XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[2015]

A cool adventure

Love the stars on this some would look better if you had some brighter and some dimmer, Some great humor such as this particular one I got a good chuckle from the "WEB-COMIC-HERE" on this one you bring some nice elements and a nice and cool adventure, and you "CANT-GO-WRONG-WITH-THE-HUMOR" and that may be one of the reasons I enjoy this series so much.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Love the stars on this some would look better if you had some brighter and some dimmer

~X~

[JunkPunk]

Nice

Black and white work well with this "SPECIFIC-ARTWORK", Very diverse mix of line thickness and textures Angles and the overlapping images of what appears to be random objects toy with the eye However "EXTRA-ATTENTION" to details is evident through the little cracks in the teapot and the fish in the television screen Therefore, It can be interpreted that the artist was purposeful in the items and is hoping to convey some sort of message. Possibly related to one’s self.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You could have had more space used with the empty spaces in the backround maybe some small added designs as the main piece.

~X~

[Curly]

Vibrant

The presence of "MULTIPLE-HIGHLIGHTS" in her hair, alongside the predominant golden color creates a "WORK-OF-ART" that bites back at you. Her hair texture appears to be spiral curls which amplifies the look of "ENERGY" that radiates off of her, If that’s not enough her face does the job in forming the aforementioned energetic trait, The stiff darkened lines used to draw her face contradicts the looseness of the lines for her hair, however the same boldness is present throughout.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Seems like something was missing from the right side maybe a backround room setting or maybe just some proped items.

~X~

[Juri Han]

Unique

So this was a "UNIQUE" design you have here, the "HAIR" alone is pretty nifty and unique and I like that sparkle in the eye but maybe not that color maybe it should be more of a white sparkly crystal look, you do some amazing character work here and glad I could review it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like that sparkle in the eye but maybe not that color maybe it should be more of a white sparkly crystal look

~X~

[Connie Cat - OC Angela Patron]

Nice scene here

So here was another nice character setting, love the backround, I think some added props like a sail boat or some jumping dolphins in the sea would accent this much more and maybe more sunlight comming down on the character, overall you have done a fantastic job here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
props like a sail boat or some jumping dolphins in the sea would accent this much more and maybe more sunlight comming down on the character

~X~

[Tilty]

Batty

Very nice detail here she has a nice "BAT-LIKE" element that was a nice touch the lingerie was nice very aluring here, her face expresion I thaught could have had more emotion in it and I would also suggest some backround scene or detail, as always another great character you have here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
her face expresion I thaught could have had more emotion in it and I would also suggest some backround scene or detail

~X~

[Christmas Morning]

Brilliant submission

Lol more milk and cookies, You should make more holiday ones, I found this particular entry extra unique because you made it fun with a twist of mystery and ofcourse this was entertaining and there was a "SMALL-ADVENTURE" with this one, but anyways I really liked this entry as you poured some "GOOD-ENERGY" into this one and I was pleased with the end results.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You should make more holiday ones

~X~

[Early Present]

Your series is inspiring

Early presents are good, the backrounds could use some added detail, So this series is many things but most of all I find this series worth reading, You have a "NICE-STYLE" about your characters the art and the adventure that takes place in each comic its "REALLY-NICE-WORK-SERIES-HERE", so nice job indeed, I hope to see many more from you.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the backrounds could use some added detail

~X~

[Cow]

A nifty adventure

LOL this was funny You cant go wrong with the humor and that may be one of the reasons I enjoy this series, its "THE-LITTLE-JOKES" or the brutal jokes or the adventure they all find themself on, "I-REALLY-ENJOYED-THIS" particular entry with its ending especially some well executed adventures here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Cow tipping is a good idea make more.

~X~

[Skier]

Brilliant Comic

Lots of death in this comic and its always the one guy or most of the time, I think some revenge on the other guy is in order lol, I really liked this entry as you poured some good energy into this one and I was pleased with this from start to finish, Now on this comic entry you really did "PUSH-THE-HUMOR" with some adventure all mixed in one, always "GREAT-JOKES" executed with this series so well done.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think some revenge on the other guy is in order lol

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