XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Final Fantasy Lesson #CC-7.02]

Man crushes lol

I guess you do have to be careful with man crushes lol but I do like the art style you been pushing here I really like the comic style and you do so well with this as it's pretty nifty and some nice charchter detail and you make theme funny so really nice job

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Make more of these styles

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[Follow the Leader: RemnantComic (GIF)]

Love the flow

I love the flow of animation here everything flowed so fluidly and just looked realistic like the flow of the sandles and the skirt bounced as the lift of the pull ups worked it's way through so very nice animation on this as for any improvements maybe more animation from the standing two charchters but you have some nice work here and some nice skills here so keep up the good work on this one

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some small added animation

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PaddleTone responds:

I didn't want the two girls overshadowing the girl doing pull ups, but I'll remember this for next time!

[Cyberdarklord Comission, Starfire and Raven]

Well this was different

So this was pretty different but I like it and I like the scene here you have tons of props and details to make up the room and the spanking scene is really nice and a red bottom was convincing enough with this one so nice art nice detail and good energy in this art piece here really nice color too I would for sure ad more shiny points and lighting effects but besides that this was amazing work

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some lighting effects and shiny points added

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PaddleTone responds:

The environment was really well lit. Where would you suggest adding more shiny points?

[Final Fantasy Lesson #13.02]

Intense

And this was an intense one you had here very nice vibe on the whole thing I like the style here the art was amazing and I had fun with this one here you have outdone yourself as this was brilliant I do look forward to more from you

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I look forward to more there is no changes needed on this piece

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[F**k Muhammad]

Very nice

And its always nice to voice ones opinion and you did it in a nice way here the art was decent and the Black and White was fantastic so nice job here you should do more stuff like this here so nice job on this one it was pretty good

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Just make more of these kinds

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #CC-7.01]

These are getting good

Well I have to say that these are getting really good you put some nice action on these the frame show close ups and far shots just like a real comic does very nice indeed so another good comic series of sorts here on this one

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Another good comic piece and no changes needed
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[Quick tree on a cliff I guess]

Wow nice

Wow this was some nice work here even though you say this was a quick draw you really have pushed out some detail and quality on this one the tree leaves and even the grass on the ground looks really realistic and just very flued as it looks windy in this scene but anyways good job here not sure if I would change anything as this was pretty good as it already is so nice job here so keep up that amazing detail

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Really none with this one as you have some amazing work here very realistic stuff

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #13-2.03]

Pleasent

And this was a nice and pleasing comic piece here very good effort and the graphics are pretty intense the story line is even better you have some really nice work here so I hope you make more on this one anyways keep up the amazing job

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Make more to this one for sure and make them longer

~X~

[Final Fantasy Lesson #13-2.01]

Another good entry

So here was another good entry here you really have something special on this piece shows some really dramatic moments and shows some fantastic art would love to see more of this one really nice work here indeed so make more soon

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Make these longer

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #13.03]

Really nice

So here was some more parts of the Comcast or what seems like the comic I like the idea here with this one you seem to make lots of these comic pieces and you really make them come alive so keep that going good

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Very nice comic style make more soon

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