you have tons of props and details to make up the room and the spanking scene is really nice and a red bottom was convincing enough with this one so nice art nice detail and good energy in this art piece here really nice color too I would for sure ad more shiny points and lighting effects but besides that this was amazing work

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some lighting effects and shiny points added

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PaddleTone responds:

The environment was really well lit. Where would you suggest adding more shiny points?

[Final Fantasy Lesson #13.02]

Intense

And this was an intense one you had here very nice vibe on the whole thing I like the style here the art was amazing and I had fun with this one here you have outdone yourself as this was brilliant I do look forward to more from you

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I look forward to more there is no changes needed on this piece

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[F**k Muhammad]

Very nice

And its always nice to voice ones opinion and you did it in a nice way here the art was decent and the Black and White was fantastic so nice job here you should do more stuff like this here so nice job on this one it was pretty good

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Just make more of these kinds

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #CC-7.01]

These are getting good

Well I have to say that these are getting really good you put some nice action on these the frame show close ups and far shots just like a real comic does very nice indeed so another good comic series of sorts here on this one

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Another good comic piece and no changes needed
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[Quick tree on a cliff I guess]

Wow nice

Wow this was some nice work here even though you say this was a quick draw you really have pushed out some detail and quality on this one the tree leaves and even the grass on the ground looks really realistic and just very flued as it looks windy in this scene but anyways good job here not sure if I would change anything as this was pretty good as it already is so nice job here so keep up that amazing detail

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Really none with this one as you have some amazing work here very realistic stuff

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