XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Potatoman Begins: Page 20]

Nice work

And once again here was some nice work and a nice part of this great comic series live the detail you put on him as a form of improvement I could see you adding some shaded color to the bubble text but it's just one simple idea doesn't need to be done just throwing it out there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some colored text bubbles would be cool

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[Potatoman Begins: Page 21]

Wow nice

It's really coming alive in this one gosh I am just overwhelmed with all the color and detail that you put into these now very nice detail and the script is great love this one just for his outfit would love some shine on that black outfit just a bit of shine here or there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added shine

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[Animation knight.]

Very nice

This was actually pretty cool I love how he's running or falling and all rearing to go very nice indeed the red backround was nice but I thaught you could have done more with this backing like some props and or design to it but for the most part it was pretty good. Anyways nice work hope you make more fantastic stuff like you did here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more detail or effort in the backround

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[Kim Possible_oudated]

Very nice

This was a very smooth art piece with a nice visual here the background was bland but the character was pretty solid and we'll rounded and smooth lines now I think you could work on the background just a tad maybe some props or designs on that back wall would be cool but very nice job there as this was a very nice art piece anyways keep up the fantastic work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some work on the back wall maybe a lamp or design in the wall

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[Fruity]

Cute

This was pretty cute the colors are perfect on this one you added all the right colors and the character is just so cute I think you could ad some sparkle to the earrings and other jewelry just a sparkle here or there to make some stuff shine but besides that this was pretty good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding some sparkle to the jewelry would be nice

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[The Phantom Joker from Persona 5]

Very cool

We'll have to say this was really cool love all the reds used in this one the jacket itself seemed too dark but everything else was on point and very good love the use of reds and dark colors I would suggest some great used in jacket just to see the detail a little more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Mabe some design or some grey tints in the jacket it seemed too dark

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[Rolling Dynamite]

Oh cool

That this takes me back a little I do have to say though that this was very well done and the only few changes I would suggest would be to ad some color ad some special effects likes shines and glares but for sure adding some color would be a plus on things other then that this was a brilliant piece kind of like a nice art poster anyways keep making brilliant stuff like this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some things mentioned above

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[Living Zombies: The Horde]

Really nice

So I like this alot and like that it has this dark elements even it's dark element you we're able to ad some nice use of color all around and even the border was nifty I would love to see some color added into the border to match up the other parts but your art style is amazing and was pretty impressed with this whole piece as a whole so nice work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No need for anything but I would ad more color to the borders

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[Just bored, i think im going to the pool.]

Very beautiful

Wow this was very beautiful I am loving your shine work not just on this piece but on all your pieces I do however think that you should ad more shine like on her underwear and more shine on her hair even just a little more would be really good I would think

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra added shine

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