XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Priestess of the Bones]

Nice design

I like the idea of this and like the shading and even detail now I would love some color maybe just little tid bits of color even, I like that its black and white but that color would really bring this out more, but anyways nice sketch and drawing you have here this has some nice detail.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The color in the eyes was amazing do more of that.

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[Where are all the Dinosaurs?]

Really nice

this was cool and a nice black and white, the eye balls are really popping out, this was pretty cool, Seems like this whole piece could use some frames and or borders as an extra polish idea, but anyways this was some very nice work, you always make some of the best drawings and whatnot.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Seems like this whole piece could use some frames and or borders as an extra polish idea

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[Desert Surfer]

Very colorful

So this was a nifty little "CREATURE" I found this one to be "ARTISTIC" because of all the beautiful color and the unique design on this one, I do hope you can make more unique creatures like this one, it was pretty interesting and most of all this was pretty unique.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I do hope you can make more unique creatures like this one

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[Swimming]

Good story

the stories are good even as short as they are, this one was funny, these comics have long filled adventures that takes them into some amazing places and some amazing stories I really love what you do with the story and how each character has there own part and humor is always a blast, so keep making great stuff like this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more.

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[Bank]

Good adventure here

The good old bank card lol Another good adventure here and that is what really keeps me glued to the screen time and time again as these stories and dialog between the characters is crazy and funny all rolled into one grand adventure, so props to you on a fun entery as always, so keep doing what you do best.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
People always watching lol make more nifty stuff like this.

~X~

[Comfy Reading]

Very cute

So here was a very "CUTE" and adorble character you have here I like the backround structure too, Onlything I would ad here might be some sunlight comming through the window and shinning down on the character, other then that this was some nice work here, so really nice stuff here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Onlything I would ad here might be some sunlight comming through the window and shinning down on the character

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[Bridge]

Fun entry

They both fall to there "DEATHS" it seems that was a first for me, Here was a fun entry you have, and not just because I enjoy this comic of thrills of fun, but because each entry brings a new adventure of humor excitemeant and adventure, so nice work here, and hope you keep making many many more of these great comics, I love the style and humor in them all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more double deaths would be cool.

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[Low Battery]

Entertaining as always

Samsung lol, And you have did it again, you have shown us some fancy ways of bringing these characters and adventures alive even keeping each story fresh and exciting and thats what really keeps me into these, the ending was best though, it was really good stuff though, keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Loving the color and detail in this doesnt need any changes.

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[Junk in the Trunk]

Nice

Well this was notbad, the insides outside was a nifty idea, the backround was ok I did think you could have done a little more with the backround maybe some design maybe some lighting effects maybe some more added detail, but you have some awsome talent the character was different but it was also cool.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
you could have done a little more with the backround maybe some design maybe some lighting effects maybe some more added detail

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Bunbox responds:

Thank you very much for the thoughtful response! This piece was originally drawn in 2016, and so I absolutely agree with the background suggestion. Around this time in my artwork a lot of my backgrounds were so boring. Hopefully the future uploads in my gallery can reflect the journey I had to try and make them more interesting! : )