XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fart]

Cool

This was notbad I thaught it could have some better humor or better longer joke, a fun piece here though it was pretty good though, These are always cool, I love the way that you build up the story and give a good ending just like this one it was entertaining, regardless if its your two wild characters or the potato man guy it always seems to be filled with some adventure.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added humor ofcourse.

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[The overseer]

Very well done

Another amazing piece of work here love the "GREYS-PURPLES" on this one another great pose and another great "CHARACTER" the backround on this one was not that apealing so I could see you improving onto this one a tad more, so my advice here is the green lazer could have more of a glow and some of the armor plating on the character could have more shine to it, other then that this was cool.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
so my advice here is the green lazer could have more of a glow and some of the armor plating on the character could have more shine to it

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[The Protagonist]

Really intense

Wow this was really something "INTENSE" I like all the "BLOOD" he is almost like some mad Scientest, the details in this art piece are amazing the backround was just perfect, the blood and the character design very nice indeed, No changes here this was a beautiful piece of work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes here this was a beautiful piec

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[Man Eater]

Nice

This was a nice "VIEW-POINT" seems like theres a scene going on here, I love all the "GLASS" in the backround and the lighting effect for all that matter, so you did ad some nice glare comming off the characters shoulders. I still think there is some room for improvment with more glare shine and sparkle especially with all the glass and lighting from the backround points, anyways really nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I still think there is some room for improvment with more glare shine and sparkle especially with all the glass and lighting from the backround points

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[Leg Pain]

Entertaining

the last "TEXT-BUBBLE" was a classic line that made this pretty good, This is pretty entertaining but then again all of your work is entertaining, These comics are great and just love how each one is pretty different from each one, but I do enjoy them and enjoy how wild times these characters always seem to have, and some nice stories to go with aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well I could see you extending that ending joke there a bit longer

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[Toucanman]

Nice

So this was pretty good, Cant say that I am too familuar with this "CHARACTER" here but I do have to say that this was an interesting piece here love the "SIDE-VIEW" here that beak seems like it could do with some more shine and the backrounds seemed like some added detail would be cool too, you do some nice work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
that beak seems like it could do with some more shine and the backrounds seemed like some added detail would be cool too

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[stone cold]

Cool

So this was very "NICE" I would have loved to see some much more sparkle like off her earings maybe more sparkles of flashes in the backround from the crowd and such, but overall this was a great piece great character structure and some nifty little details in this art piece of yours.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I would have loved to see some much more sparkle like off her earings maybe more sparkles of flashes in the backround from the crowd and such

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[Batman]

Very cute

Haha not sure whats going on here but its pretty "FUNNY" but besides all that this was a "CUTE" and adorble piece here I really like the design here not too fond of the backround paper but the "BATMAN" design itself is pretty good, so my advice would be a different backround paper maybe even some back drop scene on it but overall this was actually a fun piece to review so nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
so my advice would be a different backround paper maybe even some back drop scene on it

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[Scratchcard]

Awsome comic

Haha the "LUCKY" number Glad I found this one its a pretty goodone if you ask me I love it though you always seem to give these some excitement and this one was just that so I enjoyed it just as much as the next guy, even the backround details were notbad bt could be slightly betters

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes it was simple and to the point.

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[I see.....?]

Really nice

The black and white theme was really nice here, I am always suggesting some borders here and think some borders or nifty frames that relate to the main focus might be one way to go with this piece, you have some really nice work here and I was really impressed with this as a whole as its an artistic element in my eyes.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I am always suggesting some borders here and think some borders or nifty frames that relate to the main focus might be one way to go with this piece

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