XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Star Wars: Lost Scene]

(( GREAT ANIMATION ))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL this was awsome i had fun watching it, you may want to add some "SUBTITLES" and turn up the volume, but other then that it was just perfect, nice job, anyways nice artwork, nice character design.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More characters would be nice. Add more scenes besides just the one or even two the flash had, kinda show the world you have created in the flash it will give the flash more depth, and keep it interesting. Voices are decent but Why not add some "SUBTITLES" just because it
will improve on the flash and like in "DVD" movies you see them, and would just make it better because of people sometimes not always hearing everything clearly.

~~OVERALL~~
Very funny scene, great character work aswell, nice job peoples.

~X~

[Just Another Day...]

(( SHORT BUT FUNNY ))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL this was funny and the art had a smooth look to it, but the animation was abit short, i felt if it was abit longer it could be much more, and some more scenes aswell, anyways nice and funny.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things you could do to make this more entertaining and more quality to it, , More humor, some more funny jokes here and there, some visual humor such as rolling eyes and so on. Since it was so "SHORT" I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add
more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
Short but entertaining.

~X~

[Chibis of the Caribbean]

(( LOL I LOVE IT ))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was funny, i love it, i do think it was much less then 30 seconds though, you should actually make it into a full version, it would make for an impressive animation, anyways nice art and enat animation, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make a full version.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny movie parody some decent art and it was funny bice job.

~X~

[BNTSG ( The Musical)]

(( LOL FUNNY ))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL this was funny , gave me a few laughs here and there, the song really flowed well with the funny images hehe, the locks are interesting and this flash was entertaining, nice animation.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lock characters would be nice.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and entertaining lock flash.

~X~

[Animal Friends Episode 1]

(( LOL FUNNY ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny, made me laugh abit, the rabbit was nice art work, not so when he is bloody hehe, the little short was abit confusing like why did he go on the ride when he saw it so messed up, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe make it abit longer.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny short cute rabbit.

~X~

Tastyrat responds:

thanks

[CG vs Clone]

(( I LIKED IT ))

~~REVIEW~~
I liked it it was interesting and kept watching from the start to the end so notbad on this one, it was abit large in file size so thats something you may want to work on., other then that it was a neat animation, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lower the size, it was just way to big, especialy since i and many others have 56k, its a proven study that 50% of net users still use dial-up so just think about that when making a flash next time...

~~OVERALL~~
Interesting flash lots of neat stuf fin this one, kep up the good work.

~X~

SuperFakeFilms responds:

yeah, this is an older one and I didn't stream the audio, thus large file size, I've gotten better and soon there be a Chop Suey one, that actually will have most of the charaters and enemies and show some of the actual plot, but it's taking a while.

and thanks for all the honest style, and well formatted(formamulated? formation? whatever) reveiws intsead of the typical "that's cool" or "that's dumb" that alot of people do.

Post script: What's a "stuf fin"? ha ha, I joke.

[Break in and your fired 5]

(( ENTERTAINING ))

~~REVIEW~~
LOL this was funny, the donald character was right on hehe, as for the gas prices thats really nothing to do with bush, but this animation was funny, nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and reduce the filesize as much as you can.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny animation neat characters like there counterparts, nice job.

~X~

[CC - Mozilla Ep. 1]

(( DECENT ))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok well after seeing the second and now this i actually like teh artwork in this one esoecialy the starting but this one does end short it did make me laugh it did make me laugh though, so nice job on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it abit longer, more jokes would be fine aswell.

~~OVERALL~~
The first of the series decent animation could have more content though.

~X~

FattyWhale responds:

This was really my first full movie, and I was having lots of problems seems on everything, so I just got frustrated and ended it.

[Puppy Love]

(( LOL ))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was interesting the puppy sad hehe, it was funny though, and actually made good for a decent little flash nice work on this, maybe there will be another soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress it as much as you can

~~OVERALL~~
A cute and sad animation nice work.

~X~