XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Erotic Haunt - Ghost Girls Line Up - Comic Concept Commission]

A good design

So here was a nice "COMIC" design here these concept characters for some comic seem like they will work out just fine, every one of them has a unique and good characteristic about each one, so nice job here, My advice is go ahead make that comic and make a wonderful comic.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
My advice is go ahead make that comic

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[Pickles!]

lol

Well here are some "PICKELS" in Pixel say that five times fast lol, anyways great pickle design seems like they could use more shine on them, they always seem shiny at the store, and these are pretty good, I would even think about adding some backround detail here on this one.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
some backround detail, and some shine on the pickles.

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[Street Fighter 25th Tribute]

Amazing

Well what can I say here you have done some amazing work here with this one, the lighting effect is awsome and comes in at the right view, as this is the twenty fith ani its a nice tribute, you presented all the characters in great fashion here so really nice work on this one.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe more brighter or sparkly candles.

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[Glen's Portrait]

Nice

So here was a nice visual here has a nice look in the future almost a futuristic scene, I think some added lights in the backround would be a real plus here on this one, the look on his face is very deep, but the painting is really nice, but anyways you do some nice work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I think some added lights in the backround would be a real plus here

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[New Face, Same Name.]

Nice

Nice "FACE" here with this one, you should ad more glare and sparkle on the eyes let them really shine, this was a nice portrait of your character here, glad to see your comic working well this character was pretty awsome though.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More shine and glare on the eyes.

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[Rekt - Page10]

Cool colic

So this was a nice "COMIC" you have on this one, You should make some colored versions or atleast adding color to the frames then you can accnt the main focus more, anyways some nice work here this was pretty good here, but anyways untill next time I hope to see more from you.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
You should make some colored versions or atleast adding color to the frames then you can accnt the main focus more

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[Ashley's Portrait]

Nice

The yellow backround I dont know seems to not blend well with her blond hair, but the painting of her is really good, I would suggest adding some texture in the backround, besides that you have some really nice art style here, you are very talented and it shows off well.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I would suggest adding some texture in the backround

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[Memory Dust]

This was pretty amazing

There is alot of visual here with some nice glare on the water and I like the wording you have in this one, you have some really nice talent and it shows very well on this piece, I love your style as for improvments maybe more glare and shine on the water, but not by much, anyways nice job.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I love your style as for improvments maybe more glare and shine on the water

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[Dawn]

Oh wow this was nice

I love the explosion of color here you really have made some nice color explosion on this one as for any improvment I actually like it how it is here, so really nice work here hope to see more like this.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I like it how it is.

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[BMO looks cool tho]

Very nice

So this was kind of nifty here, the gameboy style of system in an action moment really some nice work here, the explosion was pretty intense, the demon character was looking pretty good, you have some nice work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More explosion.

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