XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dancing Stick Figures]

(( Cute and entertaining ))

~~REVIEW~~
An entertaining stick animation, it looped so you may want to add a stop action code or something, also think on adding some color and flashy effects, anyways cute and short animation.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add a stop action code aswell as some more work on the animation itself, some color and effects.

~~OVERALL~~
Cute sticks but the flash needs more to iit.

~X~

[Retards with guns]

(( Not a bad idea here ))

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad on this had a good idea behind it and on top of that it was funny, even made me chuckle abit, you could work on adding some more detail and more effects all around, but overall it was entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest some compression as it was somewhat large.

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining nice idea for a flash.

~X~

[Now It's Done]

(( Needs Compression ))

~~REVIEW~~
I thought this was notbad, it does need some compression and was probably due to the song it could be compressed better to better fit for the viewers and more people to view it, the song was good though, and you need to fix up the graphics and add detail maybe some flashy effects to make it stand out.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some compression of the file probably the song.

~~OVERALL~~
A large file but had a good song.

~X~

[The Chrysalids - Chap 13]

(( Lol silly ))

~~REVIEW~~
Lol this was silly, but i found it to be somewhat entertaining and whatnot, the "CHARACTERS" were decent the animation could have benn better with the mouths though, besides that i enjoyed this animation.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improved animation with the voices and mouths.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny flash cute characters.

~X~

[Strange Sequence 2]

(( Lol it was strange ))

~~REVIEW~~
Yes strange but had some funny humor to it, also the characters and setting was notbad could use more effort in a longer animation and different senes but besides that i found it to be very funny.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more scenes with more animation to it.

~~OVERALL~~
A cute and amusing animation somewhat strange though.

~X~

[3some : Yenig-DDS-Jack]

(( Nice animation and good music ))

~~REVIEW~~
Very nice animation with some matching music that flowed perfectly with thw animation, and the character and artwork reminded me that of some artistic style which i liked, a well rounded flash indeed, very nice job on this one, hope to see more like this one sometime.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing i found this one to be perfect.

~~OVERALL~~
A funny, artistic and perfect animation if ever i saw one, nice job.

~X~

[Fathers Day!!!]

(( Voices could be improved ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was actually a good flash i especialy like that player at the buttom it was verys leek looking, and gave the flash more style, as for the clay it was notbad, and the "VOICES" were ok but could be improved to sound more like there characters, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some improved voices aswell as some subtitles judt for the improving of the flash.

~~OVERALL~~
a decent clay flash with a nice design and neat idea to it.

~X~

[Thinkcomix Dead n Alive2]

(( Awsome style ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad at all, infact i love the style. especialy the whole comic style, and you presented some very nice artwork with really good detail to the characters, the ending was ouch hehe but i found it entertaining, so nice job on this i hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more "BOXES" so its abit longer.

~~OVERALL~~
A funny comic with a nifty comis style of animation, and a very funny ending.

~X~

[The Sun Project]

(( lol ))

~~REVIEW~~
Lol this was funny and had abit of info to go with, you should improve on the characters and backround abit with more refined looking characters and more detail in the backrounds.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More effort on the detail such as backrounds and some character work.

~~OVERALL~~
The sun, kinda funny and with abit of info.

~X~