XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jirard The Completionist.]

Cool

So this was pretty cool here I was excited to see the animation in this it is pretty decent the large green gem or emerald was a nice touch you should have had it sparkle with some small animation as you should have some of the other tidbits of items and such just something to think about overall you have made some really nice work some nice details and a smooth flow of animation I enjoyed it all so nice work here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More sparkle on the emerald and other points in the scene

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[God of Manga - Anime Week FHP]

Very amazing

Now I love this one for a fee reasons but have to say you have outdone yourself here with this piece you have a nice black and white style and the shades are pretty fantastic so really nice work here I think some added border or fancy frame would do really well with this piece here you do some nice stuff though so adding frames and even in color might focus on the main piece more just an idea to think on even without it your work is awesome

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Maybe a colored frame or fancy stylish border

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[Scene Background.]

Pretty amazing

So this was pretty good here I like the style you have here you have some nice art. The animation with the candles you really made it flicker with a lightning source here and I was pretty impressed with the outcome I do think if you made the background more darker and light up the candles even more might showcase the vibrant candles even more but this was a nice graphics and art scene you have here so really nice work here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some darker backround and some more flicker of the candle

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #T.02]

And another fun one

And once again you have created a really nice comic style here I'm pretty impressed with the outcome of it all I love the close up elements too really nice comic style here so nice job hope to see much more of these anyways cool stuff

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Great comic style doesn't need changes

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[Inktober Day 6]

Really deep art

So this was some really deep art you have here and you have prepared it all on paper and pen and even for an inktober it came off well the small fine detail like the plants was intense here with some really nice work overall so nice detail and I wouldn't think of changing a thing here this was some very talented work so from my point of view this was just fantastic and very artistic aswell

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
As mentioned I wouldn't change it

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[Teen Zevran]

Love the texture

So you have some really nice texture in this one that pose is just perfect and the splatter of all the blood was really nice I do think adding some of that splatter on the edges and forming it like a border if some type would be a pretty good idea and maybe make the visual complete just an idea to think about though you have some nice talent on this piece so keep that going good

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some type of blood splatter border

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[Skinny Dipping Abigail]

Nice

So here was a nice charchter in the water a well designed charchter the water was nice but I believe more energy needs to be put into the matter like bubbles more sparkly effects that water gives off and more wave like feel of the water but everything else is pretty good here with some nice visual effects here and I for sure want to see what else you have next in store for your next project

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
A few water additional effects would be nice

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PaddleTone responds:

Yea, I've definitely improved on my design of water since this artwork.

[jack]

Very nice

So this was some really nice work here the character is pretty awsome all though I think some silky shine could be added to some of it's outter shell and gun and sword the background was very intense and we'll designed some added sparkle on the background would also be a plus but overall this was pretty good stuff with some nice visual elements so props to you on this one and all you really need is a tad bit of shine and sparkle

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Well as suggested some added shine some added sparkle here and there

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #CC-7.03]

Oh interesting

Wow this one was more of an interesting one with some nice darker detail on this particular one the lighting effects was a nice touch too great story line on this I do wish these were somewhat longer though keep up the cool style

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Make these longer

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