XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dad]

Deep Texture

Well you have some nice deep "TEXTURE" on this one with a good "DAD" character very deep in colortone aswell, the backround was pretty intense even, love the smoke filled backround or atleast thats what I got from this, Now ofcourse my tip for this piece might be make a larger canvus or view screen and have more of the smoke filled backround maybe even some props, anyways thats my take on things.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now ofcourse my tip for this piece might be make a larger canvus or view screen and have more of the smoke filled backround maybe even some props

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[SushkoSashea]

Nice character

So you have some nice character here, you did very well here I do however think that some added backround or just some simple pieces here and there in the distance, but regardless you make a good character and have some nice smooth line work so keep it up anyways nice job.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
think that some added backround or just some simple pieces here and there in the distance

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[The 7-Eleven]

Very nice

So this was pretty good looks pretty realistic, this must be a really bad area but I have seen some "7/11s" in some bad places but as for the art you did pretty good I would only suggest adding some light up sign more or even cracked and such anyways really nice building design here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I would only suggest adding some light up sign more or even cracked and such

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[Inktober Day 10-princess king boo]

A cute piece here

So this was pretty good stuff here, its a "SKETCH" a drawing but you did pretty well on this piece and the "SHINE" on this piece was pretty good the shine stands out a lot and its makes this whole piece look great, I would love some color on this one, very nice work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I would love some color on this on

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[Hunting Bears]

Very nice

Now this was pretty cool Has an old style of old movie type robots looks like he is just wondering around in a moment of chaos and you have presented him in just the right pose here, I think by adding some extra shine on hin with a bit of sparkle would be kind of nifty, but anyways a good art piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think by adding some extra shine on hin with a bit of sparkle would be kind of nifty

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[''Squigly!'']

Very nice shine

So some very nice "SHINE" on this piece here you have some really nice elements here, the purplish theme was also nice but its that shine is pretty amazing, not sure if I would really want to change anything on this as this was pretty amazing work as it is already so nice job here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
not sure if I would really want to change anything on this as this was pretty amazing work as it is

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[Geralt of Rivia CC Style]

Cute characters

So these are some "CUTE" characters you have here some really great line work then all the little details like shades and even "MORE" expression on the face is pretty good too, the "VIEW-SCREEN" is a tad small making the view screen much larger would be nice but anyways this review comes to an end you have some nice characters hree.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
making the view screen much larger would be nice

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[K. Round]

Very cute

I love the very large "CHIP" this was a cool piece here, This is a work of progress a progress that takes some unique style, This here was a nice piece of work and seemed to come alive as I dwell deeper into the visual here, the deep stylish of it all really spoke volumes. aswell as some Explosive ideas here. And well thats my Extended review and I hope I have added some Polish here, And there it is a nice piece of art with some nice detail you certainly know what you are doing and you bring the talent aboard so nice job But you seemed to be Accustomed to nice work like this.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Maybe more shine on the chip

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iAbokai responds:

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[The Walter]

Mr White

Well this was a good drawing here of "MR-WHITE" I think you should have drew him with a hat, but regardless this was a nice drawing you have here, love what you did with the eyes it was very realistic drawing too, so nice job here on this one, maybe even do a colored version anyways keep up the good work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I think you should have drew him with a hat, maybe even do a colored version

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[Babylon]

Very unique

Now this was something different and very "UNIQUE" It even tells a "STORY" here with all that is happening she is carring a baby she has a snake would make for a great deep story here, would love a small improvment in the backround by putting some lighting and thunder in the backround clouds would be a huge plus of an idea, anyways great work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
would love a small improvment in the backround by putting some lighting and thunder in the backround clouds would be a huge plus of an idea

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