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[Final Fantasy Lesson #10.04]

And once again

you have created a beautiful comic some sort of dragon good this time with some nice element here very impressed with all the detail and such you do some good comic work here I look forward to the next issue

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Really none on this one this time

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[Redwood Elemental (IF - Wood)]

Wow nice

Wow this was pretty nice. It shows a great world behind this scene the huge charchter is awesome the character looking on is ready for an adventure you have really pushed some nice energy into this one so really nice work here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Really have no words here you did an amazing job

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[Penny 2.0]

Oh wow

Now this was something really nice I did think adding more shine on her armor element would be a nice touch this was pretty good work of penny though so keep up the good work I for sure want to see what else you bring to the table

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some added shine would be awesome

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[You Most of All]

Very nice work

So this was some nice work here I love how you have some open window here on this piece the artwork is absolutely amazing very nice structure on the character here great expression too look forward to even more from you

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes it was beautiful

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[Demon Babe]

Very nice

Seems like you know how to make a good "DEMON-GIRL" I like the element here the black clothing over the red skin tone was nice, the shine on the black clothing was a really nice touch too, the white backround I thaught you could have had a bit more darker tone but not darker then the black outfit, nice work though.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the white backround I thaught you could have had a bit more darker tone but not darker then the black outfit

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PorcelainKitten responds:

Thank for your input I really appreciate that. Will definitely take that into consideration.

[Daichi]

Very nice

So this was nice Nice small little character you have here, that "MOON" was pretty nice too seems like you could ad some more sunlight beaming down, but besides that this was pretty good work, very nice structure on the character here and he is so adorble too.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
you could ad some more sunlight beaming down from the moon or light source.

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[Penny Practice]

Nice sketch

So this was cool I like the rough sketch here some added color and more fine tuning of the linework would be a nice touch up but overall you have some nice and talented work of art here so keep it going good

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some color some fine tuning if the linework

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[Casak Mahariel]

Nice

So this was a nice black and white the outline on this piece is really dark but works well over the white background I do think some background is needed though just an idea or suggestion though anyways nice work

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some background detail and some added color

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[Penny Combat Ready (IF - Nose)]

Lol

You do really good with the comics here this particular one was rather funny especially with the eye part haha very nice indeed I have no changes here just make more funny ones like this one hope to see more soon

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Make more of this soon

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[Looking Back (IF - Nostalgia)]

Haha nice

I really like this one the look is fresh and the character work is sharp looking very good comic too I would love to see more of a comic like this with all sorts of charchters like this one but alas this review comes to an end

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Great comic make more

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