XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bowling]

Notbad

That guy sure can "BOWL" maybe a bit too hard lol, great entry though, Well this was notbad had all the fun of your other comics and you always seem to bring some style along with the adventures these haracters seem to find themself in I would love to do a comic series like this if I ever had the time but you have done well and I was highly impressed with the output of energy and effort that does go into these allthough I wouldnt mind a tad but more use of detail.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
These simple yet funny entries were the best you should make more like these in the future ofcourse

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[Gex]

Nice sprite

So this was pretty good the sprite was nice, I think you should have added some type of animation on it thouogh even the blinking eye would have been a nice touch, a nice sprite character here with some nice details and features, keep up the nice sprite work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you should have added some type of animation on it thouogh even the blinking eye would have been a nice touch

~X~

[Sonic x Kayla]

Very cool

So I found this piece to be pretty good I even love that you added a nice "BORDER" on this piece I would suggest adding some shine or more depth in the border to reflect the shine of the characters, and great character design you have here this was pretty amazing work I was very impressed.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I would suggest adding some shine or more depth in the border to reflect the shine of the characters

~X~

[Alien]

Notbad

So as your first this was actually "NOTBAD" I like the bright and vibrant colors on this you have depicted an alien just right or what we assume it may be, I think some of the stars could be brighter and more sparkly in some cases, but overall this was a good art piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think some of the stars could be brighter and more sparkly in some cases

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[Measure]

Awsome again

Haha wow everything ends up in "DEATH" to the other lol poor guy, And once again I find myself randomly in the art portal and your work is everywhere thats because you have so much of them and thats a plus in its own right, but anyways for this particular episode it was amusing great use of characters in the different scenes here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
None in this submission you have done a swell job

~X~

[Drain]

Cool beans

Haha well that one is interesting I got a good chuckle with the end part of this, a well "EXECUTED" joke here lol, And so here was another awsome submission in the art portal ofcourse with these wild and crazy characters they will always get into some kind of mess or another and thats what they did here today, I love the humor you bring with these characters, very welldone entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing but maybe some added color

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[Can you feel it?]

Nice color

I really liked the use of "COLOR" here it really made for an artistic element, a deep hot color, and the emotion on the character is showsing some good expression, seems like you could have added a tad more in the backround like some texture or something, but this was a nice art piece.

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seems like you could have added a tad more in the backround like some texture or something

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[Haruhi Suzumiya Bunny Girl]

A cute one here

So this was a cute "BUNNY-GIRL" here and she is in just the right pose too allthough some backround work could be done with some added props on this one as it was pretty bland but even a few props would do well, anyways this was a nice art piece here so nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some backround work could be done with some added props on this one as it was pretty blan

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[Copying]

Notbad

Very nice so here in "2014" you have added shadows and a much better text buble it really shows off well you should do more of that style in the future, Alright while this one was notbad, thats not a bad thing it was pretty good but just thaught more humor could have made it even better, and more wild moments aswell, but honestly for the mostpart this was pretty good and I did enjoy it for what it is so nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you have added shadows and a much better text buble it really shows off well you should do more of that style in the future

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[Film]

Wow Nice

Haha "BOOM" this was a really nice ending the comic was "SUBTLE" but it was a great ending, Wow this one was really good some good moments and the humor was even at its best mainly at the end and it really comes out at you at the end that was kind of like a climax ending, but anyways you have done it once again make a beautiful piece of work here and make something very cool, and with that said I wont bor you any longer but what I will say is keep up the awsome detail and awsome humor in these.

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none here this was pretty solid work.

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