XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Holly's New Shirt]

Very nice

This was a very nice charchter I really like the view here I like that little glow surrounding her whole body my suggestion or advise is make the glow thicker and more radiant that would accent the character much better and some background detail would also be nice

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra added glow and some background work

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[Australantian Christmas]

Awsome

Wow the colors are so fresh on this one love the blues on this one love that flowing water I think this art piece is missing something though I think that there could be a sail boat in the background and some extra shine on the beach ball just an idea though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some suggestions above on some props and shine

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[Old-Polygon-selfportrait]

Different

Well I have to say is this was really nice work here I think it's different and unique a nice prismatic style I like it and think you could have each prismatic piece have some sort of glare or reflect off of it it would be a nice touch a nice style and a good element but regardless this was a fantastic piece of artwork and hope you make more like this it's nice to see and review

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice art style maybe make it more prismatic style and have some glare and reflection comming off each piece

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[Jam Dance]

Haha cute

Well this was a cute piece here love the small animation on this you really pushed the detail but the animation made this a cute one I think the one thing that could be added or improved on would be ad some props in the background or ad some background scenery

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background props and or background detail

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[She-Ra - Cartoon PinUp]

Very nice work

So this was very nice work I love the old style look and visual here her attitude is amazing I do think you could ad some shine or sparkle on her crown that would be a nice touch just an idea or suggestion here so go with it and see where it takes off and such it's a nice piece though and hope to see more from you real soon anyways untill next time

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle on the crown

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HugoTendaz responds:

Thank you. I agree on the shine, it's a good suggestion.

[Patreon: I want to Catch you as my Gift]

Wow

You do some amazing work the form on the character is alurring and some really nice color here and some amazing lines everything looks very smooth the detail from the eyes and nose and all little features you have done well on this piece but anyways nice work here I really am glad to have found this piece it really stood out and look forward to reviewing more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this beautiful piece

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[Buff Asuka]

Really nice work here

I like this and this was really nice work I like the muscles and even the black and white but I think a nice effect over black in white like some color and in this case the shorts and top could be a red or pink would accent the whole piece a lot better just an idea though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some red or pinkish shorts and top

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[Thief of Void & The Dream Weaver (page 2)]

Beautiful piece

Wow this was really amazing I really love this and I really love the deep art the deep charchter work and those borders that's what I tell alot of comic people to do and you have the right idea so nice work there the story itself is a beautiful piece of artwork so very good charchter work and it really does bring all the story together I really like this and hope you make more sometime soon cause I can't wait for the next one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Those borders are already great maybe a glow around them

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AdventVoice responds:

Hmm a glow would be nice...Borders are very important and sometimes I think I have this OCD about lines, I get mad about my lines sometimes cause I want them to be oh so perfect. Again I blame my software for the digital lining issues...but there are awesome ways to compensate for poor programming.
I am glad you love this one. This story is very important to me and I hope I can live up to Thief Of Voids review of my works and continue to create pieces that bring Icarus to mind.
Your Head-Hunter is bad-asshat, though. She was so ready to do me in because she felt I did not capture her best side. I told her she will be seen again, but she is not going to be in every panel. She would like to be though.
As the story continues, you will see more of Thief of Void and the Dream Weaver as they discuss further what it feels like to be able to say, "I survived!"

[Connie the Alchemist]

Awsome

Well I have to say this was a beautiful piece here a good structure of the character a good amount of shine I would have to say that adding more shine like on the glasses and the green flame from the pot but overall this was some really nice work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow and shine as mentioned

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