XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tropicana]

This was cute

This was a cute little charchter you have here even nice little pose even I like the look on her face this actually looks like some advertisement on some merchandise or something so you made it convincing anyways I think as an additional improvment you should ad some sunset in the background maybe a distant sail boat etc stuff like that to rise in the element somewhere

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as mentioned a sunset a sail boat props like that for the elements

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[58 Celeste diorama]

Very nice

Awesome as always this was pretty amazing but then again you always make amazing work I love the strawberry and like the balloons maybe more different size balloons would have been nifty but besides that this is as always another amazing piece you have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Small and large balloons would have been cool and nifty

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[60 Ready Player One]

Awesome

This was cool I really love the view shot on this it was really nice work and a great view shot the teal squares at bottom seem like they should glow more with more vibrant glowing but that's just an idea for the most part this was amazing work as always so nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow from the blocks below. As mentioned

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[Dark side]

Amazing

And once again your work is just so amazing it just jumps out at you and I love all the detail you give these so awesome very well made work I am pleased to review this because they are some amazing characters you have on display

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding a border or frame wouldn't hurt

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[Retro Minit]

Wow amazing

Wow I have to say this is pretty amazing very nice style here and love how it's all black and white but I guess that's the intent of things but still a nice piece of work here I would have loved for some lighting effects but still overall this was amazing work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects as mentioned

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[Happy B day Tom!]

Awsome

Well I have to say this was pretty awsome your Sprite and pixel work is amazing I don't think there's anything here that needs any changes what so ever this is a brilliant piece but besides that this was very nice work indeed so keep doing what you do best

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this beautiful piece

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[Happy Birthday Carlo Ruiz]

Nice

So this was cool I really like the work here the background to the characters it just shines with delight very impressive art and charchters that bird was very cool would have been nice if there was some sort of action scene or something but anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe next time show them in an action scene

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[Rainbow Girl #2]

Awesome

Wow this was pretty awesome the hair is so colorfull I think all it's missing is having some streaks of shine thru it but for the most part it is interesting and you made it look real so my advice is to ad a bit of shine into it so on that aspect of things you have a beautiful piece of art here really nice work so keep it up and I hope to see more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some streaks of shine thru the hair

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[The Heist]

Nice comic

Well I have to say this was a good comic you even added a twist on it as it changed up quick and that was ok. The art work was fantastic and brilliant the story humor was executed well and overall made for a good little story her and nice comic as well. I would love to see more comic stuff like this as this one was pretty amazing work so untill next time keep the quality up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I thaught this one was fine as is

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[Cute... Wait, What's Shock Doing? .-.]

Nice

Well this was pretty good I think you could improve on these characters just little things like lighting and sparkle just little things that will make them stand out more just a suggestion or idea I'm throwing your way but anyways that's all I have for this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some little effects like shines sparkles glares etc

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