XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Raffle: Junketsu No Maria]

Some more shine

So you really used shine well here and it shows but I think adding some more shine and some sparkle like the metal buckle and more shine on her legs would be cool too just little stuff like that would be a huge plus of things anyways hope to see more from you soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra sparkle here and there

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[Hushabye Valley]

Very cute

I like your work here and have to say that this one was very cute I really like the color and use of color you are a pro at this and I have to say this was not perfect but you don't need to change a thing it was pretty solid work so keep up the positive vibes an art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this beautiful piece

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[Buffalo Bell]

Very nice

So this was very nice I really love the balance of your use of color it's really refreshing to see stuff like that so nice job there and I like your shine but wouldn't mind more shine on her legs and arms just more shine and even sparkle to it just an idea to think about

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine and sparkle

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[Hausu]

Very nice indeed

I have to say this was really good I like the style love the cut fingers and the blood and her screaming I think you should show off more blood though this was good but more goo and more blood would be a nice touch here other then that this was a pretty fantastic piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra blood dripping from fingers

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[yume kawaii]

Amazing

And here is an amazing piece of art love the shine in the hair but I think you need to ad more shine on the top of her hair the colors are really good that with a tad bit more shine it will look even better so try adding some shine on this if you can still

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added shine on top of hair

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[Mario Sunshine AGDQ 2017]

Wow amazing

I have to say this was pretty amazing the splash was awasome the color on that splash you should ad more of a sparkle on that splash kind of like a glistering shine but the characters work is amazing the background is even decent love the texture in this one I love this piece it is a vibrant piece of artistic style anyways keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine or sparkle on the splash

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SandraDRivas responds:

YO, sorry I got this late. But yes I agree! I was so focused on the color values that I ended up restricting myself. It would've been a nice touch for sure

[Skull Queen]

Wow intense

Now this was pretty intense the skull queen is very nice love the detail love the shading and the drawing itself was pretty intense I love the design of it all the crown was my fave like the lighted teal points those points could be much more of a glow and shine on them but other then that this was a pretty solid piece of artwork here so nice job on this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more flow and shine on the crown and points of the crown

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[Star Wars]

Love it

This was pretty good I like the whole piece as you filled the whole area and I do enjoy the small details here and there the light sabres could have more of a glow on them but other then that this was a good charchter I love the structure you put on her anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more glow on the sabres

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[El]

Beautiful

Now this was a beautiful piece of art here and really nice charchter work here all the lines work well colors work love her expression too the one thing I would change would be the white backing it needs a tint of color or something along them lines or something

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color on the white backing

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[Sexy Pkachu]

Very nice

I have to say this one was pretty good I have to say you have really gave her an alurring look and that's the best part of it some more shine on her bottom side would be a plus more streaks of shine but other then that this was pretty good form of pika choo

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra shine on her backside

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bxBLAZExd responds:

Thank you for your input, although this is an older piece(I would like to i have improved since this 1 lol well I'd like too) i still take any critique with open ears Thanks.