XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Quick sketch of a robot]

This was cool

Well this was cool I like the shiny visual here but I think you could have had much more shine on him and have the whole main focus more close up but overall this was pretty good I like the paper but adding some background there would have been a nice touch

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some closer visual some shine and some background

~X~

[Salamander]

Another cool piece

This was another one of those pieces that you could really ad a frame and border with as it would make it more like a showcase and it's nice having a frame and border but that's just an idea really nice texture in this and a nice design so nice work here keep up the decent work

~~Things to improve on~~
Some frames and or borders added would be nice

[Franck]

Love the texture

This was very nice I love the texture on this the greens work well but this as awhile was good because you show different view shots so it's kind of like a gallery art piece and in that sense you can ad some frames and borders to represent a gallery visual better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some frames like a gallery border

~X~

[From the dark]

Nice skull

Very nice work here I love the realistic look here on the skull and all the gashes and damaged areas make it very realistic maybe you should ad some more shine on top of skill head seems like it's missing more shine I would even make the eyes glow

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on top of skull maybe some glowing eyes

~X~

[The future is here!]

For 13 you are good

So for thirteen you are very good and this drawing is just an example of that I think you could outline this in ink with some dark linework and really make it come out well I love all the detail and would be nice to see the detail in ink even more anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some inked line work on this would be nice

~X~

[A Crib]

Very well done

This was a very well done piece and I can already see that there will be no suggested ideas for this one because you covered it all with great charchters very nice textures deep colors and most all some very nice lighting effects that worked very well on this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this piece what so ever

~X~

[Spider-man and Iron-man selfie]

Nice piece here

Here was a nice piece of art I really like that background almost seems like they are in a bathroom so in that sense there should be writing on the wall or something it just looks too clean but your character work is amazing and I love Spidey

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some gerfiti on wall or writing

~X~

[MOAR PUMPKINS!]

Oh nice

Now this was nice I really liked this it was kinda nifty a good drawing a good sketch some nice shades some color or effects could be added I do think that if you had some glow come out of the eyes it could be almost perfect but that's just an idea to think on

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow from the eyes

~X~

[gunner]

Very nice

Here was a really good charchter love the different view shots and the gun it's like a good progress here I do think you could use some shine on the gun parts and even putting some shine on her hair as well that would be nice and looks like she would be more improved but overall you have some great talent on this charracter maybe adding some borders and or frames would be nice

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some borders and or frames

~X~

[Demons]

Very dream like

Now here was something realistic cause alot of us have these demons but you presented us with a dream here the colors are nice the demons are well made I do think as a small improvment you could have more glow in there eyes more red glow other then that this was a really good visual of dark dreams but anyways keep up the beautiful art work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more glow on the eyes

~X~