Very nice
I have to say I found this one unique, I was going to suggest subtitles but seems like you had jumped in on that later on, maybe fancy up the box behind the subtitles though, You have some nice characters and voice work is notbad, I do love the randomness of this whole piece, You hit all the great moments with this film And This has a great idea behind it maybe even a cutting edge feel about it, This is a decent concept and you should keep up with that and you have cleverly used some nice effects and elements to make this a good submission.
A fantastic flick you have created here, so from the get-go I really thought this was good, and I was unexpectedly taken back with how good it really was, so that for sure shows your effort and time put into this, Well so its not all the time you see movie works like this especially in a movie form so I was actually suprised with how you presented this nice energy here, I hope you continue on and keep adding comical elements like the guns and kicking of the ball that was all a big plus on things, anyways great film indeed.
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