XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[frankenhozen]

(( NOTBAD ANIMATION ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was not a bad animation, i really like it for its storyline, it kept me interested and wanting more, you should think about making more to this, but do work on making the flash size abit smaller as it was slightly large, anyways nice animation.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Cut the file size down somewhat, and make more episodes if you like.

~~OVERALL~~
Neat story, decent animation, keep up the good work.

~X~

[Drawn Dream 4]

(( NICE WORK ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat i plan to see the others, which i should have done, but anyways this was awsome with a neat story base and good animation and some decent artwork, i really liked this, cant wait to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just abit of compression.

~~OVERALL~~
Good storybase aswell as some nice animation, nice work.

~X~

[Textual Adventures]

(( NEAT IDEA ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was a neat idea with the whole "TEXT" as characters, i also like how you had some decent backrounds aswell, this is the sorta flash i wouldnt mind seeing more of like in a series, anyways nice idea and flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe more characters like other types with numbers and such.

~~OVERALL~~
A neat flash with a neat idea behind it.

~X~

Frenzy responds:

Ha ha, maybe I will make this into a series!

Thanks!

.frenZy.

[B Ball]

(( NICE ARTWORK ))

~~REVIEW~~
Great animation, and awsome work on the character, the cartoon was notbad either very funny and i really liked the artwork, allthough i wish there was some backrounds with more of the mystery voice heh.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backrounds besides just white.

~~OVERALL~~
Great animation, awsome characters and great voices, nice work on this.

~X~

[A Side Of Stupidity]

(( DECENT ARTWORK ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was abit short, but i found it to be funny and entertaining, the character work was neat, nicee depth and detail, especialy the one guys har hehe, but as for the flash it had some good humor to it, but i thought it should be abit longer, anyways nice job, keep up the
decent flash work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and add some more humor and funny jokes.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and entertaining with decent humor.

~X~

[Star Wars: Lost Scene]

(( GREAT ANIMATION ))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL this was awsome i had fun watching it, you may want to add some "SUBTITLES" and turn up the volume, but other then that it was just perfect, nice job, anyways nice artwork, nice character design.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More characters would be nice. Add more scenes besides just the one or even two the flash had, kinda show the world you have created in the flash it will give the flash more depth, and keep it interesting. Voices are decent but Why not add some "SUBTITLES" just because it
will improve on the flash and like in "DVD" movies you see them, and would just make it better because of people sometimes not always hearing everything clearly.

~~OVERALL~~
Very funny scene, great character work aswell, nice job peoples.

~X~

[Just Another Day...]

(( SHORT BUT FUNNY ))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL this was funny and the art had a smooth look to it, but the animation was abit short, i felt if it was abit longer it could be much more, and some more scenes aswell, anyways nice and funny.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things you could do to make this more entertaining and more quality to it, , More humor, some more funny jokes here and there, some visual humor such as rolling eyes and so on. Since it was so "SHORT" I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add
more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
Short but entertaining.

~X~

[Chibis of the Caribbean]

(( LOL I LOVE IT ))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was funny, i love it, i do think it was much less then 30 seconds though, you should actually make it into a full version, it would make for an impressive animation, anyways nice art and enat animation, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make a full version.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny movie parody some decent art and it was funny bice job.

~X~

[BNTSG ( The Musical)]

(( LOL FUNNY ))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL this was funny , gave me a few laughs here and there, the song really flowed well with the funny images hehe, the locks are interesting and this flash was entertaining, nice animation.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lock characters would be nice.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and entertaining lock flash.

~X~