XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Illustration Friday 1 - Star]

Wow nice

So I have to say that these illusion Fridays are really good I do think there should be more glow and lighting surrounding the character there at the bottom maybe much more light comming out from him other then that this was really good a beautiful visual here anyways make more great pieces such as this one you have made here well that's my take on it all together so keep that aspect of things going strong

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some added lighting effects

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[Illustration Friday 2 - Stuffed]

Demon bear

So to me it looks like the elements are comming to the bear that makes him or her a demon bear Lok I like the dark elements hew made it even more dark and scary I would ad more of those green glowing orbs ad even more of those and ad more glow to them just an idea or two to think about overall this was pretty amazing stuff I really enjoyed this piece here keep up the good work

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
A few things suggested above

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[Illustration Friday 3 - Adventure]

Nice scene

This was pretty good and makes for a nice scene here you really have some nice visuals from the grass to the mountains I think some added sunlight comming in from the side of the mountain would be cool but honestly you have some really nice work here with some great detail I would even throw some shine on that purple sheild but anyways keep up the great scene making

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some added sunlight and a shine or sparkle on the sheild

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[Progeny - Natalie Profile]

Nice work

So I guess you are doing alot of these the red backround really works well on this one some nice idea here the character is very nice and I don't see any miss perfections you know your charchter designs well so I'll just say props to you on a fine job

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Put a fancy border on these types

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #RK.01]

Nice

So time moves forward and so does your progress of detail I have reviewed alot of your art and it always gets better like this particular comic piece deep color deep texture very nice story bits too so nice job

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Make these longer

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[Mascots and Anons]

Nice

A nice group of charchters here with some really nice detail on all of the lot of great personality in each of these characters design kind of like a group photo even lol anyways great detail here in this one you have a sense of detail

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I would love to see more of this type

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[Skullgirls - Bane of the Theons]

Another sharp charchter

And here was a nother sharp looking charchter with some really nice colors in use the eyes were pretty cool that blue beam or element seems like it could have some sort of more glow to it to give off that radiant vibe but other then that this was a pretty amazing charchter great linework and nice and smooth detail I hope you will make more just like this one it was pretty amazing stuff

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some more glow to the blue elements

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[Final Fantasy Lesson #4.04]

Ohmy

So the joke was funny and you do have some nice humor in these the characters are once again pretty brilliant the silver armor charchter seems like it should have much more shine to it and that's what I take away here with this one you have some nice detail here and it was a funny bit so I can't complain so keep up the great work and keep doing what you do best in art and design

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More shine on the silver armor charchter

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[Flora the Adventurer - ICONIC Mascot Fanart]

Really nice

And this was some really nice work here first of all that background was pretty intense with those shadows and design with it the character was pretty fantastic I do think that nifty sword could have some extra shine and sparkle to it as you have a nice sword there and it should shine besides that you have some nice talent and a nice design here so I wait to see what you make next time

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some shine and sparkle on the sword

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[Progeny - Nadia Profile]

Another great piece

Alright so once again you have prepared a nice charchter maybe it's me again but the legs look super long but anyways you have some really nice detail in the design of this charracter and the small little details that make this up make it great now I would ad a bit more strokes of paint to the background and have it have some deeper texture maybe even some frame or borders on this but anyways keep up the nice work as always

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some more depth in the background

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