XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Naga Siren Illustration from Dota2]

Wow nice

so this is a very elegant work of art here and a good charchter I love how the colors flow and blend into one another the two swords are nice and think adding a shine on the blades would only be a plus even adding some background elements to the environment world at hand would be another nice touch up this was pretty good work regardless this was a nice art piece and glad I had the chance to review it so nice work

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Well as mentioned some shine on the blades and more detail to the world it's from con. The background

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[It's Something]

Very talented

So this one was very nice and shows off some nice talent here I like the work you do you bring on some good quality as well with some nice detail and a beautiful sense of textuture very good visual portrait here and really has a nice element of beautiful design here so really nice job on this one and really do hope you show much of your work on here it's been a pleasure to review your stuff

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Maybe throw a frame on this to showcase a gallery like portrait about it

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[Princess Peach Happy Easter!]

Haha nice

So this was another nice piece of beautiful artwork here you do some nice detail on this one the look on Mario and Luigi is classic at least I think that's them lol anyways nice job

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Make more Mario themed ones like this one

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[Beautiful Jessie]

Very nice

Wow this one was vibrant in color and the character has some nice structure here I really like the style on this one and love the red hair the shine was pretty good very nice drawing here once again keep making these beautiful designs I look forward to reviewing more of your drawings

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Nice drawing again no suggested ideas because this is pretty good art here

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[THE LOVELY ANGELS xx]

Very nice

These character look fresh and you have created some nice characters here do wish there was more backround to this though, You have something of good quality here, This was kind of Majestic and you bring some Diverse visuals, Great stuff here and nice style of art work here, its these kinds of pieces that really draw my attention and glad I came across this one

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More backround detail here

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AllyRat responds:

Thanks for such a detailed comment! I'm glad you like it and thought to left such kind words here! The little background was a bit of an afterthought, inspired by the title card at the end of the op for the dirty pair anime, where it shows their silhouettes over a space background so it is a bit empty ^ v ^''

I do have some more background heavy illustrations in my gallery if you're interested :D Again thank-you very much

[Raven and Starfire]

Fresh

So this was some "FRESH" looking art, I like the subtle colors in this one, It might have more of a nice effect with some fancy borders or frames on the edges, So that topps it off so as i do come to an almost close here, I will say keep up what you are doing because its a fun experience to see what you are presenting here, so nice job all around. but anyways keep up the nifty designs and nifty effort.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
It might have more of a nice effect with some fancy borders or frames on the edges

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[Mega Roll vs The Wilys]

Beautiful design

Very nice characters love that sparkle you should ad more of the sparkles its a nice touch, Quite enjoyable thats the words I would use to describe this piece, Its always great when your goal is met and seems like thats what you have done here, Not the most prefect of pieces but still found its place here in the portal. But anyways a good find here in the portal, and you keep this kind of work going its all a big plus.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
more nifty sparkles would be cool.

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[Leviosa]

Wow nice

This is one piece you need no changes what so ever, your style is amazing, at first it did look like "TRUMP" lol anyways nice character, A top notch piece of art if you ask me, a very well done piece of art, So keep up the fantastic art style and keep sharing with us your beautiful talent, I will for sure look forward to even more, because this is some nice work, but anyways before I go Just wanted to say I really enjoyed reviewing your work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
As mentioned no changes needed here

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[Alien boy]

Nice

So this was pretty "COOL" I like the flipping boards or "MAGIC-ELEMENTS", seems like there could have been slightly more animation and some "ADDED-EFFECTS" to make it more sparkle and such, but as it is now you have some nice character work here and a beautiful sight.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
seems like there could have been slightly more animation and some added effects to make it more sparkle

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[Christmas Ava]

Beautiful sight

This was a beautiful sight here, you have some "AMAZING-DETAIL" I did think some of the lighting could have more of a sparkle and "GLOW-ABOUT-THEM", I think this is creative for blending the styles of art and design, there is a lot in here This really captures the aspect of this piece It is very subtle but apparent at the idea and concept of this entry, A very acurate idea and design creation so your talent flows very well and love your ideas and think you will bring us even more in the days of tomarow, but anyways nice job here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I did think some of the lighting could have more of a sparkle and glow about them

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carlomontie responds:

Thanks for the constructive feedback! I was really struggling with the lighting and stuff. I was trying to get a little bit of a bokeh effect, but I don't think I'm experienced enough to pull it off. I'll practice at making backgrounds in the future! Thanks again. :)