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Big file but pretty entertaining.

So first off congrats on the awards thats always a nice gesture from the site, and its well rewarding especially when you make something like you have here, awards are cool and this flash was very well deserving. So this was a pretty good flash of works there was lots to see with this one, and some random and odd things going on but guess thats why i like it, it kept me interested and was overall pretty entertaining with some slight amusment in some areas and even more in others, So good flash entry here.So i was pretty amazed at how large the file was, that has to be one of the largest size was of a file i have seen here, guess thats why it took forever to load up and all, But once you get past the loading time it really is a good quality submission, I must say that the "VOICES" were pretty fantastic, the "HUMOR" however was abit on the dry side and could use for some more humor and more jokes and such, It was pretty good i like all the differant characters they had some good personality and made for a good film there was only a few issues that could be better.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And now we come to the end here well almost and what i took away from the experience here was that it was pretty interesting some stuff could be made better and have more entertaining value, but thats all explained later, but for the most of this i liked it, so good work here. And so we come to the improvments portion of the flash submission, wich is not always the easiest but i guess ill start with saying that it was a pretty solid flash, but could still use some adjustments and some small changes here and there, in some cases it may need more changes, so hope you will take some of these ideas to light. so with this one i thought it could use some more "HUMOR" and more funny jokes, while it was funny and amusing It could have been abit more on the funny side of things. And then there was the rather large file it was ok but took forever to load up and thats something you should think about in the future maybe some adjustments and some condencing of graphics here and there could help, these are just a few things that could help lower the file size, maybe even making it into more then one part or two, but just something to think about when it comes to size. So anyways just some helpfull tips on making things slightly better.

A fantastic start

I was pretty taken back with what you have started and presented here, there was alot to take in aswell, and it was a pretty nifty and very interesting flash entry you have submitted here, I am glad to have seen this and hope to see more and hope you keep making much more like this, The animation style on this was pretty interesting, and kind of differant but that was kind of neat and why i liked it even more, The whole 3d style is pretty good and you really have shown the detail and effort that comes along with this type of project, There was some good action in this, but most of all i was pretty amazed with the detail, You have even made some interesting "CHARACTERS" in this one, The animation could be better more smooth and more flowing. The story was abit on the short and could have used more depth to it. but anyways you have something pretty good there was just some minor fixes butother then that it was alright. one thing i forgot to say was "CONGRATS" on the awards its always nice to get those for some hardwork done.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well here we are at the end here or almost to the end of the review, and What i got from this experience of the flash was that it was an interesting one and you know what you are doing and you have put those forward with ease, some other things could be discussed and so on for improvments. So i have enjoyed what you put up here sofar, i did think you could have put more stuff more things that really grab a viewers attention, So here is the part where i suggest some advice and tips, and i hope you look into some of them, they will help maybe even inspre some new ideas, Make the animation more smooth more flowing, There could be more to the "STORY" though maybe lower the "FILE-SIze" somehow since it was rather large,

Strange but i still like it.

I will get this started by saying this was not awful infact it was pretty decent, it had some odd moments but had some decent moments aswell, but in the end it all made sense and made for an interesting flash here, so i like this submission even if it was somewhat differant. And so as the flash plays on this was keeping me interested there was actually alot going on with some interesting and nifty things happening, I was not too familuar with everything so was confused at first, but soon enough got use to it, so it was not that bad. The characters were interesting, some more use of "COLOR" would be nice, It did seem to lack some "ACTION" maybe thats something you can work more on later, There was some ok jokes but i thought that some of the jokes and humor in this could have been better and more direct and too the point it would make it more funny. And well there you have it, it was an alright flash could have some adjustments but thats for later, but for the mostpart this was still an interesting and somewhat entertaining submission, there are a few more suggestions but thats for later aswell, anyways good job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And well for some improvments or fixes as some say, i dont know with this one, there are a few things i noticed thatcould be better, so ill do my best to suggest some positive suggestions, so look into them and try and make this even better then you already have, This flash Lacked action so maybe some scenes with more action going on, This could use some better jokes and humor, regardless good luck.

Something kind of basic

You have something good here, its interesting and has some appeal to it, and i found it somewhat entertaining,later i may suggest a few ideas that could excell this even further so keep that in mind, but you do have something good here, A basic dress-up game you have here, it was ok and the artwork on the clothing was pretty good nice shades and good amount of detail, the items and clothing options were very limited though, This just seemed too simple and needed more depth the art and grpahics was good but that was probably the best part as there was not much "CREATIVITY" on this submission, maybe with a few adjustments it can be better though, it was alright though, just abit basic. So as i come to the end of this review, there was some ups and downs about this and there is some room to improve, but i will get to that shortly, but anyways you do have something of interest here and i do lookforward to more of what you have in store for us,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I have some improvments and i hope they will help abit, i will suggest some advice and ideas, but i really do hope you find the time to clean up and work on some of these ideas they will help to improve on your concept and work here, These games cant have much interactivity and even creativity, but with more items, more random props they can be much more creative and by making that extra effort you can push that forward at the same time making a much better quality of a game. These dress-up games need more stuff and one of those is that they could use some backrounds and thats something you really didng have with this one, so add some backrounds or something that allows the player of the game to switch between backrounds. Something new besides just the basics would be nice

Decent dress-up game here

I am very entertained with your submission, you bring some new and old stuff but in a way it all seems to work out, I was excited to see some things that were nifty and what not and those are the types of things that make tings kinda differant but that seems to work aswell. The music was realnice and set a good tone for a decent game, the graphics were notbad, you shoiwed some nice detail and nice effort all around so nice efforts there, The "NAVIGATION" was something to be desired, but the game was actually fun and i got a good kick out of it all, the music was really something that kept it goping as everythng else could have used more items even some backrounds, but other then that it was an alright game. And so i have come close to the conclusion here on this submission, I have liked what you made here today, you have some interesting and entertaining ideas that went on here and i was generally pleased with the outcome. of things.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And here we have another decent game something that could ofcourse be improved on with some small changes and some possible clean up here and there, so this is something you can push in the next submission or upgrade on this one. A backround changer would be nice for the backrounds adding more items would be a plus, You have a good game here but in the end there was just too few items and needed more stuff and even effects.

Decent I really love these types of game submissions, while thy dont get the recognition they deserve, but they are interesing and unique in there own way and do deserve some extra points, now thats ofcourse if you put in the effort, but as for this one, Dress ups are always fun and its nice to see some different styles and i have seen my share of some differant styles, and this one is kind of new so thats cool and different i thought, the "BUTTONS" were too tricky, maybe it was because it was so close together and it was just odd on how they worked, Everything seemed "CLUTTERED" everything was just too close together, so maybe spreading stuff around, maybe a larger "CANVUS" is needed, anyways decent game here. So as explained there were some points that could be better, but i will get to thatsometime later in the review, for the mostpart this was still an alright entry, now ofcourse it could use some extra stuff and a tad more effort, but that will come in time,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You can never stop improving on things, as some submissions can be greatly improved with all sorts of changes and fixes, so i do hope you clean up a few things and add some changes as i have suggested here are some possible changes that will make it somewhat better, buttons need some reworking they seemed tricky and hard to play, it seems maybe because they are too close togethet and you never know whats being added and clicked. I think this type of game could use alarger canvus or screensize the one you did have was not that big, but with a larger one you can add more stuff, and you can add more stuff with more detail and quality, so thats something to think about when making these types and styles of games. Everything seemed cluttererd so maybe by adding a larger canvus as mentioned will help.

So this was an alright entry here, kinda neat the way it starts off and such, not what i had expected at first but still pretty interesting. there may be a few things you could change but thats for later. This starts off pretty decent i thought, and you even change it up somewhat, i like the build up it does have. this seems pretty nifty and i can see it being used in a lot of different situations. And here i am at the ending of this review but not before i mention that i liked your effort here and liked the kind of vibe this gave off, and hope you make more stuff like this in the near future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
OK so first of all before i get to some improvments, i did like this and was a good piece, maybe you can improve on this though, i have a few suggestions and hope you think on a few even one as they should and will help for the overall improvment of things. So you had some nice build up in this one, maybe somewhere you can build the build up even stronger, since i felt it was not enough.

Wow very nice

OK so as i start out this review it was pretty interesting, it had some ups and downs, but mostly some positive points, and i like the style and direction you took with this one. This really reminded me of a mario type of game tune of some sort, had a mario bros feel and sound and was pretty cool sounding so nice job there. so this was a unique piece i thought. i can see why this is popular so anyways nice job. A fun and entertaining piece here it was not perfect at all, but was actually pretty nifty. could use some extras but i will get to that later.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This could be slightly better allthough it was already it was pretty good, now there are some things that could make it better though, here are some thoughts on how to improve on things. This could have even more depth to it maybe more backround sounds and so-on, more mario theme like sounds since thats what

Interesting

ok while this was not exactly what i normally listen too i still found this one to be kind of interesting, it was different though, but i really like it and it can be even better if you ask me. OK so this was different but this was kinda neat there could be some work done with a more clear sound effect in there, but i think you have it down for the mostpart, the guitar was pretty good aswell. I like different and unique stuff like this one and you really went for the different, so thats what kept me interested here in this one, so as i end this review keep up the interesting creativity.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so here in this little area is where i try and make some helpfull suggestions, i believe you had this down for the mostpart but i have some other options aswell, not much but here you go. Some more training of the voice might help to improve on this but you really have it down, and its just a matter of time before you really get it down.

So art is a tricky thing but i like what you have here as it was pretty nifty and interesting in its own kind of way so i was glad to have the opertunity to get some words down for a review on this one. This was something odd and unique, o good creation at work and great use of creativity with this one, i think it could use a few lighting maybe on the eyes and such but other then that this was pretty good. Alright this indeed was something unique, didnt expect it at first but was pretty inpresive and has a unique touch and feel for that matter, i like your direction with this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so after viewing this art piece a bit it was notbad but i think i may have a suggestion or two that could improve on it or atleast touch it up in some points so give some ideas a shot and here is what i thought up. Adding some slight lighting like with the eyebals would be a plus.

A creative piece

And here is a unique piece, I like the creative build behind this with some good style behind it, a unique piece indeed, and as i start this review i was glad to have had a chance to review it. As always i am a fan of your work, and this was one of the reasons why i like your stuff, always so unique and different with some good creative styles as you have done here, maybe throw some stuff in the backround with this one, some other random things would be nifty. And now as i end this review it is with great pleasure to see your work and see how much it progresses thru and thru, so keep up the good work and keep up the creative artworks such as this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so here i go again looking for ways and options to suggest to you some positive ideas and points that could improve on this one, And i may have a few ideas that could work, so think about these ones. Adding some extras in the backround, like random creature and such would be one ideas.

Interesting

A good piece of art here, it has some nice elements about this, allthough i could see it improving but i will touch on that later, but you do have some nice style here on this piece. This reminds me alot like Grand theft auto art like from the vice city seriesm this one was really working with the light and darkness, maybe in the backround you could have some sorty of smokey backround for that mystery that might come from the backround, and i wouldnt mind more lighted glow on the cig, but overall a good piece here. So how to end this with a decent piece you have here you have shown the effort the style and the detail, and it all shows in your finished product, hope to see more from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now this here is, just an improvment area but seems like you know what your doing but i suppose if i have anything to suggest it will be below, but like i said you might not need much at all with this one. So as suggested some smokey like element in the backround the rest is all good to be honest its nice work.