XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hi.]

Very nice

Some added backround on this would be cool, just something light and easy as to not take away from the main character here, Sharp darkened lines make for a "CARTOON-APPROACH" to this character, Although the color scheme is dark all around, each color is harmonious with the other, Their darkness does not affect the tone of the character either the bright facial expression as well as the "ENTHUSIASTIC-GREETING" supported by the exclamation point gives a friendly welcoming tone from the artist.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
backround on this would be cool, just something light and easy as to not take away from the main character here

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[Judai Yuki]

Very nice

So this was nice lots of great characters and no need for any major changes here especially since its a commision piece, a nice skill and you have shown this very well, keep up the nice work. and my final Overview of this is that you have some good quality here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
no need for any major changes here especially since its a commision piece

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bocodamondo responds:

i appreciate the review ^^

[Always]

Beautiful drawing

So this was a nice drawing here very beautiful love the dark and black and white theme here seems like you could ad some glowing or a soft dim lighted eyes or something like that overall this was welldone and some really nice detai within the characters themself.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Maybe some glowing eyes.

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silenceartwork responds:

thank you! Actually, the bird/skull character usually has glowing eyes, but when they stop glowing it generally means he's dead!

[Chibi Fursona]

Very nice

I like this its a nice "DRAWING" the backround could use some work maybe something subtle, since the character has a pencil some subtle drawings or linework as the backround could be a nice touch up on this, Dark thick lines that border the character makes for a proper emphasis against the white background, The character is stylized with several details from the "FURRY-TAIL" to the designs on the gloves and sneakers, "DETAILING-OF-THAT-KIND" creates depth for the character by hinting at his personality and interests, Facial expression along with the careful addition of the high obscuring jacket collar gives off a solemn mysterious tone "FROM-THE-ARTIST" through their character.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the backround could use some work maybe something subtle, since the character has a pencil some subtle drawings or linework as the backround could be a nice touch up on this

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[Spidersona]

Very nice

So great stuff here onlything I wish would change here was some added detail and color in the backround, overall this was amazing, the depth and style and it sure does take a lot of effort and thats what you you have shown here. So Finally I come to the end of this review. So always hard to end on a review never know what to say but you have a nice vision here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
onlything I wish would change here was some added detail and color in the backround, overall this was amazing

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[laying]

Beautiful drawing

I really love that "BLUE" colortone on this, the laying body formed out well with that blue, The woman’s body and surroundings are three-dimensional and soft-edged appearing blurred in certain aspects, The lines for the area she is lying on as well as along the design of her attire are thick, In spite of the thick "BLURRY-LINES" the detailing of "HER-FACE" is gentle enough to resemble that of a "REALISTIC" woman’s, Her fingers are just as detailed a natural indirect light source is washing over her Apparent in the white color over specific areas of her body, The presence of clouds makes it appropriate to assume that the light is coming from the sun.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Not sure I would want to change anything on this piece its elegant and nice as it is now.

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[Eyes]

Amazing

The eyes on this are just amazing you do some very nice work here, I dont see a need for nything to be chamged on this one,
you really pushed the envelope here and made something worth the search as I dont come across many perfect art pieces but this was pretty close so great job on this one And so you have shown me what you can realy do with this piece here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I dont see a need for nything to be chamged on this one

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[Katsushika Hokusai-Remake Wave]

Nice waves

So here was some nice waves, I feel like some sunlight could have played a more domminant role on this, A variety of thickness in the lines are visible for the level of "THICKNESS" goes according to the level of detail aimed for the specific area of the art piece the small features of the waves have thinner lines while the wave in itself has a slightly bolder, However none of the lines are light retaining a consistency in the "BOLDNESS" of the entire image, The brighter blue shade "ABOVE-THE-WAVES" does well in keeping the sky blue and water blue from molding together a distinction between the two is made thus bettering the clarity of the seascape.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I feel like some sunlight could have played a more domminant role on this

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[Pike Golfing]

Cute again

So heres that familuar character of yours that you present and she is a cute and adorble character, I would love to see an on going comic going with this character maybe you already have one in the works but regardless this was a nice fresh piece with some nice talent behind it.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
As mentioned above.

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HorseFolder responds:

I have a whole series of animated shorts with her on here, check 'em out.

[Pike's Lagoon Holiday Card]

Very nice

So here was a colorful cartoon you have here, it has some great looking characters and some nice use of color I think adding some added sparkle and shine on some thing smaybe the chrismas tree might be a nice touch up here, other then that this was some nice work you have here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some added sparkl and shine on the tree.

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