XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Naked Eye]

Very deep

This was a very deep "PIECE" theres so much little elements that its so "DETAILED" on this one, the eyes had a nice glow wouldnt mind even more glow, the misty clouds was very impressive there seems to be almost a story here on this one, this will now be one of my faves, nice work indeed.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the eyes had a nice glow wouldnt mind even more glow

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[Kitty Gone Goofed]

Amazing

So this was very good work here I really love the "COLOR-USE" you have in this one, and you have a nice "ACTION-SCENE" in this aswell, great expression to represent the action, you have some beautiful work and no changes are needed on this piece here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes needed it was a brilliant piece very artsy

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Kilcra responds:

Thanks man, I appreciate it!

[Dorothy oc]

Beautiful

Very beautiful female character here, also love the smooth and "ELEGANT" colors and softness around it that sunlight was nice too I do think some more dominant sunlight should have fickled through the hair, and even sparkle off the blondness of it all, but this was a beautiful and elegant character.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some more dominant lighting with some more shine and sparkle.

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[Kirby (first digital illustration ever)]

A classic

So here you have a "CLASSIC-KIRBY" here, I love his simplistic form you have here, and love that backround effects here allthough some added shading on kirby himself wouldnt hurt and some added shine on top of his head, but for your first ever this was pretty inpressive work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some added shine and texture within the character would be nice.

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[Super Meat Boy FOREVER]

Great color

Well you cant go "WRONG" with some meat boy especially forever lol, really nice and fresh colors and design here, maybe adding some sort of sharp border on the edges would top this off, it was nice seeing meat boy once again here you are doing some nice work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe adding some sort of sharp border on the edges would top this off

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[Merula #1]

Nice character

So this was notbad very well designed and a nice pose with some revealing visuals a "PLUS" in my books, and the characters "EXPRESSION" was kind of nice, you have some nice detail here, seems like you could ad some sort of sunlight and sun beam in this and reflect off the character, besides all that this was a cool design.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some lighting effects like a sunlight or sun beam.

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[panopticon ii]

Love it

So this was pretty nice, I "ESPECIALLY" love the backround here with a city view and all the lights, seems like you could ad onto the lights with more sparkles and glares from the city lights, the character was decent the whole piece was nice work, hope you make more like this.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
you could ad onto the lights with more sparkles and glares from the city lights

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[Twoson encounter]

Cute

So this was a cute "PIECE" love what you did with the super "BLUE-EYES" maybe some added sparkle on the eyes would top this off, so nice effort indeed, This was Appropriately done well in a very symbolic way, now just keep it up on the rest of what you do, as I can see is fine so-far

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe some added sparkle on the eyes would top this off

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[Sugar Plum Fairy Mercy]

Nice

So here is the other version you have here, you have some nice style and this is the version without the backround, but I stilll like it and I found this piece to be pretty good, love the colors still and still think some shine and sparkle could be added, anyways good stuff.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some added shine and sparkle as mentioned.

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Roxaile responds:

in response to both of your comments, thank you! I feel like some added flair like sparkles would have definitely been a great way to take this piece further, and i'll be sure to keep that in mind next time i work on a piece like this. Thanks for the feedback!

[Sugar Plum Fairy Mercy]

Beautiful

So this was very "BEAUTIFUL" I really love the use of color and you have a "FANTASTIC" pose here with this one, the wings looked a tad small maybe that ws the intent, and maybe adding more shine to the wings would be a plus, regardless this was a nice character detailed pose.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
some added shine to the wings.

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