XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober 2016 day 3 'COLLECT']

Another nice one

This inktober is some really nice stuff here I really like all the detailed work the line work is most impressive and the visual of the imagination really comes out on this one and shows some nice work indeed so nice work indeed

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
It's an inktober so it's fine just the way you have it

~X~

[Krita|Photoshop| Heads | Cheat Brushes]

Amazing work

So this was really nice work here and some amazing work it is I like the style of the progress steps the depth and detail of it all is pretty amazing though you have some good work here and glad I could review it so nice job here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
This was fine as is if anything maybe some color on the head diagrams

~X~

[Inktober 2016 day 2 'NOISY']

Beautiful

Now this was some beautiful work here you have some very nice deep linework on this one the smooth lines is pretty nice and some smooth work I like the fact that this is done on paper gives it a nice visual effect here so nice job indeed

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Not sure I think it's fine as is

~X~

[Juri]

Cute charchter

So this here was another cute charchter you have the purplish elements and color are really nice I think some added detail in the background would be nice though you have some good style overall all though and I'm pretty impressed with the outcome here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Ad some background texture and detail

~X~

[Amalica OC Patreon Commission - Fayden]

Brilliant character

A brilliant character you have here you always do some amazing work dont see a need for any changes, An art piece that is realistically delivered in its mystical appearance, Everything from her hair to her clothing hint at a fantasy being creating an underlying story for viewers to interpret on their own as they look on, The variations of blue shades all complement the accompanying lavender as does the snow white hair, The latter in particular is a trait that stands out most giving further beauty to the look of her eyes No line work is necessarily evident for every aspect fills out on its own A lovely piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you always do some amazing work dont see a need for any changes

~X~

DidiEsmeralda responds:

Thank you Xwaynecoltx , I'm glad you like it

[Darth Homer]

Vader-Homer

A cool rendition of homer and vader here, you have some nice detail here seems like some added glow around the sabre would be nice, Stiff line work keeps up with the normal cartoony appearance of The Simpsons, The jutting gut and glass of beer also closely relate to the usual image of Homer Simpson which further emphasizes the humorous twist of the tone, Making the general crossover between a character like him, and Darth Vader is a purely genius move on behalf of the artist, Very strong contrasts that are made to blend nicely.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
seems like some added glow around the sabre would be nice

~X~

[Death wish logo]

Beautiful Pixel

Another nice pixel design the canvus seems like it could be bigger to show off more detail, It shines with some nice delightful elements, the pixel is never easy to design but it comes out well, you have some beautiful pixel, "I-LOVE-THE-DESIGN" and the visual just comes out so nice here "I-WAS-REALLY-IMPRESSED" with your view points of detail here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the canvus seems like it could be bigger to show off more detail

~X~

[snow]

A unique blend of Pixel-Art

So this was a nice and unique blend of pixel art work as the pixel has its own way of shining with nifty little tid bits here and there on this one, I really like the outcome of this all you have some really nice work on this one, the pixel shines with glory.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
More shines and glows would be nice

~X~

[Big Barda - Commission]

Nice structure

So this was some nice structure of the character, Not sure I would change anything on this one it is pretty solid work and a nice visual, A vertical layout allows for the entire image of the woman to be presented, In this case her masculine strength is visible which grants the viewers a full presentation of the author’s intended tone, The painting style also outlines her muscular figure while the anatomical aspect pertains to a realistically athletic build, Color of complexion and hair are also closer to real-life keeping this character away from a cartoon approach, An indirect light source is also executed nicely from the side nicely highlighting her figure, It adds further quality to the piece as a whole.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure I would change anything on this one it is pretty solid work and a nice visual

~X~

DidiEsmeralda responds:

Thank you XwaynecoltX, I'm glad you like it

[Elfy]

He carries alot

There’s a smooth mix of warm and cool colors that specifically being the gentle green and red of the background, Thin, yet bold line work distinguishes the figures from the central colors of the entire image allowing the heavy presence of the color scheme to run gracefully throughout, Dark shadows around the old man’s face along with the presence of a single eye generate an omniscient tone typically associated with older men, The city on his back accompanied by his hunched pose further emphasize this concept of a level of wisdom that could be overwhelming, A story is created by this image which makes it all the more interesting to view.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Very nice work here and with this one I dont see any changes needed you have done a fantastic job here.

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