XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Penny 2.0]

Oh wow

Now this was something really nice I did think adding more shine on her armor element would be a nice touch this was pretty good work of penny though so keep up the good work I for sure want to see what else you bring to the table

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some added shine would be awesome

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[You Most of All]

Very nice work

So this was some nice work here I love how you have some open window here on this piece the artwork is absolutely amazing very nice structure on the character here great expression too look forward to even more from you

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes it was beautiful

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[Demon Babe]

Very nice

Seems like you know how to make a good "DEMON-GIRL" I like the element here the black clothing over the red skin tone was nice, the shine on the black clothing was a really nice touch too, the white backround I thaught you could have had a bit more darker tone but not darker then the black outfit, nice work though.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the white backround I thaught you could have had a bit more darker tone but not darker then the black outfit

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PorcelainKitten responds:

Thank for your input I really appreciate that. Will definitely take that into consideration.

[Daichi]

Very nice

So this was nice Nice small little character you have here, that "MOON" was pretty nice too seems like you could ad some more sunlight beaming down, but besides that this was pretty good work, very nice structure on the character here and he is so adorble too.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
you could ad some more sunlight beaming down from the moon or light source.

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[Penny Practice]

Nice sketch

So this was cool I like the rough sketch here some added color and more fine tuning of the linework would be a nice touch up but overall you have some nice and talented work of art here so keep it going good

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some color some fine tuning if the linework

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[Casak Mahariel]

Nice

So this was a nice black and white the outline on this piece is really dark but works well over the white background I do think some background is needed though just an idea or suggestion though anyways nice work

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some background detail and some added color

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[Penny Combat Ready (IF - Nose)]

Lol

You do really good with the comics here this particular one was rather funny especially with the eye part haha very nice indeed I have no changes here just make more funny ones like this one hope to see more soon

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Make more of this soon

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[Looking Back (IF - Nostalgia)]

Haha nice

I really like this one the look is fresh and the character work is sharp looking very good comic too I would love to see more of a comic like this with all sorts of charchters like this one but alas this review comes to an end

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Great comic make more

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[I see you~]

Really deep work here

I love the view shot on this and the dark element, I do wish there was more blood around maybe even more splatter of blood in different places, This was a great and fantastic piece of art and dont see much different styles like this so I wanted to review this piece a its very good work. The details are very nice as they just seem to come together and depict a strange scene from a subtle World as you have created here, Nice yet strange The overall flow seems to come together and tell a unique story.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I do wish there was more blood around maybe even more splatter of blood in different places

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NegaShep responds:

Aw thank you so much! While this is a personal piece, I did keep in mind that I was sending this to a company that was working on a horror visual novel and their advertisement said no heavy blood and or gore. I kept myself pretty tame! But thank you! Perhaps in my next piece that's similar to this I'll do more of what I really prefer for 'spooky times'.

[Steam Train Valentine's]

Well this was nice

This was a cute piece here. I really like the different faces and how you had some funny expressions you should do more of these types they are pretty good and this was a nice comic type anyways keep up the good work

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Make more and more of the expression faces

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